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kashmoney

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me: literally spending hours writing shit better than what i used to do at school so the game can get better

zion sees a joke

zion: You swine. You vulgar little maggot. You worthless bag of filth. As they say in Texas. I’ll bet you couldn’t pour !@#$ out of a boot with instructions on the heel. You are a canker. A sore that won’t go away. I would rather kiss a lawyer than be seen with you. You’re a putrescent mass, a walking vomit. You are a spineless little worm deserving nothing but the profoundest contempt. You are a jerk, a cad, a weasel. Your life is a monument to stupidity. You are a stench, a revulsion, a big suck on a sour lemon. You are a bleating foal, a curdled staggering mutant dwarf smeared richly with the effluvia and offal accompanying your alleged birth into this world. An insensate, blinking calf, meaningful to nobody, abandoned by the puke-drooling, giggling beasts who sired you and then killed themselves in recognition of what they had done. I will never get over the embarrassment of belonging to the same species as you. You are a monster, an ogre, a malformation. I barf at the very thought of you. You have all the appeal of a paper cut. Lepers avoid you. You are vile, worthless, less than nothing. You are a weed, a fungus, the dregs of this earth. And did I mention you smell? Try to edit your responses of unnecessary material before attempting to impress us with your insight. The evidence that you are a nincompoop will still be available to readers, but they will be able to access it more rapidly. You snail-skulled little rabbit. Would that a hawk pick you up, drive its beak into your brain, and upon finding it rancid set you loose to fly briefly before spattering the ocean rocks with the frothy pink shame of your ignoble blood. May you choke on the queasy, convulsing nausea of your own trite, foolish beliefs. You are weary, stale, flat and unprofitable. You are grimy, squalid, nasty and profane. You are foul and disgusting. You’re a fool, an ignoramus. Monkeys look down on you. Even sheep won’t have sex with you. You are unreservedly pathetic, starved for attention, and lost in a land that reality forgot. And what meaning do you expect your delusional self-important statements of unknowing, inexperienced opinion to have with us? What fantasy do you hold that you would believe that your tiny-fisted tantrums would have more weight than that of a leprous desert rat, spinning rabidly in a circle, waiting for the bite of the snake? You are a waste of flesh. You have no rhythm. You are ridiculous and obnoxious. You are the moral[size] equivalent of a leech. You are a living emptiness, a meaningless void. You are sour and senile. You are a disease, you puerile one-handed slack-jawed drooling meat slapper. On a good day you’re a half-wit. You remind me of drool. You are deficient in all that lends character. You have the personality of wallpaper. You are dank and filthy. You are asinine and benighted. You are the source of all unpleasantness. You spread misery and sorrow wherever you go. You smarmy lager lout git. You bloody woofter sod. Bugger off, pillock. You grotty wanking oink artless base-court apple-john. You clouted boggish foot-licking twit. You dankish clack-dish plonker. You gormless crook-pated tosser. You churlish boil-brained clotpole ponce. You cockered bum-bailey poofter. You craven dewberry pisshead cockup pratting naff. You gob-kissing gleeking flap-mouthed coxcomb. You dread-bolted fobbing beef-witted clapper-clawed flirt-gill. You are a fiend and a coward, and you have bad breath. You are degenerate, noxious and depraved. I feel debased just for knowing you exist. I despise everything about you, and I wish you would go away. I cannot believe how incredibly stupid you are. I mean rock-hard stupid. Dehydrated-rock-hard stupid. Stupid so stupid that it goes way beyond the stupid we know into a whole different dimension of stupid. You are trans-stupid stupid. Meta-stupid. Stupid collapsed on itself so far that even the neutrons have collapsed. Stupid gotten so dense that no intellect can escape. Singularity stupid. Blazing hot mid-day sun on Mercury stupid. You emit more stupid in one second than our entire galaxy emits in a year. Quasar stupid. Your writing has to be a troll. Nothing in our universe can really be this stupid. Perhaps this is some primordial fragment from the original big bang of stupid. Some pure essence of a stupid so uncontaminated by anything else as to be beyond the laws of physics that we know. I’m sorry. I can’t go on. This is an epiphany of stupid for me. After this, you may not hear from me again for a while. I don’t have enough strength left to deride your ignorant questions and half baked comments about unimportant trivia, or any of the rest of this drivel. Duh. The only thing worse than your logic is your manners. I have snipped away most of what you wrote, because, well... it didn’t really say anything. Your attempt at constructing a creative flame was pitiful. I mean, really, stringing together a bunch of insults among a load of babbling was hardly effective... Maybe later in life, after you have learned to read, write, spell, and count, you will have more success. True, these are rudimentary skills that many of us ”normal” people take for granted that everyone has an easy time of mastering. But we sometimes forget that there are ”challenged” persons in this world who find these things more difficult. If I had known that this was your case then I would have never read your post. It just wouldn’t have been ”right”. Sort of like parking in a handicap space. I wish you the best of luck in the emotional, and social struggles that seem to be placing such a demand on you. P.S.: You are hypocritical, greedy, violent, malevolent, vengeful, cowardly, deadly, mendacious, meretricious, loathsome, despicable, belligerent, opportunistic, barratrous, contemptible, criminal, fascistic, bigoted, racist, sexist, avaricious, tasteless, idiotic, brain-damaged, imbecilic, insane, arrogant, deceitful, demented, lame, self-righteous, byzantine, conspiratorial, satanic, fraudulent, libelous, bilious, splenetic, spastic, ignorant, clueless, illegitimate, harmful, destructive, dumb, evasive, double-talking, devious, revisionist, narrow, manipulative, paternalistic, fundamentalist, dogmatic, idolatrous, unethical, cultic, diseased, suppressive, controlling, restrictive, malignant, deceptive, dim, crazy, weird, dystopic, stifling, uncaring, plantigrade, grim, unsympathetic, jargon-spouting, censorious, secretive, aggressive, mind-numbing, arassive, poisonous, flagrant, self-destructive, abusive, socially-retarded, puerile, clueless, and generally NOT GOOD.
ok can we at least appreciate the effort he put into that wall of text? this dude realy went all out lol
 

