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Phantasos

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Welcome to FMC games.
So just because the main character is a female it means that she has to get fucked by absolutely disgusting men? I say 'disgusting' because these guys are mainly ugly bastards who don't even try to take care of their bodies or follow basic hygiene. Like, I get that the guy here has a big ass nose, is super 'nerdy' looking, obviously has never done any kind of exercise, or even just basic jogging, and isn't 'conventionally attractive'; but why does he have to be a person who can't even follow basic skincare? The guy is covered in fucking gross pimples. It's an issue that can easily be solved by just showering daily. It's just fucking disgusting to look at. I guess someone would be into that if they, themselves, are that kinda disgusting incel who is also a pimply mess of 'skin issues' that could be easily solved by just basic hygiene?

Sorry, but it's just disgusting to the majority of people.
 

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This looks good, just a pet peeve of mine, i usually blacklist the kinetic novel tag, and this appeared to me because there's "choices" in the game so it was not tagged, but realistically they don't matter at all and you usually have to do all of them, so they're kinda pointless, that kinda bummed me out.
Yes, you’re absolutely right, buddy, you noticed it well. I’ve faced the same situation: when you create complex branching and story moments based on one-sided choices, players start complaining that the game is confusing and unclear. So now I’m at a crossroads - not sure how to handle it properly. I’m curious, how would you do it?
 

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So just because the main character is a female it means that she has to get fucked by absolutely disgusting men? I say 'disgusting' because these guys are mainly ugly bastards who don't even try to take care of their bodies or follow basic hygiene. Like, I get that the guy here has a big ass nose, is super 'nerdy' looking, obviously has never done any kind of exercise, or even just basic jogging, and isn't 'conventionally attractive'; but why does he have to be a person who can't even follow basic skincare? The guy is covered in fucking gross pimples. It's an issue that can easily be solved by just showering daily. It's just fucking disgusting to look at. I guess someone would be into that if they, themselves, are that kinda disgusting incel who is also a pimply mess of 'skin issues' that could be easily solved by just basic hygiene?

Sorry, but it's just disgusting to the majority of people.
Man, the world isn’t perfect. There are both beautiful and unattractive people in it. You’ll have to accept that and just keep living.
 

Phantasos

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Man, the world isn’t perfect. There are both beautiful and unattractive people in it. You’ll have to accept that and just keep living.
Oh, no, mate I totally get that. But the guy in this game? Holy fuck, it's like he fell down the ugly tree and got hit with every fucking branch there was. Maybe I'm just too picky, but I never understand the creators of these kind of games who just decide to include the ugliest motherfuckers possible. I mean, I guess it's a self-insert thing? I dunno.
 
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HolyRascal

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Oh, no, mate I totally get that. But the guy in this game? Holy fuck, it's like he fell down the ugly tree and got hit with every fucking branch there was. Maybe I'm just too picky, but I never understand the creators of these kind of games who just decide to include the ugliest motherfuckers possible. I mean, I guess it's a self-insert thing? I dunno.
Don’t take everything so personally. It’s just a negative nerdy character, that’s all.
 

Phantasos

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Don’t take everything so personally. It’s just a negative nerdy character, that’s all.
What? Why do you think I'm taking anything personally here? I'm just not a fan of seeing ugly fuckers in my porn and am pointing out a constant theme of such happening when the game has a female character as the lead, like she has to suffer through all that in order to be interesting. That's not at all me being personally insulted, or anything. It's just me wishing that the creator is capable of writing well and not making the suffering of the female lead the entirety of her arc. Are you taking any of this personally? I mean fuck, mate, it ain't like you're the one pushing this ugly guy on everyone.
 
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HolyRascal

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What? Why do you think I'm taking anything personally here? I'm just not a fan of seeing ugly fuckers in my porn and am pointing out a constant theme of such happening when the game has a female character as the lead, like she has to suffer through all that in order to be interesting. That's not at all me being personally insulted, or anything. It's just me wishing that the creator is capable of writing well and not making the suffering of the female lead the entirety of her arc. Are you taking any of this personally? I mean fuck, mate, it ain't like you're the one pushing this ugly guy on everyone.
Buddy, it’s just a game. Don’t worry, he won’t appear again. You can relax, everything will be fine. From now on, there will only be handsome, kind, and charming men. :)
 

Phantasos

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Buddy, it’s just a game. Don’t worry, he won’t appear again. You can relax, everything will be fine. From now on, there will only be handsome, kind, and charming men. :)
Oh...kay? Kind of a weird response, honestly. But like I said, I'm just not a fan when a creator ruins amazing female art/models by making the ugliest person they can possibly think of as the male focus who fucks those women. I'm just talking shit on the creators of these kind of games who force that kind of thing on the players because they're narratively bankrupt in making their characters interesting. I mean, chill the fuck out, it ain't like I'm talking shit on you as an individual. You seem cool enough, I'm sure you'd make far better creative decisions than that.
 
