VN Ren'Py Summer in the City [v0.63] [FlipDaShit]

[randomgamer986]

This is a game that needs to be finished, ( first time........well, first time in a while ), that I've experienced, ( and yes, I've said it before: 1. A game needs to have a gripping story, something that tears at your hearstrings, ( that is not always needed, ( while I believe that wholeheartedly ), but I also go for games that, have stories that, will keep you hooked from start to finish, ( or up the th point this game stops ), 2. Characters that peek your interest, and honestly, all of the girls peeked mine, ( except for the guy. which I couldn't give two fucks, ( to be honest ), about, and they each had a good enough background stories to make them, ( not to the point of falling in love with them ), but enough to like them, a lot.

......And 3. Scenes, ( I've seen better, AND, I've seen worse ), and the scenes here, were good enough, so, kudos. .......Now, that's my personal opinion, and can only speak for myself, but I'm being serious, ( and praise should be given to those who truly deserve it ). .......( and yeah, I might be mean sometimes, and I say what I feel, why, I simply, don't want games that I feel are worth looking into, that are worth trying out, to be abandoned, permanently, ( but I also want quality ), because when I buy a game, it also has to be worth the price, ( which IS dependant on the QUALITY ), and the game has to be worth my time, ( which also has to do with quality ), so believe me, being mean and cruel is never my intent, so......


Ps! ........yes, I truly believe this game is good enough to get on my list, and is worth getting finished, so again, great job.

i thought i was having a stroke while reading this. forget stream of consciousness this is stream of schizophrenia.
jokes aside; bro you can't be typing like this. some of your prends don't have closers.

Here is a re-write that i am attempting after MULTIPLE RE-READS:
/* ============= Rewrite Start ==============
This game needs to be finished! I haven't felt this way about a game in a long time.

In my opinion a game needs to have 3 things to be worth it.
1. gripping story. this can be done with either a story which pulls at your heart strings or a story which keeps you engaged. This game falls in the latter category.
2. Interesting characters. To me all of the female characters were interesting with unique backgrounds. I didn't fall in love with any of them but they kept me engaged. I didn't like the male character but I do not think that is a controversial take.
3. Hot scenes. I have seen better scenes but these were good.

I would like to re-iterate that this is my personal opinion and I do not mean to offend anyone. In my opinion this game is worth it and I want to see this game finished so I can buy it. Great job dev!
=============== Rewrite End ===============*/

anyway hope this helps you improve your writing if nothing else stop with all the damn ellipses (...) and the prends.
thank you.
ps do let me know if I got your point or not.

 

[Hungover00]

i thought i was having a stroke while reading this. forget stream of consciousness this is stream of schizophrenia.
jokes aside, bro you can't be typing like this. some of your prends don't have closers.

Here is a re-write that i am attempting after MULTIPLE RE-READS:

This game needs to be finished! I haven't felt this way about a game in a long time.

In my opinion a game needs to have 3 things to be worth it.
1. gripping story. this can be done with either a story which pulls at your heart strings or a story which keeps you engaged. This game falls in the latter category.
2. Interesting characters. To me all of the female characters were interesting with unique backgrounds. I didn't fall in love with any of them but they kept me engaged. I didn't like the male character but I do not think that is a controversial take.
3. Hot scenes. I have seen better scenes but these were good.

I would like to re-iterate that this is my personal opinion and I do not mean to offend anyone. In my opinion this game is worth it and I want to see this game finished so I can buy it. Great job dev!


anyway hope this helps you improve your writing if nothing else stop with all the damn ellipses (...) and the prends. thank you. ps do let me know if I got your point or not.

I was tired the other night when I saw their post, and was so confused but couldn't come up with the energy to try and parse it. So thank you for your service. Not sure if the pain you self-inflicted was worth it, but still...

'prends?' Is that some sort of abbreviation for parenthesis/brackets?

Good job removing all the unnecessary spaces too. More on the stylistic side, than grammatical, but still a massive improvement.

 

[Dehlaz]

So I gave this a go, and I really enjoyed it! The characters actually seem to be somewhat engaging for me, which is a rarity in games like this, so it has me at least somewhat interested in where the stories are going. I'm more on the vanilla side though, so I have to say in regards to the cliffhanger:

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Anyway, will definitely be keeping an eye on this one, though if I had one small complaint, it's a bit odd to me that given how incredibly horny everyone in this game seems to be, there's less fucking than I'd have imagined. What's there is good though even if it's not all 100% to my tastes.

 

[Anteron]

Is there going to be ANY real hetero sex (as in penis-vagina, not shit ending in "job") in this game? Got to the end and only lesbian and boring ass handjob/blowjob so far.

 

[gunnarweibrink]

Hopefully not

 

[Zoltan Redbeard]

I see, and hope, that the first season is close to finishing, as the Steam page for the game has recently appeared:

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[FlipDaShit]

Hey everybody!

'Summer In The City' will be availabe on Steam! May I ask you for a moment of your time to add the game to your wishlist, even if you're not planning to buy it in the end? This would help me and the game enormously. Thank you in advance! Highly appreciated.

 

[JohnPaxson]

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so summer's mom now has a section in the gallery? anyone know how to unlock?

I would also like to know that.

 

[FrostRabbit7]

I


I would also like to know that.

Basically it's her video call with the supersoaker. Just replay the game to update the missing images. There is an auto button in the sub menu. Just let it run and make the choices and your gallery will be filled.

 

[J1215]

I like Lilly!

 

[c3p0]

I like Lilly!

Who doesn't shall leave this thread, I say.

 

[randomgamer986]

I was tired the other night when I saw their post, and was so confused but couldn't come up with the energy to try and parse it. So thank you for your service. Not sure if the pain you self-inflicted was worth it, but still...

'prends?' Is that some sort of abbreviation for parenthesis/brackets?

Good job removing all the unnecessary spaces too. More on the stylistic side, than grammatical, but still a massive improvement.

yea i abbrv. parenthesis to prends my b if that was confusing. I think its common in coding circles but i could be wrong.

 

[Hungover00]

yea i abbrv. parenthesis to prends my b if that was confusing. I think its common in coding circles but i could be wrong.

Cool, nice to learn something new!

 

[Up_down]

is the steam version diffrent from the patreon one

 

[s6ty3q2]

great renders, story, style, just wish it wasnt all lesbian focused

 

[Hungover00]

Loved the shout-out from Actual Roommates for here. Kickass lesbian games, strong together.

 

[Knight_of_the_lance]

I liked it too, but I still think Felix deserve more love! When the boy find himself he will do great and do more than simply hang around the others!

 

[Hungover00]

I liked it too, but I still think Felix deserve more love! When the boy find himself he will do great and do more than simply hang around the others!

Felix is fine (as in 'okay'), better than many AVN male LIs, but when he's competing against the rest of the cast, it's hard for him to more than sparkle, let alone SHINE.

edit: if to is

 

[FlipDaShit]

is the steam version diffrent from the patreon one

I will have to make some adjustments when it comes to the UI, but the main story will remain untouched... improved actually. I will make a comprehensive post about the changes in due time.

Loved the shout-out from Actual Roommates for here. Kickass lesbian games, strong together.

You're gonna be pleasantly surprised when playing my next update too then

 

[babibel@]

learn how to compress your images.