Great game. Looking forward to more. One comment: It'd be a whole lot better if we read the character's thoughts in a first-person pov rather than being told from a third-person pov. Otherwise it feels kind of detached or impersonal. Like everything is happening in a house and we're outside looking through a window. And though we can see and hear everything, we don't feel we're truly there and involved in the happenings inside the house.
An example: "Lillith actually believed that Elizabelle would've been a rather good mother, she just lacks any confidence or self worth."
--> Lillith: "(Elizabelle would be a great mother if she just had some confidence or self worth.)"
*The parentheses indicate thoughts.
If you want to know more about this, it's called third-person limited omniscient, and what you're doing is closer to third-person omniscient.