VN Ren'Py Abandoned Summer Camp [v0.1.6] [All Natural Games]

[Virulenz]

AlphaDlaW
You forgot a few details...
1. puberty...overflowing hormones tend to make girls horny...the described weather isnt helping to cool down, but sweating and pheromones work well together
2. the mc is the only guy in this whole camp, so its either fight over him, be faster than others or collaborate with the others...most girls wouldnt choose the last option in the beginning and since he is a headshrinker it would be pretty stupid to fight because the loser would most likley be the first in his therapy...leaves being faster than the others
3. we life in a fucked up time, virginity has lost its value and became a stigma for most teenagers, so getting rid of it is prefered to keeping it
4. the mc initiated all of what happend before. That sister of the exgirlfriend had a crush on you, but was totally clueless, you started it...that black girls background is living hell, it was the first time someone other than her father cared about her well being and the massage worked up her arousal. The peeping girl...okay, there it was the monitor who started it and she was already a slut before you came into the camp and surely did some stuff with some girls before. Did i forget someone? Ah, yeah, the pissing girl...well, she was already curious and aroused before the camp and without her wet pants trauma she would have fucked her nerdy guy before, so not surprising the shocktherapy worked in your favor and her naive religious upbringing almost forced her to fall in love with the guy she decides to fuck. So he manipulated everyone into the direction of his dick...why should he openly push the girls on a way if he can be subtile enough to let them think it was their idea in the first place? If its too subtile for you, there are enough slaver and pimp games where you can push the girls with as much force as you want, i'm glad this is not one of them.
5. in this camp is only one shower, one canteen, one beach, ...except for the beds everything is limited to one and it was never planned to threw a guy in this camp...so its bount to happen the girls run into you and you run into them. Should the girls wait outside in their towels? Or kick you out?

 

[CreepyPet]

The camera lamp rendering simply ruins this for me sorry. If there was an actual lighting setup instead it would have been much better.

 

[AlphaDlaW]

AlphaDlaW
You forgot a few details...
1. puberty...overflowing hormones tend to make girls horny...the described weather isnt helping to cool down, but sweating and pheromones work well together
2. the mc is the only guy in this whole camp, so its either fight over him, be faster than others or collaborate with the others...most girls wouldnt choose the last option in the beginning and since he is a headshrinker it would be pretty stupid to fight because the loser would most likley be the first in his therapy...leaves being faster than the others
3. we life in a fucked up time, virginity has lost its value and became a stigma for most teenagers, so getting rid of it is prefered to keeping it
4. the mc initiated all of what happend before. That sister of the exgirlfriend had a crush on you, but was totally clueless, you started it...that black girls background is living hell, it was the first time someone other than her father cared about her well being and the massage worked up her arousal. The peeping girl...okay, there it was the monitor who started it and she was already a slut before you came into the camp and surely did some stuff with some girls before. Did i forget someone? Ah, yeah, the pissing girl...well, she was already curious and aroused before the camp and without her wet pants trauma she would have fucked her nerdy guy before, so not surprising the shocktherapy worked in your favor and her naive religious upbringing almost forced her to fall in love with the guy she decides to fuck. So he manipulated everyone into the direction of his dick...why should he openly push the girls on a way if he can be subtile enough to let them think it was their idea in the first place? If its too subtile for you, there are enough slaver and pimp games where you can push the girls with as much force as you want, i'm glad this is not one of them.
5. in this camp is only one shower, one canteen, one beach, ...except for the beds everything is limited to one and it was never planned to threw a guy in this camp...so its bount to happen the girls run into you and you run into them. Should the girls wait outside in their towels? Or kick you out?

1. even with that said, girls are not that quick and fast to get naked for a guy let alone get involved with them sexually. but this is a porn game so its fine but yea, a lil less them being the ones to do it(even if they want to) and more of the mc manipulating them into it would be better imo.
2. does not matter if he's the only male at the camp. again, there's no way all the girls are just gonna throw themselves at him sexually. can they all be into him? yes. but is the straight forwardness of the girls who have scenes in the game so far that kinda throws me off. maybe later down the line this will change with more shy charecters.
3. yes you are correct but girls still rather not be called a slut or be labeled a thot. so yes, girls do want to lose it faster then before, but to some guy they just met. maybe some girls but as I said, every girl so far in this game that has a sexual scene are just so willing.
4. no he did not. the girls in the shower started it. the Brazil girl started it. with the lil sister of his gf, it was perfect. she was into him but he pushed her into it. when you say why he should push them when he could be subtile enough to manipulate them, you're kinda being, idk the word for it, but basically when I say push them into it, I mean that main should subtile push them into. so you misunderstood me there.
5. only shower in the camp does not mean they'll take a shower together. you complete miss my point. I do not have a problem with them running into each other. you're purposely being ignorant or playing dumb here asking if he should kick them out or if they should kick him out or if they should wait outside. its like you're purposely ignoring the obvious thing that should be done in that situation irl. which would be the girls coming in, seeing a man naked taking shower, saying sorry, and then leaving. why was that not an option you picked when replying to me? because its the logical option and instead you gave examples that were just stupid. sorry if insulted you.

