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VN Ren'Py Abandoned State of Mind [Ep. 3] [Korentin]

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LordSinner

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I'm not a fan of forced sex either and intend to stay away from it.

I'm curious why you say there is any with the spirit in this case though? She won't touch you unless you agree to it.
I may have misunderstood that scene. I played it after a 18 hour shift and was trying to wind down before getting some sleep. I will play again later and see if what I'm remembering is right. I have a feeling it is not.
 

LordSinner

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I did a quick replay and I did indeed misunderstand that scene, my apologies for jumping to conclusions before being certain. Though I did notice something I skipped all sex scenes to make the run shorter and when I got to the first scene with Eir there was only the choice to threaten her, is this intended or a bug?
 
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Korentin

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I did a quick replay and I did indeed misunderstand that scene, my apologies for jumping to conclusions before being certain. Though I did notice something I skipped all sex scenes to make the run shorter and when I got to the first scene with Eir there was only the choice to threaten her, is this intended or a bug?
You can get up to 4 choices on how to talk to her, they depend on four different variables from how you've behaved up until then. Three of them depend mostly on what questions you've asked while the fourth one is connected to how you've reacted and acted in certain situations (and yes, saying yes to sex or other more intimate acts are among them).

So no, not a bug :)

I should add that while in the particular case of the Eir meeting the choices you've made (in that run) will make it sound like you pose a threat to her, it does not mean that threatening people will always be the case with those choices.
 
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Korentin

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Wow! Thank you! I feel important hahaha

The game was amazing! Love the story so far and the renders are awesome! Even when Im just here because of the hunk MC.

Keep up with the good work and thank you again!
Thanks for trying it out :)
 
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Wrynetrues

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I really like the vibe of this game so far, the worlbuilding feels really good and interessting. Charackters behave different from one another so its not just a one dimensional mess, which is also really good. like it
 

Korentin

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Thank you to everyone for playing and commenting. It's been good to get some feedback on the episodes.

Episode 4 is called The debrief. I'll let you figure out why for yourself.

As seen in the previews at the end of episode 3, the courier will reconnect with, among others, Mira and Sanije.

Progress is good, although everything started to slow down somewhat when I got to the place in a scene where posing got a bit more complicated.

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Take care, everyone!
 

somebodynobody

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Thank you to everyone for playing and commenting. It's been good to get some feedback on the episodes.

Episode 4 is called The debrief. I'll let you figure out why for yourself.

As seen in the previews at the end of episode 3, the courier will reconnect with, among others, Mira and Sanije.

Progress is good, although everything started to slow down somewhat when I got to the place in a scene where posing got a bit more complicated.

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Take care, everyone!
My guess is... he removes his underwear...again....... I'll see myself out.
 
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PinkGoddess

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How long are each chapter? looks so interesting but im afraid that the currently update be too short :(
 

Korentin

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How long are each chapter? looks so interesting but im afraid that the currently update be too short :(
Each released episode (1-3) is roughly 30 minutes when using auto-play on default settings, but can be less depending on your choices.
 

Bagger288

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Nice game so far, I'm just a little unsure of how many significantly different routes the various decisions lead to (2? 6?).
The story is clearly fantasy but for some reason reminds me more of science fiction, and has enough novelty to it to captivate.

The scenes are a little too dark. While it suits the mood, they don't play nice with compression or screen glare.
I'd like to see a few more establishing shots in scenes with people - for example, in one path we never really see Waingro's face, which annoyed me, and in several scenes clothing is shed or commented on without being shown, which confused me.
I think I noticed one typo - "discrete" instead of "discreet".
 
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Korentin

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So I'm going to be that guy.

I'm canceling/abandoning this project.

My lack of experience in developing has led me to add characters and events too carelessly, leading to a different story from what I originally intended. Now, some of this I expected. But I've strayed way too far from my original idea.

Sorry if you feel like you've wasted your time on this little project of mine, I hope you at least got some enjoyment out of it.

Hopefully, I can do better in the future.

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Mortimer

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Thanks for making the game. Sad to see it go. At least you didn't Game-of-Thrones-it and wrote an ending that didn't fit where your characters are :-D Hope to see from you again!
 

Sulring Durgul

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Wow! If the story got away from what you intended by the third update, it's probably better to pull the plug on the project.
If I may offer some advice for your next project, try to have the story laid out and already divided in chapters before starting development. That way, you keep the story going, even if you change minor scenes along the way.
Good luck!
 

somebodynobody

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It's okay.

Being in no way could we the player know your original idea, especially since so much of it is unexplained.

However for your future games, try to plan them out ahead of time and keep yourself from adding unnecessary fluff.

If you can, write it out fully ahead of time, make notes of what you want the scene images to look like, or camera angles.

Once you finish, give a day and read through it, see if things make sense to someone who has no understanding of the world, then start making your images, or storyboarding, then finally put it all in the game wrapper of whatever engine you want with whatever mechanics you want.
 
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