VN Ren'Py Summer Heat [v0.6.1] [Naughty Fox Games]

[Nghunter]

I've updated my mod for this game here

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I got these errors. Help

I'm sorry, but errors were detected in your script. Please correct the
errors listed below, and try again.


File "game/1mod.rpy", line 23: the hover_sound keyword argument was not given a value.
textbutton ("%s {color=#33ff33}(%s){/color}" % (i.caption, i.kwargs["wt"]) if persistent.wt and i.kwargs.get('wt') else i.caption) action i.action hover_sound
^

File "game/screens.rpy", line 787: the value keyword argument was not given a value.
input value:
^

File "game/script_ch05.rpy", line 18765: scene statement expects a non-empty block.
scene ch5mo27_tb with dissolve:
^

File "game/script_ch06.rpy", line 5490: scene statement expects a non-empty block.
scene ch6nm203_abp with dissolve:
^

Ren'Py Version: Ren'Py 8.2.2.24061201
Sat Aug 24 21:12:52 2024
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[dolfe67]

How long is this camp suppoused to be? A month? 15 days? 10 days?
The "they only known each other for 2 days" needs to be put in perspective here, it's possible that in less than 10 they'll "have" to put out, because this isn't real life and a story that ends with "they exchanged numbers and promised to keep in touch after summer" fucking sucks for a VN as much as it happens in real life.

And if the plan is to go a full month(or past a month)... how on earth are we still in day 2?

Dev needs to pick up the pace in more ways than one.

2 weeks. Sure, things need to happen faster than in real life not to be boring but too much happened the first day. Wait at least a couple days for things to escalate imo

 

[Skylaroo]

I can't remember how it was last update because it has been so long since I last played this game, but for some reason this update feels like the writing is not so good. It really feels like the dialogue is padded so much, especially for the filler conversations where characters seem to just keep on going on and on and on while not really saying anything meaningful. Quite disappointed by this.

 

[shazba jnr]

This animation was soo good. Got my mouth watering. Even the sound effects were just spot on. I could almost taste it! Made me want to just stop the game and get me some of that IRL!

Spoiler: Mmmm....

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And this scene was surprisingly wholesome given how in like every other game on this site, this usually plays out creepy as fuck:

Spoiler: Also mmmm...

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[Wolverine923]

In the almost 10 months since the last release, the new update has brought in very little content. If the developer continues to stretch the release window with such content, I'm afraid paid subscribers will start to unsubscribe. It's a shame when the game has such beautiful female characters, but we don't get the most interesting "content" with them.

 

[Badjourasmix]

In the almost 10 months since the last release, the new update has brought in very little content. If the developer continues to stretch the release window with such content, I'm afraid paid subscribers will start to unsubscribe. It's a shame when the game has such beautiful female characters, but we don't get the most interesting "content" with them.

Nah, probably not, there are games on this forum that haven't been updated in years and people still support them.

 

[LizaS]

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The devs released the usual survey for every update, specifically for feedback. If you guys were dissatisfied with the update like me, this would be the perfect medium to let them know.

Remember to provide constructive criticism and not only to complain.
Talk about what were your issues with the update and provide suggestions or solutions for it.

 

[Manoman13]

I just finished the update, I am totally disappointed.

Still nothing to say about the renderings or the animations (one of the most beautiful VNs), certainly the story does not advance but the characters are still well written.
On the other hand 1600 render? just a scene of blue balls which should never have ended like that given the risks taken the night before next to his brother...for me just a scene not for the story but to build the hype among the patreon subscribers to always get out of it more.
10 months 1600 render, it seems to me that they are a team? sorry but a single guy (BaDik) does 3 or 4 more render in 10 months, so yes he has several PCs but he have to create the renderings before putting them in the waiting list, the same for the animations, he codes, writes the story alone...I have the impression that there is a big problem with planning and distribution of tasks for Naughty Fox Games.

Personally I hope to see as much output in 6 months (so 4 months less) if it distributes the tasks better, especially since I read that they have a new additional machine which is powerful.
I remind you before concluding, one of the most beautiful VN (renders or animateds), characters each with their own well-written personality, beautiful character, a nice story even if not incredible.

I still wish the best for naughty fox games.

(please respect everyone's opinions whether positive or negative)

 

[Manoman13]

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The devs released the usual survey for every update, specifically for feedback. If you guys were dissatisfied with the update like me, this would be the perfect medium to let them know.

Remember to provide constructive criticism and not only to complain.
Talk about what were your issues with the update and provide suggestions or solutions for it.

Thanks i will use and try to explain with lot detail, i like the game, so i want more.

 

[Manoman13]

Thanks i will use and try to explain with lot detail, i like the game, so i want more.

Done.

It took me almost 30 minutes I hope they will read mine I spoke clearly with details and with optimism for the future.

 

[BeingADikDik]

The most important feedback, IMO, is not the render productivity and utilization rate (yes, it's an issue, but a minor one in the grand scheme of things). It's the story pacing.

1) MC makes out or has other encounters of the lewd kind with seven (I lost count) girls within ~12 hours of meeting them. Zero opportunity for character development let alone relationship building.

2) So much idle time doing nonsensical activities. Stretching, walking around, etc. - just not at all interesting, even all the characters complain about being bored ... how do you think that makes the readers feel?

3) What exactly is the plot here? So far it seems like Miller is addicted to something that one can 'play' (as Kate mentioned) in the restricted area of the club, and he did something that caused them to lose their deposit on the normal summer camp location. Beyond that we can speculate based on clues, e.g., his cover as an ex-cop turned gambling addict as he tries to bust a criminal enterprise knowing there is rampant corruption in the Rosewood police force. Mystery box storytelling is not good storytelling.

This is what needs to be improved dramatically. The entire plot needs to be fully storyboarded with major plot points before moving ahead. Only then can you fill in the details.