as I said I love this game. in some situation, it makes sense why a girl would throw themselves on the mc. I just hope not all the girl are like this and I doubt they will. but the ones who do, just make it make sense. when it comes to April, it does. she's innocent, been sheltered and has recently been awaken to this side of her. the scene in the bathroom could be written off as them being high, which the creator has. so mc gf lil sis and April were done right in my mind. Daniella not so much. but maybe she's just a lil slut. cause she just met the mc and is already getting naked in front of him and jerking/blowing him saying that no one has ever been so nice to her. like bruh, you just met him. I wish it was that easy lmao

 

[AlphaDlaW]

1. even with that said, girls are not that quick and fast to get naked for a guy let alone get involved with them sexually. but this is a porn game so its fine but yea, a lil less them being the ones to do it(even if they want to) and more of the mc manipulating them into it would be better imo.
2. does not matter if he's the only male at the camp. again, there's no way all the girls are just gonna throw themselves at him sexually. can they all be into him? yes. but is the straight forwardness of the girls who have scenes in the game so far that kinda throws me off. maybe later down the line this will change with more shy charecters.
3. yes you are correct but girls still rather not be called a slut or be labeled a thot. so yes, girls do want to lose it faster then before, but to some guy they just met. maybe some girls but as I said, every girl so far in this game that has a sexual scene are just so willing.
4. no he did not. the girls in the shower started it. the Brazil girl started it. with the lil sister of his gf, it was perfect. she was into him but he pushed her into it. when you say why he should push them when he could be subtile enough to manipulate them, you're kinda being, idk the word for it, but basically when I say push them into it, I mean that main should subtile push them into. so you misunderstood me there.
5. only shower in the camp does not mean they'll take a shower together. you complete miss my point. I do not have a problem with them running into each other. you're purposely being ignorant or playing dumb here asking if he should kick them out or if they should kick him out or if they should wait outside. its like you're purposely ignoring the obvious thing that should be done in that situation irl. which would be the girls coming in, seeing a man naked taking shower, saying sorry, and then leaving. why was that not an option you picked when replying to me? because its the logical option and instead you gave examples that were just stupid. sorry if insulted you.

as I said I love this game. in some situation, it makes sense why a girl would throw themselves on the mc. I just hope not all the girl are like this and I doubt they will. but the ones who do, just make it make sense. when it comes to April, it does. she's innocent, been sheltered and has recently been awaken to this side of her. the scene in the bathroom could be written off as them being high, which the creator has. so mc gf lil sis and April were done right in my mind. Daniella not so much. but maybe she's just a lil slut. cause she just met the mc and is already getting naked in front of him and jerking/blowing him saying that no one has ever been so nice to her. like bruh, you just met him. I wish it was that easy lmao

AlphaDlaW
You forgot a few details...
1. puberty...overflowing hormones tend to make girls horny...the described weather isnt helping to cool down, but sweating and pheromones work well together
2. the mc is the only guy in this whole camp, so its either fight over him, be faster than others or collaborate with the others...most girls wouldnt choose the last option in the beginning and since he is a headshrinker it would be pretty stupid to fight because the loser would most likley be the first in his therapy...leaves being faster than the others
3. we life in a fucked up time, virginity has lost its value and became a stigma for most teenagers, so getting rid of it is prefered to keeping it
4. the mc initiated all of what happend before. That sister of the exgirlfriend had a crush on you, but was totally clueless, you started it...that black girls background is living hell, it was the first time someone other than her father cared about her well being and the massage worked up her arousal. The peeping girl...okay, there it was the monitor who started it and she was already a slut before you came into the camp and surely did some stuff with some girls before. Did i forget someone? Ah, yeah, the pissing girl...well, she was already curious and aroused before the camp and without her wet pants trauma she would have fucked her nerdy guy before, so not surprising the shocktherapy worked in your favor and her naive religious upbringing almost forced her to fall in love with the guy she decides to fuck. So he manipulated everyone into the direction of his dick...why should he openly push the girls on a way if he can be subtile enough to let them think it was their idea in the first place? If its too subtile for you, there are enough slaver and pimp games where you can push the girls with as much force as you want, i'm glad this is not one of them.
5. in this camp is only one shower, one canteen, one beach, ...except for the beds everything is limited to one and it was never planned to threw a guy in this camp...so its bount to happen the girls run into you and you run into them. Should the girls wait outside in their towels? Or kick you out?

