The game has promise.
The fight system reminds me of college kings which I like but the fact that I beat the dude up the mc still said "I GOT BEAT UP BECAUSE OF YOU."
idk if it's a glitch but if you win the fight he shouldn't be talking like he lost LOL.
So I will say it needs some polish with both the fight system in dialog. you should feel rewarded for winning a fight, not talking like you lost if you did not.
I also think the game needs some music, especially for the fight scenes. you have music at the menu but not in the game? kinda weird but the games need some music. But that is for you to decide to do or not but it does kinda feel off without music imo.
I also hope the game won't have NTR in which the MC gets cucked. I already don't like the fact JESSICA an ex got caught cheating on the mc when they were together so if I can immma avoid her. not the type of LI i want to be assiociated with if she is for the streets LMAO. Also try to not to have so many LI already be in relationships with other guys if they are LOVE INTEREST you will make people mad with that, TRUST ME!
and we are talking about emily here who is probably gonna get married to that dude unless we take her which I think that's your goal and if that is I don't mind it.
IF YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT NTR IS I RECOMMEND LOOKING OVER THE TAGS TO SEE. IT IS IMPORTANT.
The renders are solid and the mc seems like a decent guy. If you going for a bully type game I like it. But lt is also bug with the fight system is when you about to lose and try to load up another save to start over it don't reset the stats or fight. I will say look into that.
also you need to decide if the game is gonna be more focus on the visual novel side or the sandbox.
sandboxed don't really have a good rep LOL. Same with point and click type games because sometimes all the clicking gets annoying. so i will say decide on which one gone be a primary focus I recommend visual novel but it's not my game.
Overall love interest so far not looking the best but it's early so we will see. I will say if this is your first game NOT BAD!
Good work dev.
The fight system reminds me of college kings which I like but the fact that I beat the dude up the mc still said "I GOT BEAT UP BECAUSE OF YOU."
idk if it's a glitch but if you win the fight he shouldn't be talking like he lost LOL.
So I will say it needs some polish with both the fight system in dialog. you should feel rewarded for winning a fight, not talking like you lost if you did not.
I also think the game needs some music, especially for the fight scenes. you have music at the menu but not in the game? kinda weird but the games need some music. But that is for you to decide to do or not but it does kinda feel off without music imo.
I also hope the game won't have NTR in which the MC gets cucked. I already don't like the fact JESSICA an ex got caught cheating on the mc when they were together so if I can immma avoid her. not the type of LI i want to be assiociated with if she is for the streets LMAO. Also try to not to have so many LI already be in relationships with other guys if they are LOVE INTEREST you will make people mad with that, TRUST ME!
and we are talking about emily here who is probably gonna get married to that dude unless we take her which I think that's your goal and if that is I don't mind it.
IF YOU DO NOT KNOW WHAT NTR IS I RECOMMEND LOOKING OVER THE TAGS TO SEE. IT IS IMPORTANT.
The renders are solid and the mc seems like a decent guy. If you going for a bully type game I like it. But lt is also bug with the fight system is when you about to lose and try to load up another save to start over it don't reset the stats or fight. I will say look into that.
also you need to decide if the game is gonna be more focus on the visual novel side or the sandbox.
sandboxed don't really have a good rep LOL. Same with point and click type games because sometimes all the clicking gets annoying. so i will say decide on which one gone be a primary focus I recommend visual novel but it's not my game.
Overall love interest so far not looking the best but it's early so we will see. I will say if this is your first game NOT BAD!
Good work dev.
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