VN Ren'Py Strangers on Paper [Ch.2 v0.2.2] [Gloomy Ghost Studio]

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MixQQ

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Sep 8, 2019
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Geez the MC's ramblings during the sex with Becca was really cringe, just shut up and enjoy it. Well at least we could make it a little bit better with the "electrifying" answer.
yea, that scene was big disappointment, mc is virgin or what? Not to mention bad angles. Dev definitely should put more effort when he create lewd content
 

Big_Bad

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Jun 27, 2024
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Geez the MC's ramblings during the sex with Becca was really cringe, just shut up and enjoy it. Well at least we could make it a little bit better with the "electrifying" answer.
While i agree, the MC comments were cringe, it adds to the verisimilitude since its quite a nervous and an emotional moment for him. Not only its Becca, which he shares an emotional history with, but he also hadnt got laid in a while, so he was aware of his lacking stamina, which we got a confirmation of soon after. So comments were possibly a way for him to get a bit distracted and prolong the act.
 

Tomy75

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Sep 27, 2018
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gloomyghost excellent work! This concept is kinda refreshing, only 2 LIs, 2 different stories with 2 different personalities and backgrounds. I enjoyed playing both paths, but my heart chose Amy without any hesitation, especially if Becca carries on being such a dominatrix in her words and her acts, not my kink.
 
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Big_Bad

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What do you guys think of Tony?
He asks MC to get close to and support Becca, very well knowingly MC had feelings for her as a teen, he encourages their interaction, but gets annoyed that MC starts to care for his sister.
 
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Dr.TSoni

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What do you guys think of Tony?
He asks MC to get close to and support Becca, very well knowingly MC had feelings for her as a teen, he encourages their interaction, but gets annoyed that MC starts to care for his sister.
I think it's along the lines of "I asked you to help her, not fuck her", although given Becca's tendency not to have real relationships, Tony might be worried about his best friend.
 

Teal80

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Dec 27, 2017
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Loving the story and art but Is anyone else bothered by the bike chain? I've been fixing a jumped chain since I"ve learned how to ride a bike, it's not difficult to get a jumped chain back onto a sprocket. If it were a bent rim or something with the spokes I could see needing an uber, but a jumped chain? Anyway that's just nitpicky of me, over all I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story.
I was 7 years old when I fixed my first jumped chain... it still had training wheels on it.
So yeah that was the only thing that I found puzzling in this otherwise excellent VN.
 

BTWZ1

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Mar 20, 2019
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I just now came across this game. The story and dialogues are very high quality. O shake devs hand and him all the best in the future.
 

burstadolla

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Jul 14, 2023
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Is it better to play same route in both episodes for minmaxing or just separate route in both episodes can amount to anything. I know its silly but separate route just means separate timeline for me and these 2 both are so precious.
 

Meiri

Formerly 'acetsis'
Nov 1, 2019
7
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Is it better to play same route in both episodes for minmaxing or just separate route in both episodes can amount to anything. I know its silly but separate route just means separate timeline for me and these 2 both are so precious.
In my opinion the story makes more sense if you follow the same route both episodes
 

Gobugobu

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May 16, 2023
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There are only two chapters so far, but this is a great story that keeps you wanting to know more, and it definitely ranks in the top five of the AVNs I've seen in the last few years.

Both women's stories are good, but my favorite is Becca's.

I'm looking forward to seeing more sexy scenes with them in the future, and looking forward to the rest of the story.
 
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I had played the first chapter back when it first came out and had been checking up on the development progress of SOP since, as I had some thoughts as to the premises and characters set up by the opening, but wanted to wait and see where things went before I wrote anything substantive.

Little did I know I would wait a year before I could finally put these thoughts to paper.

Luckily, Chapter 2 improved on the first in nearly every way, making the lengthy wait (almost) worth it. So I will start off by thanking the Devs for the excellent product that they have put out, something light on sex and even lewdness, which is both refreshing and somehow exactly the kind of AVN that I was looking for on a porn game dominated site.

Lengthy thoughts ahead.


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Closing thoughts:

As interesting narratively as these two female leads are to their respective story lines, I had to laugh at how much goddamn baggage each of them carried. I can’t imagine how exhausting it must be to actually have to deal with people like this in real life if you’re trying to date them.

The best part about waiting for SOP is that it seems to be a fairly structured and contained project with a definite vision for the climax and end, which should be wrapped up within a few chapters rather than seasons. The bad part is, even if that’s only 2 more chapters, that still might be a 2 year wait.

Devs, please, say it ain’t gonna be another year’s wait for this excellent AVN to update. On the other hand, if that’s what it takes to polish this level of quality, then hell, see you in 2025.
 

link18

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I had played the first chapter back when it first came out and had been checking up on the development progress of SOP since,
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Devs, please, say it ain’t gonna be another year’s wait for this excellent AVN to update. On the other hand, if that’s what it takes to polish this level of quality, then hell, see you in 2025.
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saSux

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I had played the first chapter back when it first came out and had been checking up on the development progress of SOP since, as I had some thoughts as to the premises and characters set up by the opening, but wanted to wait and see where things went before I wrote anything substantive.

Little did I know I would wait a year before I could finally put these thoughts to paper.

Luckily, Chapter 2 improved on the first in nearly every way, making the lengthy wait (almost) worth it. So I will start off by thanking the Devs for the excellent product that they have put out, something light on sex and even lewdness, which is both refreshing and somehow exactly the kind of AVN that I was looking for on a porn game dominated site.

Lengthy thoughts ahead.


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Closing thoughts:

As interesting narratively as these two female leads are to their respective story lines, I had to laugh at how much goddamn baggage each of them carried. I can’t imagine how exhausting it must be to actually have to deal with people like this in real life if you’re trying to date them.

The best part about waiting for SOP is that it seems to be a fairly structured and contained project with a definite vision for the climax and end, which should be wrapped up within a few chapters rather than seasons. The bad part is, even if that’s only 2 more chapters, that still might be a 2 year wait.

Devs, please, say it ain’t gonna be another year’s wait for this excellent AVN to update. On the other hand, if that’s what it takes to polish this level of quality, then hell, see you in 2025.
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Meiri

Formerly 'acetsis'
Nov 1, 2019
7
8
I had played the first chapter back when it first came out and had been checking up on the development progress of SOP since, as I had some thoughts as to the premises and characters set up by the opening, but wanted to wait and see where things went before I wrote anything substantive.

Little did I know I would wait a year before I could finally put these thoughts to paper.

Luckily, Chapter 2 improved on the first in nearly every way, making the lengthy wait (almost) worth it. So I will start off by thanking the Devs for the excellent product that they have put out, something light on sex and even lewdness, which is both refreshing and somehow exactly the kind of AVN that I was looking for on a porn game dominated site.

Lengthy thoughts ahead.


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Closing thoughts:

As interesting narratively as these two female leads are to their respective story lines, I had to laugh at how much goddamn baggage each of them carried. I can’t imagine how exhausting it must be to actually have to deal with people like this in real life if you’re trying to date them.

The best part about waiting for SOP is that it seems to be a fairly structured and contained project with a definite vision for the climax and end, which should be wrapped up within a few chapters rather than seasons. The bad part is, even if that’s only 2 more chapters, that still might be a 2 year wait.

Devs, please, say it ain’t gonna be another year’s wait for this excellent AVN to update. On the other hand, if that’s what it takes to polish this level of quality, then hell, see you in 2025.
I think we have similar thoughs:

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4.90 star(s) 55 Votes