VN Ren'Py Strangers on Paper [Ch.2 v0.2.2] [Gloomy Ghost Studio]

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Meiri

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Nov 1, 2019
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This isn't some tragic ending kinda of game right something just feels of like someone is gonna die
Why would anyone die? So far things have been very ordinary, no one life is in danger... Worst possible endings imo We fail to stop the wedding and Amy ends ups being miserable in her route, as for Becca hard to tell maybe she continues with her kind of depressing lifestyle and separates herself from her brother.
 

DevinHesi

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Here's another chance to leave your mark on SoP! These little cuties need names and you can leave your suggestion for each of them over here:



We may choose our favorites and that's it, we may put some up for voting, or we may end up naming them whatever we want. Nothing's settled yet, so give us your best names!
 

Newhell

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Russian translation (PC + Android) -

Перевод на русский язык (ПК + Андроид) -
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TomamoNoku

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I finally got to play chapter 2, it was definitely a very good development from chapter 1. Highlighting the parts I liked the most, I would say they were the MC's ability to speak, it's always interesting when the main character knows how to dialogue, well, at least in most of the time. Tony seemed less like an idiot and more like a joker with a more serious side. And Becca now looks more human too, with a softer edge. And the secondary girls(i hope), Erin and Amy's sister, seem cute, but don't say much about them until we know more about them.

As for the parts I didn't like, well, there aren't many. I think I can highlight the unhappiness of not being able to choose the gender the MC will write regardless of the path of the girl we choose. This clearly has a purpose in the story, so it's not really a problem, but it's still annoying if the player doesn't like the genre in question, like I don't really like Cyberpunk (a dark fantasy for our dark lady would be so great). But the worst of all is that you can't adopt the puppy on Becca's path! How do you expect me to throw our dark lady's way knowing there's an abandoned puppy out there?!! SHAME. SHAME.

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Oh, and the MC's lines during the scene with Becca were really embarrassing lol

But the game is still GREAT, so thanks for the work!
 

DevinHesi

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I think soon after Chapter 1 had been released, Grogu mentioned we should upload a dev log, as we always would. It’s just right then it felt kinda foreign. What the hell did I use to write about on these? Then, I would type paragraphs and paragraphs of stuff I didn’t feel like sharing with the internet, still confused on what it should be like, no matter how obvious the answer.



And yeah, I remember it so clearly because I ended up going through a similar thing after the release of Chapter 2. Dev logs have been scarce because… believe us when we say you would not want to read those. They’ll go into the valve of scrapped random ramblings of which you may or may not read a fragment of in the future.



Identity crisis aside, we decided we’ll just go with a classic: what have we been up to lately?



Let’s start with the easy part. Writing chapter 3 has been… odd so far. I’ve mentioned this before, but usually, when I’m writing scenes for a chapter, I will stop to take notes for scenes for future chapters, and because SoP will only have 4 of those, the idea that everything will come to an end right there won’t stop weighing on me. It’s one thing knowing it’s gonna end, it’s a very different thing writing those pivotal moments when you know that’s the last time you’ll write for those characters… allegedly. It’s all bittersweet, so I’m focusing on the sweet part of some of my favorite scenes yet to come, the ones I’ve been just dying to write since we started working on this. There’s also quite a few character comebacks in this chapter, some I’d been dying to see again. If you were paying attention to a certain poster - and not at Becca’s ass, but I wouldn’t blame you - you may already know about one of them.



As I started writing, Grogu continued to work the in and outs of something that’s been super exciting for us - a gallery. We’d always planned on having a little section in our game in which you could go back and stare at those pretty moments you shared with these characters, but also the extra excitement of unlocking new images, and hopefully some scenes - if you’re on our Patreon, you may be familiar with our snippets, and we would love to have those be part of the actual game eventually.

Now, with said gallery barging into our code, it will mean that, for the next chapters, players will have to replay the first two, which we’re hoping will not be too much trouble for you guys. For future games, we will definitely be more organized in preventing these sorts of things, but SoP is our little guinea pig after all, and we’re super grateful so many of you have welcomed it into your hearts. So, we’re taking this chance to add a few fixes here and there. Now don’t get carried away on this, this is not a rework. Grogu has a very strict no-re rendering-past-images code which I respect a lot, otherwise the joke of SoP being done by 2040 would get too real for us to laugh at it.