as for the other adults, I was not talking about them at all. my post is specifically only about the teen girls at the camp.

 

[AlphaDlaW]

AlphaDlaW
You forgot a few details...
1. puberty...overflowing hormones tend to make girls horny...the described weather isnt helping to cool down, but sweating and pheromones work well together
2. the mc is the only guy in this whole camp, so its either fight over him, be faster than others or collaborate with the others...most girls wouldnt choose the last option in the beginning and since he is a headshrinker it would be pretty stupid to fight because the loser would most likley be the first in his therapy...leaves being faster than the others
3. we life in a fucked up time, virginity has lost its value and became a stigma for most teenagers, so getting rid of it is prefered to keeping it
4. the mc initiated all of what happend before. That sister of the exgirlfriend had a crush on you, but was totally clueless, you started it...that black girls background is living hell, it was the first time someone other than her father cared about her well being and the massage worked up her arousal. The peeping girl...okay, there it was the monitor who started it and she was already a slut before you came into the camp and surely did some stuff with some girls before. Did i forget someone? Ah, yeah, the pissing girl...well, she was already curious and aroused before the camp and without her wet pants trauma she would have fucked her nerdy guy before, so not surprising the shocktherapy worked in your favor and her naive religious upbringing almost forced her to fall in love with the guy she decides to fuck. So he manipulated everyone into the direction of his dick...why should he openly push the girls on a way if he can be subtile enough to let them think it was their idea in the first place? If its too subtile for you, there are enough slaver and pimp games where you can push the girls with as much force as you want, i'm glad this is not one of them.
5. in this camp is only one shower, one canteen, one beach, ...except for the beds everything is limited to one and it was never planned to threw a guy in this camp...so its bount to happen the girls run into you and you run into them. Should the girls wait outside in their towels? Or kick you out?

lastly, I want you to understand that, and I'm just now realizing this to, I don't nesseraly have a problem with he girls being willing. its more about how calm they are about it. they're not nervous for the most part and so okay with everything and I think this is what bothers me. like with the mc gf lil sister. I think its perfect because she really wanted it but was a lil nervous about it and mc kindly pushed her into it.

 

[Virulenz]

1. Obviously i am out of expertise here because i am lesbian and would never willingly lose a single piece of clothes if a guy could see me. But i never had the slightest problem in stripping, showing off or teasing girls since my childhood. I also had sex with girls i didnt know longer than 30 Minutes, some i still dont know their names. Thats something individual, you may need to know your sexpartners, others only need sex and want partners for it.
2. Thats the adult game factor. Remember the fat guy in the bar, he already complained about your surreal high luck with the girls and the waitress was the perfect example. Thats just how the MC is written to add some raunchy scenes in every update inclusive the initial release. Slow burning buid ups dont get much support in the beginning and dont hav much new stuff in the end.
3. I complained about that slut/whore crap too, so that dont need to be argued. You know the next 3 words of a guy who calls me a whore? "ouch my balls".
4. the girls in the shower were high at that time. We run a woman shelter here...do you know how grateful and clingy humans can become if they lived years in fear and you are the first one being nice, caring or even supportive? Thats exaclty what the MC did, he was caring, helping and even gave her some comfort and pleasure with the massage...and you think she started it? Maybe you should reread the talk during the massage, i get the feeling you prefered to watch the pictures
5. I could insult you in the same way. Dunno what your rl looks like, but i give a fuck if someone is using a public shower and i want to use it too, no matter how sexy or ugly the person is. Okay, i really would never shower with a guy, but thats an entire other level, i hate guys, i wouldnt be embaressed if one sees me naked, i would just explode in a blood rage and kill it...but thats me and most girls dont share my problems with men. Lots of factors determine if people care about being nude in front of others or not, honestly, i am to lazy to make a list for you, but many people dont have any problems with it. Your example of saying sorry and then waiting around and getting later to sleep is the stupid one. The camp stuff dont waits until the girls wake up, so they need their sleep as well.

