iIIusory

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the story is still great and progressing nicely, but the sex scenes are too sudden now. the renders and general quality are fantastic but there should be more build-up like there was in s1. then again, this is only the first episode, so I'm not too worried. nice update overall!
 

Mr_Sel

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Mar 16, 2018
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1) WTF Seira looks now like a fucking teenager?

2) Since when Tamara is MC's fucktoy? Was that her first time? Like, seriously?

3) Why Anabelle looks like a high schooler?

4) You get scolded for leaving the village that can be attacked any minute, but hey, let's have a tournament! Also, Sirius just left at night, no-one other than MC noticed, because no-one patrols the gate at night. This is apparently the world of well behaved villains who don't attack at night. ;)


Finally, I get that MC is supposed to be a badass, but with each update, he becomes more and more Mary Sue. And you know what Mary Sue characters are in the first place? Boring.
 
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