Alright, got to play through the update and overall I've liked it.
I do have two points of critique though.
1. The milfs look too young but that seems to be a problem for most games with milf characters.
2. Imho a bunch of superfluous renders. Especially the scene where you walk Eve back to the house could easily have had halve the amount of renders and it wouldn't lose much in quality.
Edit: Forgot two more points.
3. The choice to make the MC faceless might become a problem when it comes to sex scenes. It simply limits what you are potentially able to show by limiting the amount of possible camera angles.
4. And a maybe stupid nitpick: I'm not a fan of how his hands look. The guy is in his late teens and not in his 30s