I finished Chapter 2 on Sunday morning, I took my time and enjoyed the game. I'm generally not a fan of femdom but this game features certain fetishes that are simply too erotic and done in good taste. In general it's great, my problem is when something has decapitation, pegging, gore or any other nasty fetish - is when I back off. The subtlety in some of the scenes are done masterfully, my favorites by far are the Spider Succubus, Succubus Queen (Flashback, especially when she's about to sit on the throne and the build-up before that. Hot as hell, although her proportions need some work.), Black Rose and lastly Gloriosa. I hope the quality remains constant throughout the game and features that well made balance of tease and eroticism/sex. I really like the game and I hope it does well and that it gets more supporters.
Constructive Criticisms:
-Some of the picture portraits are hard to define facially, especially when you have a high definition monitor. Whoever the artist was needs to add shading, it's really hard to denote any kind of emotion/expression (especially the mouth) of characters such as Red Winter, Iole and many others drawn in the same manner. I don't have this problem with Shaman. For some reason modern anime style lacks this, it's not that I hate it, but that it feels like it's missing something. I always have to strain my eye or get even closer to the screen to notice a difference.
-The second is the writing, I've seen some spelling mistakes right at the beginning of the game, and some of the sentence structures needs to be fixed. Some of the lore description is great and I'm interesting in seeing the world be further developed.
-I found the combat too easy. It needs depth and for it to be more strategic. In the Vivid Forest alone I must have found over 80x-Darh Yrjouh healing roots. I expected the Leaf Clan Succubi to feature a wide variety of plant based attacks/skills to be at their disposal but alas, their strategy is shallow.
I got more to say but I don't wanna overload it. You're doing a great job, Zion of Olympus, keep it up. And I cannot wait for the 3rd Chapter.