VN Ren'Py Summer Scent [v0.6.5a] [The Naughty Captain]

[McWoodz]

imho its better to call her sister..

because childhood friend turn the game really weird, even more than with "roomate".

It just called her sister automatically in my playthrough but had a look at the script and it has both versions in it.
1 where she's the 10 mins older twin and 1 where she's the childhood friend that moved in aged 9 when her parents died.
In a car crash obviously as that's how all VN parents die
I'd look into playing the childhood friend version if her parents had been beaten to death by Gorillas or something.

 

[Azraelith]

Liking the game so far; some slight spelling errors but that can be fixed with time (and readers) I'm interested in seeing where TNC takes the game and am going to be watching this one closely.

 

[McWoodz]

I should probably comment on the actual game- Not bad at all, got potential, worth checking out.
The 2 girls look pretty damn good, lots of options and some nice scenes if you work out the right choices.
English needs some work and every use of the word 'denounce' should be removed but that stuff's easy fixed.
I'll definitely keep an eye on this one.

 

[Mikedazz1]

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thanks for the tip

 

[meigame]

Thanks. I really like this one. nice art, story works. looking forward to seeing more. like the brother banging them both in the ass. Sorry, that's just my default setting. Good work, thank you

 

[xmilteach]

Thx..

 

[Warhawk1]

Interesting..Good renders..Good amount of content..Looking forward to more

 

[ptahn]

Normally I don't support a game this early, but I like the story so far.

 

[High-_-Tower]

Looks promising!

 

[Captain Kirk]

Nice looking renders! Looking real promising!

 

[ThunderRob]

meh..emotionless writing..standard same as other games stuff..the faces are harsh ..especially around the friends red eye rings..at no point did it make stop leaning my chin in the cup of my hand to sit up straight and care...pass.

 

[-KC-]

Yikes, TR obviously ate a tainted "Licks" burger today or got fleeced at the Zanzibar and is in a pissy mood.
This one gets a thumbs up from me! Will throw money into the equation if it can prove worthy in the next couple of updates.

 

[Canto Forte]

Brother from another mother .... Would be elder brother .... she is like a sister to me ...sister I never had -> those are perfectly fine nicknames / titles young kids use for silly reasons in the playground and they stick ...oh man ... how they stick their ugly heads in conversations long time into aDULTHOOD !!!

 

[Mathew joe]

Does this have incest content? .. Coz the genre doesnt

 

[RoadWulf]

Great start to the game. One single note:
Put a "SAVE HERE" at the end of the version. It just dropped off immediately to the Main Menu and I had to load an Auto Save to get it right.

 

[The Naughty Captain]

I remember when I finished high school by flunking out but fucking all the teachers and staff members



cordially definition states:


>.> we have a hardcore tsundere here is what I'm reading

That's probably because I'm french. We play with words a lot, and because of that, my english may be a bit circumvoluted.
I have to work on that.

But she's indeed a tsundere.
Or at least I want her to be.

Engrish isn't the worst, but still needs to be improved. The Dev shouldn't assume the player's religion, even atheism.

I could definitely use some proofreading by a native speaker.

About the religion thing.
You are right.
This is something I should take into account. At least for the sake of "immersion" if not out of respect for the eventual player faith.

It just called her sister automatically in my playthrough but had a look at the script and it has both versions in it.
1 where she's the 10 mins older twin and 1 where she's the childhood friend that moved in aged 9 when her parents died.
In a car crash obviously as that's how all VN parents die
I'd look into playing the childhood friend version if her parents had been beaten to death by Gorillas or something.

Absolutely.
The childhood friend thing is just a way to cope with Patreon views on incest.
On the uncensored version, Eve and Jack are dizygotic twins.

That Gorillas story is amazing. I'm saving it for later, if you'll allow me...

 

[Carpe Stultus]

Does this have incest content? .. Coz the genre doesnt

 

[SpikeZg]

Ok, ok, ok... this is good, great job dev

 

[Deleted member 1304718]

Look promising...
Such a lovely bro-sis game
Looking forward it....

3rd screenshot bitch route or love route huh???(Im mostly playing love routes only, so asking maybe I'm missed that scene in love route?)
Future walkthrough needed for poor people hehehe....

 

[arms99]

Look promising...
Such a lovely bro-sis game
Looking forward it....

3rd screenshot bitch route or love route huh???(Im most playing love routes only, so asking maybe I'm missed that scene in love route?)
Future walkthrough needed for poor people hehehe....

To get that scene when you go to apologize instead of "knock again" just "enter" and see her naked. Then, after she'll return the favor by barging into your shower. The catch is that you won't get the chance to make amends with her and it'll screw up the love route (at least for the time being).