VN Ren'Py Succession [Demo] [Covert Ape]

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

Yeah, bro forced whore Li shit is so annoying.

almost as bad as forced incest li shit i hate that

 

[UnoriginalUserName]

almost as bad as forced incest li shit i hate that

You'll lust after your non-blood-related step-landlady and you'll like it!

 

[jish55]

Just checking in to see if there's any update.

 

[MagicMan753]

CovertApe I checked out the patreon release, not much was added but am super excited to see full episode 1. The claudia interaction was really solid. I do hope the free roam isn't bad, I know nothing there right now, but didn't feel the best at first glance. I hope we will get our first introduction to Lorde in full ep.1, cause she is the one I am looking forward to most. Also hope we can bulid our little harem here of at least a few.

Will say, I seen you changed a bit of the our and Kitty's relationship, it is a lot better, doesn't feel as bad or super connected. It sill feels a bit too attached and head over heels for my liking, but its more tolerable, and I don't want you to change your story too much, so will probably just have to accept this, even though it isn't my favorite.

On the topic of sex scene in beginning, two things.
-First, rollback isn't best, it will automatically skip back to choice instead of previous render or animation, so you have to run through whole thing again, so that needs adjusting there.
-Second, for this sex scene and future ones, I think you need more talking throughout, there is a couple lines, maybe some thoughts, but felt too quiet. Some more romantic or dirty talk, maybe you can make this a choice during of what to say at times too maybe, to add some immersion or some flavor, but yeah more talking overall basically.

But yeah, very excited to see more. Sorry if I was too critical. Keep up the great work and excited to see more.

 

[Porthas]

CovertApe
-Second, for this sex scene and future ones, I think you need more talking throughout, there is a couple lines, maybe some thoughts, but felt too quiet. Some more romantic or dirty talk, maybe you can make this a choice during of what to say at times too maybe, to add some immersion or some flavor, but yeah more talking overall basically.

Disagree, let the visuals do the work. People don't constantly flap their lips when they're going at it. Too much cardio going on. Plus devs for the most part will go overboard and they'll never shut the fuck up.

 

[Maviarab]

So nothing since Feb....in April update was 'really close'...5 months later....

While I have no issue with the forced Kitty stuff...I would advise changing it, regardless of how gorgeous she is.

Also, no VN...ever...in the history of VN's, needs 22 fucking clicks and screens to 'actually start the VN'. Most after 10 clicks I just close and forget they existed. Also, remember humour is very subjective....and you're not funny. remove that from your 22 intro's too

Missing images...render quality is...acceptable, though they would only have been acceptable 5 years ago too, options to do things that are not actually implemented....end dialogue makes mention of funds...yet 2 months later you say you have it all in place and one of you has quit work....whatever...just a fucking mess. At least currently the actual writing is solid, especially for a VN set in the UK. Props and 5/5 for that at the very least.

Overall, it's an incredibly below par and average first release but it does have some potential (and breaking and fucking the attitude out of Catherine could be fun). We shall see what the second release actually looks like.

 

[burbero]

It's been almost nine months. I was excited about this game. Now, I don't have much hope left.