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UnoriginalUserName
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- Sep 3, 2017
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You'll lust after your non-blood-related step-landlady and you'll like it!almost as bad as forced incest li shiti hate that
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MagicMan753
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- Nov 19, 2021
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CovertApe I checked out the patreon release, not much was added but am super excited to see full episode 1. The claudia interaction was really solid. I do hope the free roam isn't bad, I know nothing there right now, but didn't feel the best at first glance. I hope we will get our first introduction to Lorde in full ep.1, cause she is the one I am looking forward to most. Also hope we can bulid our little harem here of at least a few.
Will say, I seen you changed a bit of the our and Kitty's relationship, it is a lot better, doesn't feel as bad or super connected. It sill feels a bit too attached and head over heels for my liking, but its more tolerable, and I don't want you to change your story too much, so will probably just have to accept this, even though it isn't my favorite.
On the topic of sex scene in beginning, two things.
-First, rollback isn't best, it will automatically skip back to choice instead of previous render or animation, so you have to run through whole thing again, so that needs adjusting there.
-Second, for this sex scene and future ones, I think you need more talking throughout, there is a couple lines, maybe some thoughts, but felt too quiet. Some more romantic or dirty talk, maybe you can make this a choice during of what to say at times too maybe, to add some immersion or some flavor, but yeah more talking overall basically.
But yeah, very excited to see more. Sorry if I was too critical. Keep up the great work and excited to see more.
Will say, I seen you changed a bit of the our and Kitty's relationship, it is a lot better, doesn't feel as bad or super connected. It sill feels a bit too attached and head over heels for my liking, but its more tolerable, and I don't want you to change your story too much, so will probably just have to accept this, even though it isn't my favorite.
On the topic of sex scene in beginning, two things.
-First, rollback isn't best, it will automatically skip back to choice instead of previous render or animation, so you have to run through whole thing again, so that needs adjusting there.
-Second, for this sex scene and future ones, I think you need more talking throughout, there is a couple lines, maybe some thoughts, but felt too quiet. Some more romantic or dirty talk, maybe you can make this a choice during of what to say at times too maybe, to add some immersion or some flavor, but yeah more talking overall basically.
But yeah, very excited to see more. Sorry if I was too critical. Keep up the great work and excited to see more.
Porthas
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- Feb 26, 2021
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Disagree, let the visuals do the work. People don't constantly flap their lips when they're going at it. Too much cardio going on. Plus devs for the most part will go overboard and they'll never shut the fuck up.