- Aug 11, 2020
- 6
- 11
Well, Aaryn you did it again. The latest update hit me all in the feels. I didn't even see my email from Patreon about the update until pretty late last night. Needless to say, once I saw you had released it, I was up a few more hours reading through both routes.
You have a gift for writing compelling, relatable characters. Even without all of the gratuitous nudity in the dorm room, the narrative between these characters could stand entirely on its own. I know a lot of people have been complaining about the lack of full on hardcore sexual elements, but if I am being honest. The fact MORE is right there, just out of reach while inching closer and closer to FINALLY happening. Also, I instantly liked Ash/Max since we first got to 'know' him a bit more, but he's quickly becoming my favorite character. I can't wait until the next update.
You have a gift for writing compelling, relatable characters. Even without all of the gratuitous nudity in the dorm room, the narrative between these characters could stand entirely on its own. I know a lot of people have been complaining about the lack of full on hardcore sexual elements, but if I am being honest. The fact MORE is right there, just out of reach while inching closer and closer to FINALLY happening. Also, I instantly liked Ash/Max since we first got to 'know' him a bit more, but he's quickly becoming my favorite character. I can't wait until the next update.