LEWDpyon

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Huh what a strange forum

On one end you have a loon screaming about an artist shift in an medium where lead indy devs sometimes have to think quick on their feet to make sure a project runs smoothly and not run into a screeching halt because they were hit with an unforseen roadblock.

On the other you have loons mauling that loon ruthlessly with little lack of self awareness.

What a treat. Whose placing bets on the winner of the next fight?

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PaYrO212

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They can as long as there is a portal opened for them. This portal is usually open from a Witch, a warlock, or another who deals with them and want them in the world, like a cult/faction.

That's why mages are hated by the City States. Astéri being an exception. They are much more free there.
After playing "Warlock Saga" I'm starting to belive than more than one was trying to summon succubus at they will and they fail
 
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Porn_Jesus

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For instance, hardly anyone would want to see the MC's ass when he's spooning a sex demon.
Why not? A low angle view with the balls and penis can look super hot and I don't mind male butts if done correctly and good. :D


-On the second game, every succubus will have 2 different sex scenes so I can explore them more.
Oof, does that mean the generals will get 3 scenes? You always treated them special. :p


Zion i told you not the feed the troll i will reply to his trash post tomorrow since he got so many things wrong, the guy doesn't even know the differences between the duchess and the queen lol.

Just ignore him, also i told you to limit your time on f95, if not just not come here at all. You dont need to anymore anyway, focus on your patreons and what they want.
It's about time he does that and perhaps the mods are willing to do something. Usually they are not that slow when they delete posts from me. :Kappa:


Zion, if you don't mind, can you tell us when it will be finished?

Will it still take as long as usual or - since it's the final part - will it be faster?
Latest build was released at November 30, so let's say December 1. Don't expect a new one until March, there's quite a bit of work on the table. :)
 

pippobaudo137

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After lurking in this thread for a while and playing the latest chapter I decided to post some of my opinions about the game. I want to preface this by saying that I really love the premise of the game and the worldbuilding/lore Zion has managed to construct and that I want to see this series live up to its full potential, and that is the place this criticism is coming from. Hopefully Zion and others in this thread can take it with the constructive spirit in which it is meant, as I did my best to not just go "this thing sucks" but to explain why some aspects are underwhelming and offer some (imo) reasonable solutions.

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I understand some of these might be hard to retrofit on an almost finished game, but hopefully Zion can keep them in mind when working on the next games in the series.

Lastly, before a bunch of people jump on me saying "the porn is good, if you want to beat it to the tiles or to the combat mechanics that's your business", let me remind you that Zion explicitly state he wants this game to be "a good game with porn" rather than just be content with "a good porn game", and these are defenitely thing to keep in mind if you're trying to make a good game.
 
