VN Ren'Py Abandoned Strange Nights [v0.7.1] [LocJaw]

[wep]

@LocJaw I'm really enjoying your game so far.
I have a question for you. Are you planning to introduce some game mechanics (i.e level of corruption, level of powers for Mark) or choices that can change the story (i.e be gentle, dominant, evil) or will it be a linear story?

thanks

 

[Engelstein]

I just want Max to get cornholed.

 

[Morah SDG]

Leaving the models as they are seems appropriate to me, as this is a game IN universe, technically. To have them have larger dimensions that aren't correct seems odd. Yeah, I think I agree about Max's chin, I hadn't realized it before, but it is just a bit wide. -Morah

 

[ltpika]

Since Jefferson was the villain of the game, I was hoping he'd be more evil. He's missed some prime groping opportunities.

 

[fsap1]

Damn great animations on this one, loving the art style too. Never played Life is Strange, but this seems to be it's own thing, so it shouldn't be a problem.

 

[joe134]

the plot is good, but the scenes of sex are extremely vulgar. We can say that there is no sexual theme in this game.
For me, it's like reading a good book, the content of which is interspersed with scenes of masturbation and blowjob.
There is no sexual intrigue.
And I'm afraid if she appears, the author decides to fuck it all up. Well, about as it was in the project "teacher's pets". There was one interesting character. And when the author discovered the audience's attention to her, he began to destroy her with some kind of unhealthy despair. Has sentenced and has shit all that only is possible.
Here we see about the same thing.
Sexual interest is impossible, to whom you can just fuck.

I sort of understand what you are saying and I have to disagree with your assessment of the sex scenes. At the end of the day, this is an adult game not a real novel. So the story of the game is secondary to the adult content and should just flow natural enough to allow sex scenes to happen. I personally found the "vulgar" sex scenes to be just right given the plot of the story.

 

[XJ347]

there are no big boobs in the Life is Strange, all of the girls are small breasts.

That is because in Life is Strange characters are realistic. While some look generic at first, but the characters develop and you realize they are ALL nuanced. Half the worlds women don't have big boobs (61%), and when you look at teenagers that number is only going to increase since breasts grow as you age...

It might sound insignificant, but if you were to change the breast size you might as well not do a Life is strange cover because it wouldn't have the same feeling IMO.

My suggestion is to add a classmate who isn't shown in the game. Make her have D cups. You can also have the parents of some of the teenagers with big breasts... Mrs. Marsh would be interesting since you already have Kate showing interest. Other Teachers not shown in the game could work too.

Note I feel like Dana Ward might be upgraded to a C cup because she is the only teenager to show cleavage in her clothing choice in the game.

Well I will go back to quietly watching this project in a corner.

 

[nashk]

there are no big boobs in the Life is Strange, all of the girls are small breasts.
so, why dont have the chance to change this,
like Max, make her become a D-CUP cow girl，and piercing her two nipples with rings.
or Victoria, make her become your bitch, with D-CUP and a four-terminal slave chain, two piercing her lactating nipples, and two piercing her labia, and, her clit,a electric shock piercing maybe?

There actually are large breasted ladies in LiS, they might not be the comically huge boobs we get desensitized to in most porn games, but they are there. Dana Ward and Juliet Watson are the two with noticeable breasts that I remember off hand.

The rest is not my cup of tea personally, but the designer can add what he likes.

That is because in Life is Strange characters are realistic. While some look generic at first, but the characters develop and you realize they are ALL nuanced. Half the worlds women don't have big boobs (61%), and when you look at teenagers that number is only going to increase since breasts grow as you age...

It might sound insignificant, but if you were to change the breast size you might as well not do a Life is strange cover because it wouldn't have the same feeling IMO.

My suggestion is to add a classmate who isn't shown in the game. Make her have D cups. You can also have the parents of some of the teenagers with big breasts... Mrs. Marsh would be interesting since you already have Kate showing interest. Other Teachers not shown in the game could work too.

Note I feel like Dana Ward might be upgraded to a C cup because she is the only teenager to show cleavage in her clothing choice in the game.

