VN - Ren'Py - Summer Scent [v0.6.4a] [The Naughty Captain]

This is one of the most promising game that I have seen so far.
>excellent renders
>captivating story
>freedom to choose how to behave (a lot of choices)
>a complex and interesting FEMDOM route for who likes

Everything in this game is well made.

Do you enjoy being called a moron, asshole, etc..every five minutes for no reason? And constant monologue of feeling "sorry" for being one.
Then you have options:
- suck it up and apologize
- suck it up

Problem with the game is that it rushes through introduction with character background and puts no effort into trying to make you empathize with two other characters. ( who act like spoiled bitches, most of the time)

Compare this to how "Where it all Began" handled this: you had several options in how to deal with Katie, story at times switched to her perspective, and the game didn't beat you over the head with " You are bad! You don't know why you're bad, but you are bad!"

2 points for good visuals and pretty decent writing, but it simply fails at delivery.

It's a solid start. The graphics don't feel like the same old nonsense rehashed in another VN for the 40th time and the questions and answers offered to the player when interacting with the characters seem to have an impact on how they treat the main character, suggesting that, as the game progresses, we could be treated to different storylines. And anything which prompts replaying the same game to try different branches is worth a follow certainly.

Great writing, very natural. Great variability. Good renders (no animation, but good animation is really hard to do, and no animation is better then bad animation). I hope that this game and dev will get more attention.

Wow. Perfect graphics, many choices, forks, content ... I love it! Replay value is pretty high. Domination Route for brunette, Submission for blonde, affection for both. I love also how the story unfolds. Recommended!

This game is really enjoyable. The render quality is great, the main character is a chill dude and the girls included in the current version (January 2020) are very pretty and unique-looking. The writing is quite good and even at this early stage, the game offers a lot of sexy content.

I think that the game has no animations it is already outdated. Two years ago, I would not hesitate to put 5 stars, but now so many animated games have appeared that the game without animation is already considered weak.

The game is doing all the right moves for me. The game has a strong story and believable main characters with a tad bit of mystery added in the latest update. I do believe this will (it already has) become one of my favourite games.
And of course, the renders are very nice and well, hot.

I like this game!
Excellent story, great bodies (faces could be a bit better), quite good renders.
The pace is quite (a bit too much?) fast.
The stats system is very promising, allowing for quite a lot of possible paths.
Hopefully the creator continues with the same quality.

I've been played a bit of this game and wow it's seriously well made. Great art style and amazingly great renders.

The women so far in the game beside really hot, are very much like some real life girls who don't really take shit from little men. They are both strong yet soft, vulnerable in some regards. They also not sluts even though portrait as that. Great character development even the MC.

Not sure how the Lust versus the Love points will work but still it's in the game so can only assume they give certain outcomes depending on which you are going for with each girl. Also haven't seen these models before so time was taken in making them look different than normal. I could be wrong.

The story so far is not ground breaking but it's interesting for sure and certainly keeping my interest.

The English is very good and is written by someone who's not a child or thinks like one. This is a great game and the dev certainly needs more support than what he's been getting.

Great work dev.

I download lots of games from this website, I'd say at least half are bad enough for me to instantly uninstall, for whatever reason, I thought this game would be one of them.

Little did I know, this game is pretty much exactly what I look for in a VN. There are lots and lots of routes, it seems like a hate route, a love route for each main LI, a dom route, a sub route, possibly other LIs? There is a potential for a ton of replayability. The issue I noticed, is that it all has to be consistent I'd imagine. In the mc sub route with Eve's friend, she basically is some pseudo dominatrix but in the love route she is nervous and inexperienced. It is kind of strange.

Anyways, the game has a mountain of potential. The renders are great, the girls seem interesting, mc is kind of a decent dude, the story has potential.. I can go on but basically I am saying this game has got a lot going for it. Hopefully, the dev can continue such great work.

This game certainly deserves more attention and I am excited to see more from this game.

Good Start, needs polish.

I'd like to give it 3.5 but that's not an option.

Plot: Plot isn't too bad, its actually a bit above average. Character development is decent, although I find the "friend"/MC relationship and their language with each other a bit unbelievable. Yes its a game, but it wants to draw the reader in it needs to polish this relationship and the way they speak to each other.

