Thoughts on the latest
Leaving DNA? I think it was a brilliant episode!
You won't be surprised to hear that I agree entirely: it is a fantastic, adult, story-first game... the polar opposite of a porn game.
The only debate in my mind is whether to characterize Episode 3 as 'the Malena episode' or 'the Colleen episode'.
Without getting into detail or spoilers, Malena is the best sort of LI: willing to call the MC out on his bullshit, but also point him towards his better self. She doesn't need the MC... but she sees that he's worthy of help.
Giving the MC a choice on Colleen, per jufot's comment, is a masterstroke. It means that the player must deliberately choose the less comfortable, painful path in order to find love and a better life. There's no true happiness without pain and vulnerability.
The link between the two is Vega: she reveals that the way the MC sees himself and the superficial front that he presents to the world conceals something darker... more selfish, self-centred and, frankly, weak. The lonely, abandoned child inside... who abandons others.
The Colleen choice... and then what happens afterward in the hallway... took this game to another level. (As well as destroying the risk that the MC would devolve into a Gary Stu.) It was sad, beautiful, and felt absolutely genuine. I've been there... alone, in that hallway.
Fantastic stuff. This is now my favourite game in progress -- surpassing some other worthy contenders (Corporate Culture, Pecker, Hillside, Shards, etc).
Coda: other devs should note the storytelling devices that Impious uses well. For example, he does a brilliant job cutting out extraneous scenes. For example, we didn't need to see the MC and Malena training in the park... but we did need to understand her approach and motivations. Impious _shows_ he doesn't _tell_ via gratuitous dialogue and description. In Episode 2, there were several great scenes with Jamie with _zero_ dialogue: he just showed their interaction and emotions... which was far more effective than unnecessary exposition. Very well done.