Alrighty there are quite a few bugs in the newer content. Here's what I have so far.
- If you don't take the ride from the creep, there is still soliloquy about how she got herself a personal driver.
- When they first arrive at school the images become offset from the dialogue. They talk as if they've arrived at the door before the images. They begin the conversation with the dean while still outside, etc. The images line back up at the scene change.
- the first image of the shopping trip "shop 22" is incorrectly named "show shop 22" in the files. Correcting the name clears the error.
- When the MC returns to the room to a rude surprise, there is an error less easy to bypass. "story003.rpy" line 613 throws a syntax error.
I'll add more as I find them.
Finally, it would be easier to read if the parts said out loud were distinguished better from the stage directions and thoughts. Maybe italicize thoughts and be more consistent with not showing a name over stage directions?
I am enjoying the game enough to bother with all this error checking though so that's good! Keep up the good work (but maybe test a little more). I look forward to updates.