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Most of what this guy replied with pretty much avoided/missunderstood everything i said. Anyways i laid everything out, so you can call me a liar all you want but theres no denying clear objective facts. (Sorry for my AWFUL paint.net skills :ROFLMAO:)
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* The game is not consistent: the general art style changed, theres warlock saga npcs & sex scenes, the scenes themselves dont have as much individual pngs as before. I don't get why you say I'm lying about this when it's clearly the truth :ROFLMAO:

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We constantly switch from amazing to awful. It's a inconsistent mess. You expect a game to get better as you progress, here the opposite happens. Maybe this is not important, but this + downgraded scenes + many other factors = pretty fucking important if u ask me.

* You literally said f95zone members opinions are irrelevant, even though zion talks here & reads reviews consistently. (Avoiding criticism, only positive reviews are liked by him. Check it yourself.) F95zone in general is a forum where it's only purpose is to debate and critique, it's also the biggest source of income for zion since most come from here and at the end of the day we're all human being with equal opinions.

Also if you're saying only patreons opinions relevant and we ignore all of what i said, then that contradicts

* The animations were removed because they took 8 months & were too difficult to implement to every scene. I'm not specifically complaining about that, the community accepted it but at the very least expected the way simpler non animated scenes to continue, instead they make it worse + less pngs + more factors which is a heavy downgrade.

* Zion blocked me, that's completely fine and I wish zion the best of luck! I hope the game gets better for everyones sake.
indeed plus arts from ch1 to 3 are in pieces with details (eg energy drain, mc dry, an extra view(front side back view) .ch4 arts plain

no animations fine. now less details..... ok fine let just accept it until origin artist cumback
 
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After lurking in this thread for a while and playing the latest chapter I decided to post some of my opinions about the game. I want to preface this by saying that I really love the premise of the game and the worldbuilding/lore Zion has managed to construct and that I want to see this series live up to its full potential, and that is the place this criticism is coming from. Hopefully Zion and others in this thread can take it with the constructive spirit in which it is meant, as I did my best to not just go "this thing sucks" but to explain why some aspects are underwhelming and offer some (imo) reasonable solutions.

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I understand some of these might be hard to retrofit on an almost finished game, but hopefully Zion can keep them in mind when working on the next games in the series.

Lastly, before a bunch of people jump on me saying "the porn is good, if you want to beat it to the tiles or to the combat mechanics that's your business", let me remind you that Zion explicitly state he wants this game to be "a good game with porn" rather than just be content with "a good porn game", and these are defenitely thing to keep in mind if you're trying to make a good game.
cause we though animations is only problem cant help then but the rest will remain same that what everyone will think
or more (zion say he a bit greeedy)(more arts or some things more that what everyone will think)
without animation a new chapter in 5 4 moths with same amount of arts or more
turn out arts are reduced & less detailed as artist is expensive cant help then
 

Zion of Olympus

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After lurking in this thread for a while and playing the latest chapter I decided to post some of my opinions about the game. I want to preface this by saying that I really love the premise of the game and the worldbuilding/lore Zion has managed to construct and that I want to see this series live up to its full potential, and that is the place this criticism is coming from. Hopefully Zion and others in this thread can take it with the constructive spirit in which it is meant, as I did my best to not just go "this thing sucks" but to explain why some aspects are underwhelming and offer some (imo) reasonable solutions.

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I understand some of these might be hard to retrofit on an almost finished game, but hopefully Zion can keep them in mind when working on the next games in the series.

Lastly, before a bunch of people jump on me saying "the porn is good, if you want to beat it to the tiles or to the combat mechanics that's your business", let me remind you that Zion explicitly state he wants this game to be "a good game with porn" rather than just be content with "a good porn game", and these are defenitely thing to keep in mind if you're trying to make a good game.
I really like this one, thank you for taking your time to write this!

-Equipment: I tried to make equipment vary accordingly with the race, but also simple enough that a person could just equip them without too much complexity. For example:
*Angelic Relic: +HP and Magical Attack (Angels are know to have high vitality and great magical reserves)
*Demonic Relic: +Attack (Demons are extremely aggressive and focused on attack)
*Dwarven Relic: +Magical Defense (Dwarven could nullify magic)
*Elven Relic: +Defense (They were know to create protective runes, having Magisters seeking their runes to put on their armor their entire lives)

I try to vary a bit with the relics, but they turned up too OP lol
It's hard to balance a game.

-Dungeons: I'll try to make something new with the dungeons. It just takes time for you to get the right idea, you know what I mean? Developing good dungeons/areas takes time, I like to think that I'm learning as time goes by and with each release.

