VN Ren'Py Strangers on Paper [Ch.2 v0.2.2] [Gloomy Ghost Studio]

[Daddy-S]

I know I should probably stick to a single path but I cant help but think I want to be helping both of them. I don't want to watch the path I don't choose to go badly for the other girl(s) I could imagine some sad emotional scenes on both sides, ugh.

I do hope we manage to get some animations though, but only if they match the quality of the rest of the vn. They are not a deal breaker but it would make this one near perfect.

 

[magistrate]

I don't mind the aspect ratio, but you should crop the images instead of rendering them with black bars. It will not only save space (black bars take up data) but it'll also be a much better experience for people with ultrawide monitors.

 

[Nikephorus]

Loving the story and art but Is anyone else bothered by the bike chain? I've been fixing a jumped chain since I"ve learned how to ride a bike, it's not difficult to get a jumped chain back onto a sprocket. If it were a bent rim or something with the spokes I could see needing an uber, but a jumped chain? Anyway that's just nitpicky of me, over all I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story.

I noticed that too. I know that fixing a fallen chain isn’t that complicated, even on a bike with multiple gears. I mean, I was able to figure that out as a little kid.

 

[J0K3RXXX]

Interesting.

 

[Mr. Harper]

I'm curious about the sex scenes, will it always be like this? without showing the penetration ?

 

[Big_Bad]

I'm curious about the sex scenes, will it always be like this? without showing the penetration ?

They did show it, just a bit. Is hell of a shot of Becca's backside...

 

[Jarulf]

I noticed that too. I know that fixing a fallen chain isn’t that complicated, even on a bike with multiple gears. I mean, I was able to figure that out as a little kid.

Lol, me too. Mine dropped off not long ago, took about two minutes to fix without tools. But, it's really a minor nit-pick, maybe they just didn't know.

 

[Ghost'']

Strangers on Paper [Ch.2 v0.2.2] Unofficial Android Port + KoGa3's WT/Cheat Mod

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[eightypercent]

you quoted the dev saying it's going to be vanilla.

No, my lovely, I simply advanced that it is early stages and by judging by the writing (insight, imagination, etc) we could expect surprises throughout the story. That is how, in my old eyes anyway, it has already been structured. And the word vanilla is merely an indication, not a well-defined premise.

 

[Avaron1974]

No, my lovely, I simply advanced that it is early stages and by judging by the writing (insight, imagination, etc) we could expect surprises throughout the story. That is how, in my old eyes anyway, it has already been structured. And the word vanilla is merely an indication, not a well-defined premise.

It was the dev that said it was going to be vanilla.....

That post you quoted was from the dev. It's a heavy story based game with some sex and the sex is going to be vanilla. That's the dev himself saying that not someone making a guess.

 

[Maviarab]

Unfortunely trying to be Ocean lab

Yawwwwn....

 

[eightypercent]

It was the dev that said it was going to be vanilla.....

That post you quoted was from the dev. It's a heavy story based game with some sex and the sex is going to be vanilla. That's the dev himself saying that not someone making a guess.

Oh now I supposed I should be embarrassed

 

[dervalle007]

Geez the MC's ramblings during the sex with Becca was really cringe, just shut up and enjoy it. Well at least we could make it a little bit better with the "electrifying" answer.

 

[arlamrex]

These slowburn in Amy route is killing me... in a good way

 

[bobdango]

These black bars combined with all the canted shots... Kind of taking me out of this VN before it even really starts.

 

[Big_Bad]

Geez the MC's ramblings during the sex with Becca was really cringe, just shut up and enjoy it. Well at least we could make it a little bit better with the "electrifying" answer.

While i agree, the MC comments were cringe, it adds to the verisimilitude since its quite a nervous and an emotional moment for him. Not only its Becca, which he shares an emotional history with, but he also hadnt got laid in a while, so he was aware of his lacking stamina, which we got a confirmation of soon after. So comments were possibly a way for him to get a bit distracted and prolong the act.

 

[Tomy75]

gloomyghost excellent work! This concept is kinda refreshing, only 2 LIs, 2 different stories with 2 different personalities and backgrounds. I enjoyed playing both paths, but my heart chose Amy without any hesitation, especially if Becca carries on being such a dominatrix in her words and her acts, not my kink.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

A magnificent second chapter, I love that the story written by the MC changes depending on whether you choose Becca or Amy

 

[Big_Bad]

What do you guys think of Tony?
He asks MC to get close to and support Becca, very well knowingly MC had feelings for her as a teen, he encourages their interaction, but gets annoyed that MC starts to care for his sister.

 

[Dr.TSoni]

What do you guys think of Tony?
He asks MC to get close to and support Becca, very well knowingly MC had feelings for her as a teen, he encourages their interaction, but gets annoyed that MC starts to care for his sister.

I think it's along the lines of "I asked you to help her, not fuck her", although given Becca's tendency not to have real relationships, Tony might be worried about his best friend.