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Oh...kay? Kind of a weird response, honestly. But like I said, I'm just not a fan when a creator ruins amazing female art/models by making the ugliest person they can possibly think of as the male focus who fucks those women. I'm just talking shit on the creators of these kind of games who force that kind of thing on the players because they're narratively bankrupt in making their characters interesting. I mean, chill the fuck out, it ain't like I'm talking shit on you as an individual. You seem cool enough, I'm sure you'd make far better creative decisions than that.
It sounds like you have a really good sense of aesthetics. Maybe you’d enjoy trying your hand at creating 3D models - I’m sure you’d do it with great style and taste. From the way you talk about the visual side of games, it seems like you’ve got a natural eye for it.
 
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Try starting a new game from the first level, then check the autosaves - there should be files created automatically. Maybe they’re still available. Just give this option a try. I know the chances are small, but it’s worth checking.
I've seen the two different directories, but I can not import a save made in V0.31 in the V0.35. I hope this don't succeed in following versions of the game, that is very funny.
 

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I've seen the two different directories, but I can not import a save made in V0.31 in the V0.35. I hope this don't succeed in following versions of the game, that is very funny.
Yes, I noticed that mistake and have already fixed it. It won’t appear in future versions.
 
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Kinematic novel with irrelevant choices and pointless gameplay. Some nice renders and Anna and Lyn are gorgeous even thou they are over-exaggerated.

My dude, you don't need to create ultra different branching narratives to have choices, but you can at least allow us to choose our flavor of ice-cream.

For example:
Morning Exercise: Instead of having repeat just have the option to do it
  • Option 1: Exercise (without panties)
  • Option 2: Skip

That's it, you don't have to create enormous branches, but at least allow us to customize the story.

Let's say another example that have consequences but they are not branching
Keep your boyfriend (alien in human costume) in chastity, Yes / No, then when having Anna sending him some tit pic you can cut to a single image with with
  1. If in chastity, show him salivating and with blue-balls
  2. If not in chastity, show him jacking off
This takes some work but relatively simple. Put the but-plug? If yes then show boyfriend removing, if not then skip images of but-plug (you just need to be creative with angles)

Lyn is cumming: Cum inside / cum outside.

Driver: Fuck him / just have a conversation.

These choices can have small flavor text later without much consequence or even new images, literally just add dialog, these add a lot of flavor to the game:
  • Fuck Lyn
    • Confesses to cucking boyfriend when messaging him
      1. If he is caged then talk about how much bigger Lyn's cock is
      2. If he is not caged then talk about how she wants to have threesome
    • Talks about Lyn as a friend
    • Don't say anything
  • Dont Fuck Lyn
    • Talks about Lyn as a friend
And most importantly, ability skip types of scenes, like boyfriend cum eating. Remember that fetishes are VERY finicky, like foot fetishist, some like the smell, others like to suck toes, others like to lick soles, others is about humiliation and dominance, and these sometimes are completely different people (the Veen Diagram are almost 4 circles touching), for real, there are some guys that are jizzing by a femdom making the sub smell her feet, but go immediately limp if the sub begin to suck the toe.

This takes some works and ingenuity, but can be easily achieved. These choices are just flavors for the player and this is one of the things we look forward the most and they don't interfere with the story progression (if they do you can have a alternative scene "sex+exposition"/"just exposition")

The renders are great and I like the main character and Lyn, but this flatness that makes it into a kinematic novel really makes the game flavorless.

An my god dude, did you really had to go with alien in human skin as a boyfriend? I get it that he is supposed to be just a nerd, but this is a porn game, you could have gone with a femboy, or wholesome shortking, or a futa gangly nerdette that is still somewhat cute? You known, something that does not make my dick go soft just at the mention of his name.

The game is good dude, and you should keep developing the way like you feel like you should, it's your project and it's up to you where you wanna go, but I really think this can make the game better. Either way, good luck and most importantly, have fun.
 

HolyRascal

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Jan 18, 2024
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Kinematic novel with irrelevant choices and pointless gameplay. Some nice renders and Anna and Lyn are gorgeous even thou they are over-exaggerated.

My dude, you don't need to create ultra different branching narratives to have choices, but you can at least allow us to choose our flavor of ice-cream.

For example:
Morning Exercise: Instead of having repeat just have the option to do it
  • Option 1: Exercise (without panties)
  • Option 2: Skip

That's it, you don't have to create enormous branches, but at least allow us to customize the story.

Let's say another example that have consequences but they are not branching
Keep your boyfriend (alien in human costume) in chastity, Yes / No, then when having Anna sending him some tit pic you can cut to a single image with with
  1. If in chastity, show him salivating and with blue-balls
  2. If not in chastity, show him jacking off
This takes some work but relatively simple. Put the but-plug? If yes then show boyfriend removing, if not then skip images of but-plug (you just need to be creative with angles)

Lyn is cumming: Cum inside / cum outside.

Driver: Fuck him / just have a conversation.