As said before, the game will deliver content with every update, so the shy and inhibited ones will come later. Better be happy the camp is not a bunch of repressed nuns.
Do you really think people in some slums who live with the fear of starving have much privacy? Or many clothes? She grew up with her father under such conditions...i dont think she has many problems being naked in front of an adult guy who dont wants to harm her. But as said, maybe you red her story again.
However, this fucking heat drives me insane, i need a shower myself...lets see if i run into someone there ^^

 

[Spatenklopper]

All Natural Games

So far very solid, but you would have to check the personal pronouns again.
Sometimes something like her / his is used incorrectly.

As an example


.... his underpants.

or



I'm assuming the MC isn't a shemale so it would be his cock, or in that case it.

But this has happened before.
Keep up the good work, I'll keep an eye on this.

 

[Nigelation2]

I've tested it several times in several phones and it works fine always...

I'm in the same boat as him, where abouts dose it store the game files so I can check since I tried to do it through a actual apk installer and it's saying its installed

 

[CTR -X]

NO LIMITS

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I prefer my women potato years old.

 

[Rainblo]

Damn All Natural Games taking some heat up in this thread.
I know it can be tough, but don't let it get to you.
This is your story, tell it the way you feel it should be told.

It amazes me the amount of entitlement I see in the threads on this forum.
Giving your opinion on content is one thing, hell I do that, and will in this post.
But the vitriol I've seen is unwarranted and childish.
Like people think these games are being made for their own personal consumption and singular enjoyment and must be tailored as such.
You don't go to the library and read Star Wars then write a letter to George Lucas crying that Princess Leia and Jabba the Hut is NTR so that scene needs to be removed from the book.

Now I'll throw in my 2 cents on the game in general:
I am 100% anti NTR and Femdom(Fem dominating MC). I search the forums for NTR/Femdom discussion before installing and immediately uninstall if it is found and unskippable. I count it as NTR even if I don't have to watch it in game and it's just mentioned "Romantic interest slept with other dude last night while actively dating/boning MC" or hinted at.

That being said, I did not get any NTR feelings from the flashback scene.

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I honestly would be more pissed if I had to watch MC fuck that stretch marked chubby on the first page of the forums or the boner killer lunch lady. If I wanted to see a chubby get fucked, I'd ride my bike to the bar and get a real one.
Yet I also recognize, for some people that may play, or maybe even the author, these characters may be turn ons.

I'm also pretty anti huge cock. If this game wasn't so interesting to me in other ways, I would have uninstalled it for the size of MCs package alone. I have DAZ, I know it's possible to make them smaller. Even in a fantasy world there's a point where the mind says "That's just too big" and it is impossible to suspend disbelief and it just detracts from the experience. MC is deflowering girls with a monster that most women I've had the size discussion with say they wouldn't go near.
I've also noticed in most games, it becomes a lazy writing crutch. Instead of real character connection it's all about how big and huge and how great that giant cock is. Almost every sex scene becomes a discussion about or tribute to size. It's fucking lazy, and so over done in games that it's actually become boring.

All that said, I did enjoy the game so far. That scene at the beach was fucking top notch. I do hope to see the story fleshed out a bit, while most of the characters are incredibly hot, I can also see the potential of depth and personality in them.
I also like the blanket choose your age at the beginning, I think that was a good way to let everyone choose their comfort level for the clearly over 18 models.
I hope the creator doesn't take all the negativity to heart and give up.

At the end of the day, this story/game belongs to one person, and only one person has to be completely happy with it.
The rest of us can only enjoy the ride.
Sure, politely and respectfully add input along the way (I hope this post was a good example of that), but respect that you aren't the person putting hours into creating this shit.
It's easy to judge when you're taking 30 minutes to fap to what took someone else potentially days or weeks to create.
If it becomes unbearable or unenjoyable to you, uninstall and move on.
Maybe make a (polite & respectful) post as to why you chose to move on, so the creator can take it under advisement and choose whether or not to address it, but this lashing out I've seen is retarded.
So many games I've enjoyed have been abandoned and I can't help but wonder how much of it was driven by assholes tearing apart their game for no reason other than, "Didn't match muh personal sexual preferences."

