VN Ren'Py Summer Scent [v0.6.5a] [The Naughty Captain]

[emmasteadman]

Well, unless I missed something,(and I may have, went love sis path), it's the only "sex" so far in the game . . . . so with-out it there would have been no sex-scenes, at all, at this time , so I'll take it if you don't mind!

Yeh I mean each to their own, but personally I skip dream scenes as fast as possible since they're not 'real' - yeh I know that sounds crazy considering it's all a game, but it just breaks immersion for me at least.

 

[Highland_Hunter]

In the "Dream-scene", there was a choice of, who you wanted,(to have sex with), Your Sister, The Guest, or Both? . . . I Took "Both"
( the Guest, kinda "grew" on me, at first her "Big-Boobs" put-me-off, but her personality won me over )

Then next choice was who, got to go First . . . . chose Sister . . then the dream ended .

 

[The Naughty Captain]

Great start to the game. One single note:
Put a "SAVE HERE" at the end of the version. It just dropped off immediately to the Main Menu and I had to load an Auto Save to get it right.

You're right, it's annoying.
I'll set up something for the next release.

I'm beginning to think this game needs a "score-card" . . . .
There seems to be different "tiers" of good choices, but some choices, would give more "points" than others, maybe getting you to your goal "faster", or more completely ?

For now, there are actually three paths for the sister and two for the friend.
Love, Submission and Asshole path for the sister, Love and Submission for the friend.
You gain points according to your choices :
Being nice usually gives you affection points, being dominant gives you submission points, being an asshole ... gives you nothing and it's a path on its own.
There are key choices that will give you more points and are defining the path you are on. Like when Jack hug his sister in her bedroom. It's the start of the love path, it will give you more affection points and obviously if you are interested in the love path, you shouldn't miss it.

I'll write a walkthrough for the next version.

By the way, knows someone who is the girl in the movie, what MC's sis watches? I can't remember her name

Gina Valentina ? Or Joan Fontaine ?

 

[chuckypetya]

You're right, it's annoying.
I'll set up something for the next release.



For now, there are actually three paths for the sister and two for the friend.
Love, Submission and Asshole path for the sister, Love and Submission for the friend.
You gain points according to your choices :
Being nice usually gives you affection points, being dominant gives you submission points, being an asshole ... gives you nothing and it's a path on its own.
There are key choices that will give you more points and are defining the path you are on. Like when Jack hug his sister in her bedroom. It's the start of the love path, it will give you more affection points and obviously if you are interested in the love path, you shouldn't miss it.

I'll write a walkthrough for the next version.





Gina Valentina ? Or Joan Fontaine ?

I got it, thanks!

 

[niennunb]

What is it with these games and their 'dream' scenarios...it's getting rather cliche and boring.

Well, it allows devs to put sex scenes in the beginning of the game without rushing the story...

So, yes it is a cliche, but not a bad one... it is more a pattern than a cliche.

Well, unless I missed something,(and I may have, went love sis path), it's the only "sex" so far in the game . . . . so with-out it there would have been no sex-scenes, at all, at this time , so I'll take it if you don't mind!

↑ This.

 

[zephrates]

I am definitely liking the start of this game so far. I think a walkthrough will definitely be needed as the game progresses, but it could be fun to just wing it and see how far I can get.

 

[katarne04]

there's some scenes that you get if you have the other. Like if you go upstairs to apologize you might open a scene in with her going to the shower while you just finished. Another is when IF you confront her on the club scene and she dwells on what happened in the club. Or for the friend, theres two ways the couch scene happens.

another scene in the end where the alcohol you got for the game affects how the movie scenes end up. Even the game you play before that movie scene affects what happens in there (there are 4 ways the movie scenes ends)

Looks like there are 3 conditions for the MC: good, neutral, and bad.
Its challenging to figure out the right choices for the scenes but i thought it was worth it. I wonder how these scenes you get will play out now. Definitely have this game on my radar. It looks like there could be at least 2 other characters joining the week in this game.

 

[Dongus420]

A walkthrough next time would be great.

Really enjoying this so, every choice feels like it actually matters.

Can't wait for more.

 

[Master_Rick]

two thumbs up with this one~!

 

[macadam]

Absolutely.
The childhood friend thing is just a way to cope with Patreon views on incest.
On the uncensored version, Eve and Jack are dizygotic twins.

