VN Ren'Py Completed Stay Online [v1.0] [LadyLana]

[KingsRaiden]

Agreed that the "general criticism" was not a post that fit the thread and what was being said here, but continuing on it will force the Mods to come in and clean up the thread. Let it drop and enjoy this well-done game.

 

[agent2gamer]

So no one's going to share the latest update after a week passed? I guess heros are taking leaving this time around. hehe

 

[Tinez82]

The update should be out tomorrow at some point

 

[TonyMurray]

So no one's going to share the latest update after a week passed? I guess heros are taking leaving this time around. hehe

The dev puts out a public release about a week after the Patreon release. We're now (today, not yesterday, when you posted) a week from release, so it should be any time now, theoretically.

 

[LadyLana]

Public release of the game for those who are interested

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Have a great weekend

 

[packard1928]

THank you !

 

[drakov]

Public release of the game for those who are interested

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Have a great weekend

Thank you !!! Have a great weekend !!!

 

[TonyMurray]

I enjoyed that update, even if it's given me another branching point to have saves for!

 

[KingsRaiden]

Public release of the game for those who are interested

WIN
Mac
Android

Have a great weekend

Thank you for sharing the great game.

 

[wolfling11]

Okay Lana fumbled the bag now it's a disappointing update(atleast for me)

 

[packard1928]

I don't think so... This game progresses slowly... next one with a poss 3some will be interesting.

 

[TonyMurray]

I don't think so... This game progresses slowly... next one with a poss 3some will be interesting.

"Possible" only referring to your choices/the path you're on. It's definite on the appropriate path, unless something ridiculous happens now to stop it, which it shouldn't.

I'm interested to see what we're going to get on the "cheating" path, for what it still is. What makes it special?

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[Cockva]

These very low quality animations make this game worse

 

[TonyMurray]

These very low quality animations make this game worse

Taken in context, I think they're absolutely fine. If they were in a full non-phone game where every frame is rendered in Daz as opposed to just a few images per update, then maybe I'd be unhappy with them, but that's not what this game is.

 

[Filipis]

"Possible" only referring to your choices/the path you're on. It's definite on the appropriate path, unless something ridiculous happens now to stop it, which it shouldn't.

I'm interested to see what we're going to get on the "cheating" path, for what it still is. What makes it special?

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In any case, yet another update where the dialogue does not reflect a cheating path at all.
Is it bad if the coolest scene in the update was Julia lying in bed, and warning Marcus (off-screen, his penis just entering the camera) to stay away so that MC doesn't see him? (Chef's kiss scene, btw) But the sex scene with Jacob was just wrong. No build-up whatsoever beyond the "he's looking at me like a starving hyena", and especially incongruent with Julia who agreed she will shut his advances down just a few lines before... I don't know about you guys, but Julia did not seem that attracted to Jacob at all, not enough for a full-on sex scene between them just yet.

The rest of the dialogue between Julia and MC is just too happy-go-lucky for someone who regularly witnesses his wife cheating on him. I understand the deadline for these updates is tight, but I truly do believe more custom dialogue for NTR path would go a long way.

All in all, the hottest scene by far was the early morning scene where Marcus almost crashes the party, and the panic on Julia's face was peak NTR. I can't speak for the Cuck/Sharing path (I see some cool scenes of sharing in that path from the game files), but the NTR path really feels tacked on, like the dev decided to add it last minute for some reason.

Overall, a 6/10 update, since Marcus was largely absent on the NTR path - this actually might be the first NTR game where I prefer a non-black bull for the wife, as the Marcus has more development with Julia, and cheating should be a more intimate affair (Julia jumping into sex with Jacob was simply the wrong move, at least on the NTR path).

 

[TonyMurray]

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In any case, yet another update where the dialogue does not reflect a cheating path at all.
Is it bad if the coolest scene in the update was Julia lying in bed, and warning Marcus (off-screen, his penis just entering the camera) to stay away so that MC doesn't see him? (Chef's kiss scene, btw) But the sex scene with Jacob was just wrong. No build-up whatsoever beyond the "he's looking at me like a starving hyena", and especially incongruent with Julia who agreed she will shut his advances down just a few lines before... I don't know about you guys, but Julia did not seem that attracted to Jacob at all, not enough for a full-on sex scene between them just yet.

The rest of the dialogue between Julia and MC is just too happy-go-lucky for someone who regularly witnesses his wife cheating on him. I understand the deadline for these updates is tight, but I truly do believe more custom dialogue for NTR path would go a long way.

All in all, the hottest scene by far was the early morning scene where Marcus almost crashes the party, and the panic on Julia's face was peak NTR. I can't speak for the Cuck/Sharing path (I see some cool scenes of sharing in that path from the game files), but the NTR path really feels tacked on, like the dev decided to add it last minute for some reason.

Overall, a 6/10 update, since Marcus was largely absent on the NTR path - this actually might be the first NTR game where I prefer a non-black bull for the wife, as the Marcus has more development with Julia, and cheating should be a more intimate affair (Julia jumping into sex with Jacob was simply the wrong move, at least on the NTR path).