 

[theickobicko]

mediocre at best. the models are mediocre as well, until the time they are horrible. i mean they are fine for most of the time, and then at some scene they make those weird faces or positions that are kind of horrendous. the animations are bad, choppy and again with weird facial expressions.
half the time the writing is absurd. the story itself is kind of absent, i guess there are different background for the girls, but nothing beyond that from what i can tell. the MC is magically attracting all females (without actually having anything magical in the story - they are just falling for him from nowhere)
so it looks like a porn slideshow, with the exception that the porn itself is not very exciting.
in general - it's very boring. i cant even reach the end of the current version, i just get bored and constantly switch to something else.

 

[Ciccio92]

mediocre at best. the models are mediocre as well, until the time they are horrible. i mean they are fine for most of the time, and then at some scene they make those weird faces or positions that are kind of horrendous. the animations are bad, choppy and again with weird facial expressions.
half the time the writing is absurd. the story itself is kind of absent, i guess there are different background for the girls, but nothing beyond that from what i can tell. the MC is magically attracting all females (without actually having anything magical in the story - they are just falling for him from nowhere)
so it looks like a porn slideshow, with the exception that the porn itself is not very exciting.
in general - it's very boring. i cant even reach the end of the current version, i just get bored and constantly switch to something else.

so bored that you had to comment instead of drop it, hahahahaha

 

[Moonis]

What a lovely girls. If I could enter the world of any game, this just jumped into top position on that list. Camp full of horny teens... Few of them real hotties. Too bad that one of the hottest, (ex)-girlfriends sister was left behind. I wonder if she'll get herself to the summer camp as well, later on, only to notice that she'll have real competition for her "boyfriend's" attention.

Writing and graphics were mostly decent, but I noticed early on few images that would need rework.

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I'll be following this game eagerly, and given number of the girls in the camp, I'm sure we'll see plenty of hot action.

 

[asdfg-79t]

yeah seems like they figured out how to make nice smiling faces but a lot of other expressions are weird and a lot of the boob placement is odd to me but whatever not like i can do better 3d models LOL

What a lovely girls. If I could enter the world of any game, this just jumped into top position on that list. Camp full of horny teens... Few of them real hotties. Too bad that one of the hottest, (ex)-girlfriends sister was left behind. I wonder if she'll get herself to the summer camp as well, later on, only to notice that she'll have real competition for her "boyfriend's" attention.

Writing and graphics were mostly decent, but I noticed early on few images that would need rework.

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I'll be following this game eagerly, and given number of the girls in the camp, I'm sure we'll see plenty of hot action.

 

[theickobicko]

so bored that you had to comment instead of drop it, hahahahaha

If it wasn't boring I would be playing it. Instead I'm here writing cuz its more fun.
If you enjoy it, I'm happy for you, I wanted to like it too.

 

[Melted]

you had to comment instead of drop it, hahahahaha

I believe it's called, sharing their opinion of the game. Now, what you did is called antagonizing. Forethought...

 

[Eggsbet]

Awesome game love it

 

[KimYoon]

bro im just gona say it, if you wana make a "only fans" thing for the renders or the game its ok but use some of that money to contract someone to make the renders, the story is non existent, there is no story or reason whatsoever why the girls are acting that way i know its supposed to be a "game" but thats too much of weird acting.
the renders are porly done, over exposure to light a light lamp that follows all renders even at night you should really use hdri, or learn 3 point lighting, broken skins, broken wrists, pussy overly open for the size of the dk, did i mention the horrible light?
And for the love of god stop using faceapp for the smiles i cant stress this enough they look cool and all but all it does is creating a inconsistency in their faces between renders, faceapp changes the face, doesnt only add a smile.... and stop using that overblown light, all its gona do is burn the skin in some areas...

hope to see more of you in the future and see you grow and learn.

EDIT:it would be much better if you had used an sky hdri and use the light of that and the candles light, you could up the brightness in photoshop later if you wish and remove this weird lamp.

 

[NakedSingularity]

Dunno why there's whining snitches reporting this, esp after there's yellow text on page 1 basically saying it's already approved and quit reporting it. Don't like it = ignore it instead of wasting your time. The blonde 5th from the left (I forgot her name, d'oh) is my favorite, hope next update or the one after has more of her.

 

[NakedSingularity]

looks great!
hope you make one of the girls muscular
since there is no game with a muscular l.o.l.i here or anywhere else!

My guess it's because preteens with muscles are almost unheard of, especially females.