Hello Aaryn, how are you? How’s the work going? as I told you time... after my fifth time playing your game, now for me it has become like the blanket of Lynus, I love it, I wanted to send you a private message not to spoil, I report typos and other perplexities that I have, but not being English and not knowing the slang maybe not mistakes.
1- After Braiden comes back from the first day of wrestling and Zack from the first pool
there’s a Swum instead of Swim - Braiden:"Did you do ok, thought? like...." -
2 - When playing cards after the last hand if Braiden loses when he’s in front of the TV to undress
there’s a woulda instead of would - Braiden: "Don’t lie: if you woulda lost..."
soon after same scene after Braiden undresses back Zack is on the bed
there’s a Nuthin... instead of Nothin... - Zack: "Nuthin..."
3 - When Braiden comes back from the shower the morning of the film trilogy
Braiden says, "Oh yeah? What is it?" and then he always says,
"oh shit, this is seriously your favorite movie trilogy? but Zack doesn’t say anything
I think the dialogue or something
4 - After the park... (without spoilerare) when I am in the room there is a strange passage between light on and light off,
Braden was talking and then immediately after light off and turned.. I don’t know if he deleted a passage
or some phrase.
5 - After Max and Zack get back from the walk, Zack tells Braden Max’s real name and Braden says...
I noticed you said Ash earlier back in the coffe shop.... actually he says it in the sauna.
I can’t wait to read and see the sequel, this game has become my drug. p.s. I downloaded the program and am learning how it works and the more I go on and the more I think oh my God. You have all my respect for patience. Having said that don’t take too long I need more drugs, but don’t rush otherwise the work doesn’t come out good
. I’m kidding, art needs both written and visual time.
Good job and good day
a kiss to your beautiful heart