Renders: Overall quality and posing is good. The skin looks a little weird in some of the early draws. The big issue is eyes.

Eyes : When the renders are sharp, the eyes stand out. Often the expression of the characters is really odd, especially in the eye department. Not sure what I mean? Look at the car ride. They're having a discussion and the girls look drugged.

BDSM? : The black haired girl is a virgin, but she gives a footjob and then makes him lick up his cum? seriously wtf? If those are "virgin" moves, then I'm the Pope.

English: Its overall pretty decent/functional, but often word choice doesn't reflect the character or story well. I can't remember exact instances and its not worth going back, but the girls sometimes use words you'd never hear a modern teen say. Further the grammar needs some help in several places.

Don't get me wrong, its better than 80 percent of the renpy out there, but it needs a decent amount of buff and polish to truly shne.

I have to say: really good job!

The game is fun and the story is structured in an exciting way and very well implemented. The background stories of the characters are somewhat superficial, but still sufficient for the story.

The graphics of the pictures are very good. The characters look good (matter of taste). The lyrics are well written and the plot can be followed very easily and above all the plot's character is understandable.

After seeing previews for the earlier versions on SVS, etc... I decided to play this for the first time today... I then went through my Patreon budget and signed on IMMEDIATELY!!!

Even at this early stage (it's only v0.3), I haven't enjoyed playing a game this much so I only hope that the dev's outstanding work continues.

This game "ticks all my boxes" (so to speak!) - I found the renders to be top notch and really enjoyed the story line so far. Even though I'm not fussed about incest porn, I played it with the incest patch and still enjoyed the story line!

In five syllables, this game is "OUT-FUCKING-STANDING"!!!

I expected this game to be really crappy, but its really good especially for 0.2 version, story has some flaws but its good nonetheless, pacing is nice, writing is great, renders too, i really like sisters model.
So far great game, i just hope dev continues in this fashion, and doesnt get bored and drop this game.

Your sister is a bitch to you. But you're the asshole for believing she's a slut when she acts like a slut every chance she gets? Her friend is a cock tease. But you're an asshole for not wanting to treat her like a goddess? She's not a goddess. She's just self-centered. The characters are obnoxious and it makes not getting the option to stand up for yourself ever unrealistic.

Great for a 0.2!
Really beautiful girls, with relatively original behaviour, good renders and a likeable, if dorky MC.

This is really an outstanding early version of a game.
I can't say anything negative about it.

as of 0.2

I would like to give this a higher rating. As the starting point for a vn it's not really lacking in any department. Visuals are good, the two girls so far have a unique look. There is a story worth mentioning and already a conflict/mystery to solve.

Could just be my own weird quirks, but the plot kind of having an "original sin", and the fact that it's thrown in your face during every interaction just gets annoying. You are an asshole for not knowing your sister is a slutty bitch, when she's a bitch to you in every interaction, she's admitted to drinking and driving, you caught her stealing liquor from your parents, she goes out to bars to get drunk with guys who obviously are looking to bang.... Am I missing something here? She acts exactly as you would expect of the "rumours" but she's actually a kissless virgin? And the mc is a idiot and asshole for not believing otherwise?

I just really find that whole plot point doesn't make much sense... and having the mc get called an idiot/asshole/pervert or being ordered around in every scene just isn't my cup of tea. It starts to feel like getting nagged in real life.

So far not bad, not bad at all. At first thought it would be another generic crap written by a horny teenager, but it happend to be pretty good. Renders are not the best that I've seen, but pretty enough, models are nice, the story has a nice pace (i like to take it slow).
So far - 5 stars. We'll be watching this one. Hope the developer won't get bored with the project too fast.

I decide to try to go ahead and give this a try, and have to say it is a great start to the game.
*Both the graphics and the models was one of the best I've saw for beginning of a game.

*The story was written pretty good, and had me hook by the end of the first day.

*The only thing that stood out is maybe a button to review the stats, and how you are progressing.

I will be following this game from now on, I wish @The Naughty Captain great success in developing this game.