That Gorillas story is amazing. I'm saving it for later, if you'll allow me...

mec... tu va pas échapper a patreon en utilisant un autre définitif a la place d'un membre de la famille , y compris par un patch... crois le ou non, mais patreon vérifie aussi en dehors de patreon si il y a un patch ou autre, c'est mort. il est possible de reporter du contenu hors patreon qui peut frapper le compte patreon en lui meme.... dingue, je sais.

mieu vaut se fixer a ne pas utiliser un membre de la famille du tout, ou abandonner patreon. no joke.
dans le pire des cas, laisse quelqun d'autre faire un patch et mentionne clairement que tu n'a rien a voir avec. sinon.. BOOM !



too lazy to translate, basically justsaying that it wont change anything for patreon to use another way to avoid incest and providing patch or else in same time. and blablablabla...BOOM ! and stuff LOL

nothing interresting for everybody else than dev anyway...

 

[Pif paf]

IC patch preapplied..
Love this game already!

 

[sbor]

That was actually a dream scene I ended up with that while playing as the good brother although I never got the kiss scene with the sister

It's not a dream, MC wake up after the game and find his sister in living room. If she watch a porn -> a dual masturbation, a old movie -> kiss....

Play as a relative good brother (dont be to good )... after breakfast, follow her in her room.
For kiss -> "knock again" -> "i want to apologize to you" -> "i like your smell"...
For dual ... -> "enter" -> "get out" -> in the shower jerk off and then "show her the goods" -> "your ass is amazing" -> "what do you give me for my silence " ... and maybe some other thing.

 

[Mormont]

It's not a dream, MC wake up after the game and find his sister in living room. If she watch a porn -> a dual masturbation, a old movie -> kiss....

Play as a relative good brother (dont be to good )... after breakfast, follow her in her room.
For kiss -> "knock again" -> "i want to apologize to you" -> "i like your smell"...
For dual ... -> "enter" -> "get out" -> in the shower jerk off and then "show her the goods" -> "your ass is amazing" -> "what do you give me for my silence " ... and maybe some other thing.

It was a dream because the MC is lying on a couch and in the dream, he is on a bed he even wakes up again on the couch mentioning what a dream.

 

[RexGenocide]

That is one very good piece of smth.

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I really believed in this and myy fealings were same as charecter had. Guilt, pity and desire to make everything wright. That is one very rare case of emotions i had playing such games. Author, you are cool, keep going like that.

 

[The Naughty Captain]

too lazy to translate, basically justsaying that it wont change anything for patreon to use another way to avoid incest and providing patch or else in same time. and blablablabla...BOOM ! and stuff LOL

nothing interresting for everybody else than dev anyway...

Well, for now I think I'll just wait and hope.
But thank you for the advice =)

It was a dream because the MC is lying on a couch and in the dream, he is on a bed he even wakes up again on the couch mentioning what a dream.

You're actually talking about two different scenes.
You are describing the dream at the end of Day One, Sbor describe the event at the end of Day Two. =)

 

[erkper]

The description of the friend is awesome:

"You will love her and despair"

...but will she past the test, diminish and go to the West??? Remains to be seen...

 

[bas]

Does this have incest content? .. Coz the genre doesnt

My fault - I remembered to add the tag, but not there. Fixed now.

 

[64spoons]

Maybe one of the best starts to VN I've ever seen! The renders are amazing! Great job, man!

 

[Exu]

Wow. I gotta say, I find it impressive for a v0.2. No evident-to-the-player nor meaningless-to-the-story point system, real different outcomes depending on what you choose instead of lazy minor variations, attractive girls in looks and personality, the characters feel like real people rather than cardboard dolls from a wet fantasy. The MC is capable of acting like a decent human being. Not an overambitious setting, but an intimate, cozy one. As for the feelings, some sweet, some spicy, and some unsettling to say the least (After Eve comes home roofied, the flowers are a worrysome foreshadowing)

Congrats on the good work Dev, and thanks for this little jewel!

 

[explosivo666]

I'll write a walkthrough for the next version.

Consider adding an optional walkthrough mode in game, just dub it show hints in options (ie: +Love/+Submission in brackets with appropriate color behind responses), and a gallery/recollection menu. Overall a solid base, storywise a bit generic initial plot, though far from terrible, render quality is great, and love the different facial reactions, though the text response should reflect it a bit more for added clarity.