Shadøwlurker
Newbie
- Oct 26, 2019
- 86
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Great game with very good renderers so far. Hope you keep up the great work so we will have plenty of enjoyable updates.
Loving the story with Tessa so far and hope to see more interactions with her. And of course waiting for more content with Anitta. Hopefully we will be able to romancing her.
The only change I would like to suggest is to rewrite some minor parts of certain text: Reding sentences like "blonde's voice" "tall blonde" (refering to Iris) breaks the immersion for me. As you already know the girls you could address the girls by their name or an appropiate pronoun. There a few occasions while being with Tessa and Ginny too. Example: "At a same time, blonde's voluptuous nurse-bot finally appears." As you have previously talked to Iris, "At the same time, her voluptuous nurse-bot finally appears" sounds much better.
Loving the story with Tessa so far and hope to see more interactions with her. And of course waiting for more content with Anitta. Hopefully we will be able to romancing her.
The only change I would like to suggest is to rewrite some minor parts of certain text: Reding sentences like "blonde's voice" "tall blonde" (refering to Iris) breaks the immersion for me. As you already know the girls you could address the girls by their name or an appropiate pronoun. There a few occasions while being with Tessa and Ginny too. Example: "At a same time, blonde's voluptuous nurse-bot finally appears." As you have previously talked to Iris, "At the same time, her voluptuous nurse-bot finally appears" sounds much better.
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