 

[Drakenite]

Intrusive thoughts:

 

[RPDL]

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I hope people actually use this somewhat responsibly. The update itself wasn't horrible, it just took far too long for what was in it. Plus the ending was bad. It wasn't even an ending, it just stopped.
Them reaching out asking for feedback and acknowledging there are problems is a good start. I think people are vastly exaggerating when they say this project is doomed or concerned about development. Concerns are fine if there's a pattern, if the next update is bad then sure, have at it. Otherwise they have a chance now to improve on things and show everyone what they can do so lets see what happens.
For what it's worth, I'm not in the least bit concerned. Personally I'd hope they can ship something around the end of January (or sooner) to steady the ship.

To be honest, if this results in something like a rushed sex scene next update I'll be kinda disappointed. They should just make the game they wanna make and maybe hire a project manager or something.

 

[Valdazz]

Shitty update...

 

[Manoman13]

The most important feedback, IMO, is not the render productivity and utilization rate (yes, it's an issue, but a minor one in the grand scheme of things). It's the story pacing.

1) MC makes out or has other encounters of the lewd kind with seven (I lost count) girls within ~12 hours of meeting them. Zero opportunity for character development let alone relationship building.

2) So much idle time doing nonsensical activities. Stretching, walking around, etc. - just not at all interesting, even all the characters complain about being bored ... how do you think that makes the readers feel?

3) What exactly is the plot here? So far it seems like Miller is addicted to something that one can 'play' (as Kate mentioned) in the restricted area of the club, and he did something that caused them to lose their deposit on the normal summer camp location. Beyond that we can speculate based on clues, e.g., his cover as an ex-cop turned gambling addict as he tries to bust a criminal enterprise knowing there is rampant corruption in the Rosewood police force. Mystery box storytelling is not good storytelling.

This is what needs to be improved dramatically. The entire plot needs to be fully storyboarded with major plot points before moving ahead. Only then can you fill in the details.

However, the plot, the characters, the story everything is represented by renders, so if you do 6 renders you will rush the story if you do 1000 you can detail, explain to make it more credible.

More different path = more renders, it's like saying gta v or cyberpunk it would have lasted 3 times less long it would be the same, yet when a game is fantastic the longer it is the better it is, at the reverse call of duty solo campaign less than 5 hours of games, the story is good but we are all disappointed by so little.

After all we are all different so we necessarily want different things everyone has the right to expect what they prefer

 

[Manoman13]

I hope people actually use this somewhat responsibly. The update itself wasn't horrible, it just took far too long for what was in it. Plus the ending was bad. It wasn't even an ending, it just stopped.
Them reaching out asking for feedback and acknowledging there are problems is a good start. I think people are vastly exaggerating when they say this project is doomed or concerned about development. Concerns are fine if there's a pattern, if the next update is bad then sure, have at it. Otherwise they have a chance now to improve on things and show everyone what they can do so lets see what happens.
For what it's worth, I'm not in the least bit concerned. Personally I'd hope they can ship something around the end of January (or sooner) to steady the ship.

To be honest, if this results in something like a rushed sex scene next update I'll be kinda disappointed. They should just make the game they wanna make and maybe hire a project manager or something.

I think the same if they make the same quantity but in only 6 months it's perfect, disappointed with the end of the update like everyone else, with the blue balls scene (especially in view of the risks of last night, he could end up behind a tree) but otherwise I still like the characters, the story is nice without being monumental (we're more into a chill lifestyle) the renders are magnificent, so I can't wait for the sequel.

 

[BeingADikDik]

However, the plot, the characters, the story everything is represented by renders, so if you do 6 renders you will rush the story if you do 1000 you can detail, explain to make it more credible.

More different path = more renders, it's like saying gta v or cyberpunk it would have lasted 3 times less long it would be the same, yet when a game is fantastic the longer it is the better it is, at the reverse call of duty solo campaign less than 5 hours of games, the story is good but we are all disappointed by so little.

After all we are all different so we necessarily want different things everyone has the right to expect what they prefer

With enough time and patience one can obtain any render tally to tell a story of any scope. However, you can't fix poor storytelling with more renders.

 

[jasad]

I've updated my mod for this game here

thank you

 

[Starlight501]

How do you even get in the closet with ms.hill I still can't figure it out

 

[RPDL]

However, you can't fix poor storytelling with more renders.

I don't like the term poor storytelling but there's no doubt some parts did feel a little underwhelming. If we look at it from "the game so far" rather than just the update, I think it'll be noticable that things start to go sideways though.

I didn't really wanna comment on this because from skimming the past ~50 pages people seem to think a scene chatting with Mike is bad storytelling because you're not chatting up the next LI. That's not bad storytelling, it just looks bad because it can be summarised with "an entire scene was wasted chatting with Mike" in what was a pretty short update. If there was a few more things to do and experience, most people wouldn't even remember the chat.

There are other things though. Mia getting her baps out in the forest felt odd or again, rushed. You were naked together like, 2-3 hours ago. The sophie scene was, imma be honest I can't even remember what they talked about. Even the bree scene, she just did the same thing with her legs that she'd done already and the first thing that came to my mind was....why? Between that and the "uppies" line, I can't shake the feeling that maybe bree is developmentally challenged. It's not that hard to have a little more imagination, there was plenty of time. Even the class scene where it abruptly ends because "you look like you need sleep"... it's jarring. Stop, start.

Scene with Mia -> getting kicked out
First time seeing everyone today -> you're tired, go to bed
Split up in groups -> no choice (which I was expecting considering this isn't a harem game), but also shot down (again) by ms hill
Scene in abandoned house -> game stops

After re-reading this it all feels very negative but hey, if I didn't care i wouldn't post anything at all.