Fortuna ღ
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I want to wait until the final version to post a full review of this season, so I'm just going to post my opinion of Chapter 5 for nowღ
Okay, so first, I'll talk about MC and Bella's relationship in this chapter because that's the only path I'm following(and the entire reason I'm here).
	
	
		
	
	
Now we can get on to everything elseღ
	
	
		
	
	
Also, after playing this latest Chapter... I can confidently say that everyone who came here strictly for the lewds... Season 2 is going to be very good for you. Judging by the way some characters behaved in this chapter, I'm sure that many of you will be very happy next summerღ
P.S: This is all mostly my opinion. Objectively speaking, the dialogue needs much tweaking as the grammar has flaws. The grammar is legitimately horrible in some areas. Still, due to Oceans not being a native speaker(like myself), I chose not to pay much attention to it. There are also a few minor writing errors(from a literary perspective), but nothing too major. However, if Oceanlab seeks to have everything ready for the Steam release, I really think that it's imperative to have someone check the dialogue grammar(punctuation, capitalization, sentence structure, etc.) before the release. If Steam users are anything like F95 users, there may be people who will not only drop the game because of the dialogue... but they may also leave a bad rating due to it. This is a sacrifice that needs to be made before the steam releaseღ
	
		
			
		
		
	
								Okay, so first, I'll talk about MC and Bella's relationship in this chapter because that's the only path I'm following(and the entire reason I'm here).
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		P.S: This is all mostly my opinion. Objectively speaking, the dialogue needs much tweaking as the grammar has flaws. The grammar is legitimately horrible in some areas. Still, due to Oceans not being a native speaker(like myself), I chose not to pay much attention to it. There are also a few minor writing errors(from a literary perspective), but nothing too major. However, if Oceanlab seeks to have everything ready for the Steam release, I really think that it's imperative to have someone check the dialogue grammar(punctuation, capitalization, sentence structure, etc.) before the release. If Steam users are anything like F95 users, there may be people who will not only drop the game because of the dialogue... but they may also leave a bad rating due to it. This is a sacrifice that needs to be made before the steam releaseღ
								
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