I agree with the large part of this, although that's the whole point on the "cheating" path. There's no longer any viable way to still call it a cheating path, because it's clear that he's seen it all happening. That's why I was thinking maybe the message from Markus could maybe indicate an end to that path. Without the dialogue to tell us why Patrick isn't calling it out, that path is a bit of an anomaly.

On the loyal or cheating path, the dialogue around Jacob is just odd - there was one bit where Patrick said to tell Jacob he had no chance with her, which was a bit weird because it made it sounds like that could potentially be an option. On those paths, it should be "tell him to stop it, you're married and he's making you uncomfortable."

The Jacob sex scene was too sudden, I agree. Fully expected, but too sudden - though on the cuck/sharing paths it does give an interesting development for the next update.

 

[Filipis]

I agree with the large part of this, although that's the whole point on the "cheating" path. There's no longer any viable way to still call it a cheating path, because it's clear that he's seen it all happening. That's why I was thinking maybe the message from Markus could maybe indicate an end to that path. Without the dialogue to tell us why Patrick isn't calling it out, that path is a bit of an anomaly.

Without any reaction from MC, the whole NTR path loses immersion. And it's going to be reflected in my review of the game.

On the loyal or cheating path, the dialogue around Jacob is just odd - there was one bit where Patrick said to tell Jacob he had no chance with her, which was a bit weird because it made it sounds like that could potentially be an option. On those paths, it should be "tell him to stop it, you're married and he's making you uncomfortable."

I'm pretty sure the dialogue does exactly that: MC tells Julia - after she expresses how uncomfortable she is with Jacob's gaze - that she shut him down. Which somehow turns into sex? The whole thing with Jacob is a mess.

My guess is, this is one of those scenes that make sense on the sharing path, but "break" the Cheating path because the dev still includes them for (content?) reasons...

In fact, I'm pretty sure there are no choices to be made on the NTR path - is it the same on Cuck/Sharing path?

Not a very good update at all...

 

[TonyMurray]

Without any reaction from MC, the whole NTR path loses immersion. And it's going to be reflected in my review of the game.

I'm pretty sure the dialogue does exactly that: MC tells Julia - after she expresses how uncomfortable she is with Jacob's gaze - that she shut him down. Which somehow turns into sex? The whole thing with Jacob is a mess.

My guess is, this is one of those scenes that make sense on the sharing path, but "break" the Cheating path because the dev still includes them for (content?) reasons...

In fact, I'm pretty sure there are no choices to be made on the NTR path - is it the same on Cuck/Sharing path?

Not a very good update at all...

I think it makes sense on the cheating path, because of course she's going to tell Patrick that she's shutting down Jacob's flirting - on the cuck/sharing paths, she does comment on it still, but she says that it's flattering having the attention of two men who she is attracted to, stuff like that.

What's left of the cheating path isn't the same as the cuck/sharing path. If you confronted Julia about the cheating but said that you liked it, then yes, it's now the same. If you chose (for whatever reason) not to confront her, then it's mostly the same as the loyal path in terms of the dialogue and choices (it's just that Julia doesn't necessarily listen and doesn't always do what she says she'll do, or will lie about what she did do, as you'd expect from a cheating path).

 

[StrawberryCheese83]

Again..and as always....even the "faithful Path" doesn t reflect in the Dialogue and in Julia`s "actions"..... Maybe i should really start trying to make my own Phone Game... I mean...people doesn t behave like this...if they are in love with eachother...! Between Patrick and Julia...there is almost no respect (from Julia`s side) for their marriage... She s always being touched from Markus or this other douchebag (Jacob??...forgot his name)...and Patrick doesn t say anything (ladylana gave no options to intervene)...he s always chill ...no matter what wifey did... What a broken relationsship. (at least on my Gamepath)..! I really wish LL would at least rework the Dialogue (and kill some unneccesary Scenes) on some Gamepaths. I am not feeling a bond between MC and Wifey (on the faithful Path)....thats sad...

 

[Filipis]

I think it makes sense on the cheating path, because of course she's going to tell Patrick that she's shutting down Jacob's flirting - on the cuck/sharing paths, she does comment on it still, but she says that it's flattering having the attention of two men who she is attracted to, stuff like that.

What's left of the cheating path isn't the same as the cuck/sharing path. If you confronted Julia about the cheating but said that you liked it, then yes, it's now the same. If you chose (for whatever reason) not to confront her, then it's mostly the same as the loyal path in terms of the dialogue and choices (it's just that Julia doesn't necessarily listen and doesn't always do what she says she'll do, or will lie about what she did do, as you'd expect from a cheating path).

No, it really doesn't. You yourself said that the dialogue on the NTR path is identical to the loyal path - that should absolutely not be the case, at least not in such large measure.

I can see how Julia would lie to MC about shutting down Jacob, but her dialogue suggests she doesn't want Jacob's attention at all. Seems the sex scene is better setup on the NTS path, but it could've been the same on the NTR path - I don't know why she omitted those lines from here. It just comes across a bit rapey from Jacob without them.