Just played it and quite enjoyed it!
The good:
+ The MC is really pretty.
+ I haven't played a lot of transformation games, but I think this one is pretty well done, with the MC feeling kinda lost and frustrated, getting mad at Tom when he oversteps his boundaries, having lots of questions and thoughts, also being curious about the new body... I like it!
+ At times it was really funny. I don't know if that was intended, or a translation thing, but I had a couple of good laughs.
+ The graphics were more than ok for me.
The bad:
- Translation is terrible. I could follow most of it, but sometimes I had no idea what was being said (wtf are
honey rolls?)
- Still some bugs, missing images, etc... but nothing gamebreaking.
- The pacing feels a bit off at times. But I think with a proper distribution of action / dialogue / comtemplation scenes this can be solved.
Favorite quote:
"Today I went shopping for the first time in my life and I liked it! How is that even possible?"
Tips for the dev:
- Be sure to give the player choices to go the route they want (lesbian only/guys only/pure path/evil path etc.)
- For me the dialogues are a strong point in this game. Despite the translation issues I found myself very involved. I think you should keep that in mind. Strong dialogues with some humor can really elevate a game.
- Find a way to handle the translation.
- In the game overview you're hinting that the MC will eventually have the choice of changing back to a man, or staying a woman. I think that's a good idea, and actually it could be already be implemented in the MC's thoughts (manly thoughts vs. girly thoughts), heck you could even have the player to choose a thought and thus change the MC's alignment.
- Focus on your original idea and don't try to please everyone. That has ruined more than one game.
- This means you can also ignore all my tips.
End thoughts:
I'd really like the MC to have her first period and freaks out all about it. This could be GREAT!
Good luck to you dev!