Well I will go back to quietly watching this project in a corner.

Actually another good candidate is Rachel's mother. She isn't huge, but she has a pretty good body that could be exploited. Might be hard to get their SFM models though.

 

[XJ347]

I sort of understand what you are saying and I have to disagree with your assessment of the sex scenes. At the end of the day, this is an adult game not a real novel. So the story of the game is secondary to the adult content and should just flow natural enough to allow sex scenes to happen. I personally found the "vulgar" sex scenes to be just right given the plot of the story.

I think I'm in between your two positions. If you jump to sex with everyone immediately then you have no where to go later on in the game. There needs to be a build up to keep people drawn and paying attention so you can't go too fast, but going slow is bad as well since people get bored and leave. It's a tricky needle to thread. Early on in all adult games you have to have a hook, a sex scene that shows the audience what your game is like and that was done well here... Now that the hook has been placed I hope the creator slows down and creates a progression so the sexual content builds bigger and bigger.

 

[wep]

I was wondering if you could keep the spoilers about the original game at minimum.
Now it is a quite old game, so it is only a kind request. I'm not checking all the posts/really enforcing it

Thanks

 

[nashk]

I was wondering if you could keep the spoilers about the original game at minimum.
Now it is a quite old game, so it is only a kind request. I'm not checking all the posts/really enforcing it

Thanks

I don't mind following this request, but this porn game itself kind of spoils some of the biggest spoilers Life is Strange right out of the gate.

 

[nod24]

I sort of understand what you are saying and I have to disagree with your assessment of the sex scenes.

Fool, I'm not talking about the presence or absence of sex scenes, but about the lack of sexual intrigue, about pressure that forces us to move forward, about interest.

 

[nod24]

to be fair,this is still a very early version of the game and it's far from complete,so....

so, we will achieve something interesting among those who we fucked in the ass? Moreover, in the first scene?

 

[joe134]

Fool, I'm not talking about the presence or absence of sex scenes, but about the lack of sexual intrigue, about pressure that forces us to move forward, about interest.

Please reread what I typed because I don't think you fully understood what I typed. As for your original post, if the above is what you meant to say in that then you need to express yourself more clearly next time.

 

[joe134]

so, we will achieve something interesting among those who we fucked in the ass? Moreover, in the first scene?

There was no anal penetration of any sort at all in the demo And what is the point of your mentioning it, other than to drive home the idea that the adult game is too vulgar for your taste? If that's the case, I suggest you stick to reading a bible instead.

 

[ShadowSamurai]

I apologize for not being able to express my thoughts properly, because of the primitiveness of your language!

However, your statement that "this is an adult game not a real novel", can not be interpreted otherwise. It's like I'm asking a real novel here.

no offense,but if you're gonna call someone out on their 'primitive language' at the very least learn how to type sentences properly.

it's like i'm asking a real novel here makes no sense at all.

 

[joe134]

I apologize for not being able to express my thoughts properly, because of the primitiveness of your language!

However, your statement that "this is an adult game not a real novel", can not be interpreted otherwise. It's like I'm asking a real novel here.

Are you blaming the English language for your inability to express yourself clearly? That's rich. You are one of a kind, aren't you? I'm done talking to you.

 

[Buffalo Fred]

Please don't start making their boobs bigger. There are SO many games where everyone has oversized breasts - it's refreshing when a game comes along where the women's proportions are more realistic.

 

[nod24]

Please don't start making their boobs bigger.

But why? Many authors believe that big tits are original. And also, no one will blame them for homosexuality, pedophilia or any other sexual deviations. Also, most developers, associating themselves with the protagonist, try to show their huge penis so that they can see and ... no one else dared to laugh ...

 

[wep]

I don't mind following this request, but this porn game itself kind of spoils some of the biggest spoilers Life is Strange right out of the gate.

I completely agree with you, but at least you have to download the game and we have a warning. Instead it is really easy to read a post. However it is a quite old game so again I will never delete a post with spoiler.