So what exactly are these fixes, you may ask. There’s a few minor plot holes here and there that I’ve been waiting for someone to address, and I’m surprised no one mentioned this one in particular, but it’s just an example - minor spoilers for chapter 2 ahead. You know how, if you went out with Becca on the first night, Daniel (the MC) is inspired to write a cyberpunk story, yet, if he was hanging out with Amy, he goes for a historical romance? This is reflected at the end of Chapter 2… except it’s not, at least not correctly. I didn’t address it at the time because we were in a bit of a time crunch and part of me thought “who’s gonna play a chapter of each of them anyway?”, but it’s shit like this that haunts me, because I do want people to be able to try that out and have the game work the way it should for them.

Here's a little behind-the scenes on that (final renders will most likely differ from these):

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Another example I did not expect people to take that much notice of was the bicycle situation, and it’s one of those things that I found immensely entertaining to read in the forums and that made me want to go back and change a few lines on it. Fun fact, my ex used to work at a bicycle shop, always carried tools with him, yet this one time he had a shitty accident which resulted in him having to walk for miles in the rain. It had something to do with the chain but, uhm, I guess I could be more specific there, just for you little nitpickers out there.



Now worry not - this doesn't mean we listen to every single suggestion/critisism players have of SoP. Otherwise, we would go mad. We do however pay attention to those that allign with the way we view our work or that made us think details from a perspective we hadn't considered before. But, for instance, those who are thrown back by having a female character be comfortable with her own sexuality and choices over her body I, uhh... I guess it genuinely makes me wonder why they're playing this game in particular, with so many out there that surely allign with their preferences. My message to them would be that our time on this Earth is precious, use it wisely to enjoy things that bring you joy and bring something positive to them yourself. There's already too much negativity in the world.



Anyway, as you can see, it’s no major rework, just a few adjustments here and there, especially on the code side, but I think those will be more fun to play through than to tell you about. But who knows, we may change our minds by the next dev log and tell you all about them! we, uhm, do that a lot.

Now, the elephant in the room, the reason why we’ve been focusing on these details instead of just Chapter 3, is that we’re really trying/pushing/hoping/manifesting to get a Steam release in the next couple months. It’s no secret we love what we’re doing here and we have every intention to devote more of our time into it, but that means we also need the financial support to make it possible. Steam will (hopefully) help in that regard but, to be 100% honest, we have so many worries when it comes to that area. If you want to help out there, , it only takes a few seconds and it’s 100% free. We’d really, really like to release the game there with all the features we’ve been planning to shove into the game for so long.

Anyway, we hope you enjoyed this little update, and we’d like to let you know this is the last week to submit your ideas for names for the furry ones! So if you haven’t, what are you waiting for? .

Now, a little question for you all out there: Out of all the “side” characters from Chapter 1 and 2, who would you be the most excited to see again? What are your hopes and dreams for them? Just curious since, after all, I’m a little nerd in love with her imaginary friends.

Have an awesome week, strangers, and stay positive out there.
 

DomSoul

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I really like the game. Felt close to my soul.
sure, not my usual depraved games, that I also love, but deep. Meningfull. Open.
I am going to be deep Now, but honestly?
I found myself missing love. Missing passion. Missing writing.
i have been married for Many years, and No worries there, but still.
And If it does not come across as a very good review, it is.
I remember thouse days of old. Writing novels, stories. Poems. Feeling raw passion.
Becca, If I met a Becca in real life, would probably set my world on fire. In all possible ways. Good and bad.
And I would welcome the warmth of the fire.
Looking forward to next chapter.
I was looking for my usual perverted games.(and of course I would gladly see a bit more sexual, but.. at the same time, I trust you compleatly to give me a good story)
I found something really good in your game.
 
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Happy Halloween, everyone! We hope you're having a great time, whether you celebrate or not.

I went for a spookier take on a themed render this time, inspired by the lore from The Witcher.

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