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Haha sorry, no forgot the word. No there is no android version. There will likely be one when the first build is ready.
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first thing I noticed is that this really needs to be proofread. There are instances of spelling the same word correctly once, and incorrectly later.
Good demo and as for the spelling mistakes, I figure they will be corrected as the gsme is developed and I ook forward to playng the game more as it is developed etc
Many developers have no other option than to put their game out for free and offer earlier releases and/or exclusive perks to monetary contributors when they don't already have a fanbase to market to. Somebody coming out of nowhere with a game without a content history through DeviantArt/Pixiv/Fanbox/Patreon/Hentai Foundry/Newgrounds, etc., is going to find it extremely hard to have people even discover their work, let alone pay for it. Many developers know that this forum is free publicity and sometimes even free work through community translations and mods, spell checking, bug reporting, walkthrough creations, technical help, and feedback, so they choose to continue interacting with the community for years.
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That's kind of awesome. I'm glad the MC is an actual character.
Her story is pretty tragic though, she figures out that Clark Kent is superman, gets fired, confirms her theory, and then is promptly killed by muggers.
I also like that under her abilities tab, it just says science.
Solid choice for an MC. Amanda Marie McCoy, a dead character who had a lot of potential, finally being utilized.
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@Romenjack
Good start. Aside from the grammatical mistakes and the need to proofread & edit some dialogues, I think you have something good on your hands that can be interesting. don't forget to add a "final goal" or a "main goal" to the story.
Good luck & thanks!
Good start. Aside from the grammatical mistakes and the need to proofread & edit some dialogues, I think you have something good on your hands that can be interesting. don't forget to add a "final goal" or a "main goal" to the story.
Good luck & thanks!
Okay, I love the whole SHiP thing, but I can't stand futa. Is the futa part of this game going to be either minimal and avoidable, or completely optional?
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Futa in this game will likely be a body upgrade that the MC can get.
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Art seems cool, plans seem good. Love the fem protag/lesbian stuff, people will complain about the lack of penises to admire but a lot of other people will dig it.
Just in the screenshots I see several spelling and grammatical errors. It might seem irrelevant to you but most potential players will find it extremely irritating and immersion-breaking. Find a strong English speaker who can proofread/edit your text, ok? There are several people in the AVN community that offer this service (Lyk, who edits all of Akabur's stuff, is a good example) although it might cost you a few bucks.
Just in the screenshots I see several spelling and grammatical errors. It might seem irrelevant to you but most potential players will find it extremely irritating and immersion-breaking. Find a strong English speaker who can proofread/edit your text, ok? There are several people in the AVN community that offer this service (Lyk, who edits all of Akabur's stuff, is a good example) although it might cost you a few bucks.
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Not a bad thought. I've always wished we could make the captured heroines in SU fuck each other. (You can in one or two cases, but a lot more would be great. I'd rather be able to, say, make Starfire eat out Blackfire than have the 75th "lex gets a blowjob" CG.)
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Game looks cool, I love th idea of turning super heroines into villains,especially with sex on the brain. Is'nt the game "Unlimited" similar to this?. A Base management Heroine corruption story?. Not that I mind just a observation.
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Yes the key differences hopefully being less tedium, more quest/story driven and a female main character
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