-Maps: Same problem as above. I'll try to vary them more. I think chapter 5 will be a blast when it comes to this, since each area will reflect the season of the succubus.
+ I like to make more about what it fits the lore, even if it does get a little boring.
In this latest chapter, although the main area is same-y, I try to vary its surroundings and optional areas like rain and fog.

Thanks for the review! I'll keep trying to improve! :)
 

ZettaiZero

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Hello Zion i am curious if its possible to meet the good natured succubus Imp girl and Cow Succubus again? is it possible for them to be a potential lover/familiar and bond with them?
 

Mr.Gamer

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Why not? A low angle view with the balls and penis can look super hot and I don't mind male butts if done correctly and good. :D
Well, there's already a few scenes that could have improved upon this in SC, like the one with the kitsune or the sex scene in the prologue; but with the way that the art is going, I doubt if it'll we'll get an detailed view of the men enjoying the last minutes of their lives anytime soon.

But it's not exactly an cheap move, in my opinion, to keep the men featureless, mostly because that effort is going towards something more important (hopefully Zion doesn't run out of plants to model the Leaf Clan on) and we're already seeing the cutbacks with the NPCs that hardly anyone cares about. Plus, there's also the case of Zion is kind of pushing the envelope by adding even more sex scenes in the next game.

Although, it would be nice if Aeolos was an little bit more detailed, but it's either him or the sex demon of the week, in this case. But personally, I care more about the women than the men when it comes to porn.
 

Porn_Jesus

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I try to vary a bit with the relics, but they turned up too OP lol
It's hard to balance a game.
As I said before it's ok if they last for an entire dungeon until they get nuked by fresh runes but as OP as they are right now they can cover the player for two dungeons which is just too much.^^ Optional rewards, if you did good, are ok but maybe you can change them a bit like having a small HP or Mana regen every turn and take some stats from them.


-Dungeons: I'll try to make something new with the dungeons. It just takes time for you to get the right idea, you know what I mean? Developing good dungeons/areas takes time, I like to think that I'm learning as time goes by and with each release.
It's a tough choice. On one hand you don't want to spend too much time on optional dungeons and at the same time it's easy to copy and paste them. Maybe you can play some more with the available RPG Maker assets or even get additional ones for the future. I don't mind the similar look because I'm there to get my buffs and get out asap, not to seek the main story there.^^


-Maps: Same problem as above. I'll try to vary them more. I think chapter 5 will be a blast when it comes to this, since each area will reflect the season of the succubus.
+ I like to make more about what it fits the lore, even if it does get a little boring.
In this latest chapter, although the main area is same-y, I try to vary its surroundings and optional areas like rain and fog.
So far I think you had a good variety with the story dungeons. The land of the tribes is a giant forest, you can only do so much with it and giving it a corrupted look due to the Succubus was a good idea. I'm sure people will get pleased if we can enter the cities and the land where they are located. Too much wood, that's all. :p


Well, there's already a few scenes that could have improved upon this in SC, like the one with the kitsune or the sex scene in the prologue; but with the way that the art is going, I doubt if it'll we'll get an detailed view of the men enjoying the last minutes of their lives anytime soon.
What good would that be? I'm happy if we get a decent portrait of the people who get killed (like with the scene between the queen and the resistance guy who got drained or the other guys who were killed by the queen's generals) but I don't need to see their faces or entire body during the rape scene.


But it's not exactly an cheap move, in my opinion, to keep the men featureless, mostly because that effort is going towards something more important (hopefully Zion doesn't run out of plants to model the Leaf Clan on) and we're already seeing the cutbacks with the NPCs that hardly anyone cares about. Plus, there's also the case of Zion is kind of pushing the envelope by adding even more sex scenes in the next game.
Yes, it would be a bit over the top to give those NPCs so much attention and do smaller steps on the main guys to keep the deadlines. Ofc the quality standards must be kept, I can't tolerate a massive drop there just to keep the deadlines. If Zion needs one or two more months from time to time he can have them as long as he stays true to his vision.


Although, it would be nice if Aeolos was an little bit more detailed, but it's either him or the sex demon of the week, in this case. But personally, I care more about the women than the men when it comes to porn.
I agree, the new portrait of him with more armor looks a bit less detailed. Would be nice to have that fixed at some point. When I play someone for 20 chapters I would like to have a pleasant time with that person. :D
 
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