These choices can have small flavor text later without much consequence or even new images, literally just add dialog, these add a lot of flavor to the game:
  • Fuck Lyn
    • Confesses to cucking boyfriend when messaging him
      1. If he is caged then talk about how much bigger Lyn's cock is
      2. If he is not caged then talk about how she wants to have threesome
    • Talks about Lyn as a friend
    • Don't say anything
  • Dont Fuck Lyn
    • Talks about Lyn as a friend
And most importantly, ability skip types of scenes, like boyfriend cum eating. Remember that fetishes are VERY finicky, like foot fetishist, some like the smell, others like to suck toes, others like to lick soles, others is about humiliation and dominance, and these sometimes are completely different people (the Veen Diagram are almost 4 circles touching), for real, there are some guys that are jizzing by a femdom making the sub smell her feet, but go immediately limp if the sub begin to suck the toe.

This takes some works and ingenuity, but can be easily achieved. These choices are just flavors for the player and this is one of the things we look forward the most and they don't interfere with the story progression (if they do you can have a alternative scene "sex+exposition"/"just exposition")

The renders are great and I like the main character and Lyn, but this flatness that makes it into a kinematic novel really makes the game flavorless.

An my god dude, did you really had to go with alien in human skin as a boyfriend? I get it that he is supposed to be just a nerd, but this is a porn game, you could have gone with a femboy, or wholesome shortking, or a futa gangly nerdette that is still somewhat cute? You known, something that does not make my dick go soft just at the mention of his name.

The game is good dude, and you should keep developing the way like you feel like you should, it's your project and it's up to you where you wanna go, but I really think this can make the game better. Either way, good luck and most importantly, have fun.

Hi! Thanks for such a detailed and thoughtful reply, I’ll definitely take everything into account. It’s just that there are often situations where multiple choices must be implemented, which means creating different branches -for example, whether a character has certain clothes, picks up an item, or decides to use something. All of that requires extra development time and effort. Most players just expect a sequence of scenes without complex decisions. I used to make a game where players had to make choices, find items, and solve puzzles, and most complaints weren’t about quality but about the fact that they had to think, explore, and wait too long to reach the next scene. What I’m trying to say is that most players who leave positive feedback and ratings aren’t looking for complicated branching or deep mechanics. They simply want an easy-to-follow story, something like Counter-Strike, where the action starts right away without long preparation or thinking.
 

HolyRascal

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Kinematic novel with irrelevant choices and pointless gameplay. Some nice renders and Anna and Lyn are gorgeous even thou they are over-exaggerated.

My dude, you don't need to create ultra different branching narratives to have choices, but you can at least allow us to choose our flavor of ice-cream.

For example:
Morning Exercise: Instead of having repeat just have the option to do it
  • Option 1: Exercise (without panties)
  • Option 2: Skip

That's it, you don't have to create enormous branches, but at least allow us to customize the story.

Let's say another example that have consequences but they are not branching
Keep your boyfriend (alien in human costume) in chastity, Yes / No, then when having Anna sending him some tit pic you can cut to a single image with with
  1. If in chastity, show him salivating and with blue-balls
  2. If not in chastity, show him jacking off
This takes some work but relatively simple. Put the but-plug? If yes then show boyfriend removing, if not then skip images of but-plug (you just need to be creative with angles)

Lyn is cumming: Cum inside / cum outside.

Driver: Fuck him / just have a conversation.

These choices can have small flavor text later without much consequence or even new images, literally just add dialog, these add a lot of flavor to the game:
  • Fuck Lyn
    • Confesses to cucking boyfriend when messaging him
      1. If he is caged then talk about how much bigger Lyn's cock is
      2. If he is not caged then talk about how she wants to have threesome
    • Talks about Lyn as a friend
    • Don't say anything
  • Dont Fuck Lyn
    • Talks about Lyn as a friend
And most importantly, ability skip types of scenes, like boyfriend cum eating. Remember that fetishes are VERY finicky, like foot fetishist, some like the smell, others like to suck toes, others like to lick soles, others is about humiliation and dominance, and these sometimes are completely different people (the Veen Diagram are almost 4 circles touching), for real, there are some guys that are jizzing by a femdom making the sub smell her feet, but go immediately limp if the sub begin to suck the toe.

This takes some works and ingenuity, but can be easily achieved. These choices are just flavors for the player and this is one of the things we look forward the most and they don't interfere with the story progression (if they do you can have a alternative scene "sex+exposition"/"just exposition")

The renders are great and I like the main character and Lyn, but this flatness that makes it into a kinematic novel really makes the game flavorless.

An my god dude, did you really had to go with alien in human skin as a boyfriend? I get it that he is supposed to be just a nerd, but this is a porn game, you could have gone with a femboy, or wholesome shortking, or a futa gangly nerdette that is still somewhat cute? You known, something that does not make my dick go soft just at the mention of his name.

The game is good dude, and you should keep developing the way like you feel like you should, it's your project and it's up to you where you wanna go, but I really think this can make the game better. Either way, good luck and most importantly, have fun.

Yeah, and I’d also like to add, my friend, you have to understand the situation from my side. I’m trying to please as many people as possible, but everyone has different preferences, and each player pulls the blanket in their own direction. As you can imagine, it’s impossible to please everyone, so I try to find a balance between players’ wishes and what they actually enjoy.
 
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