I think after seeing the MC with all the beautiful women, Mia knows she has to step up her game and push hard, especially after seeing him kiss Sophie. Having a sex scene didn't bother me. But having her go from a supposed inexperienced girl to an advanced blowjob and swallowing felt very contrived. It would have been better if she had tried the blowjob, he came and she ran to the bathroom to spit it out.
The first day pacing wasn't a problem for me until the strip club scene. That easily could have been added to the next night. Of course, the plot is about whatever is going on with this strip club, Miller, and the cop. So pushing to get into it was most likely what the author was thinking.
As the whole camp got moved to the family home and there were a number of last-minute changes, it isn't difficult to imagine that Katie and Miller need help setting things up, getting food, and arranging sleeping accommodations. We are missing some key pieces still. So we don't know exactly why everything is happening the way it is. No doubt, this will come out soon enough.
There is always a mixture of experience and motivation at a place like this summer camp. You get the experienced girl, the girl who wants to lose her virginity, the girl who wants to beat out the competition, and the girl who stands in the background and watches or wants nothing to do with the drama. Apparently, the best friend is going to be the comic relief that the girls can't stand and he apparently has no interest in some of the hottest women ever created. It will be interesting to see how that is handled or if it is left at that and ignored.
The older, experienced women who are going for a well-built teenager trope relies on the small-town, no-good man available scheme. Problems with timing and plot are magically covered up by the fact that the women are all incredibly hot and I am too distracted to really care!