Ahx
ok i went outside looked at the clear blue sky breathed in the fresh ocean air marvelled at the beauty of the empty golden beach and smiled thinking of Sasha!
so sorry for you activating my cortisone system...
if you wanna write comedy you can use the regular narrative of stand up comedy!
me i am good with dialogues and i think of them as boxing matches!
so when you go for them always start by the knock out punch and work backwards!
have a combination of punches to set up the knock out. consider your positioning as the verbal tense you use!
then use the other caracthers as diversion so that you knocks can land properly!
the dynamic you input is like the foot work you must do to lead the audience and illude them and create diversions to lower their defenses!
must be the reason why group dynamics works soo poorly for me...
i think the only one i did slightly competentely was the Nami nightmare one... and that only worked because nobody saw she waking up everyone assumed it was a crazy classroom scene where everyone was pilling on on Nami... probably should have used the same trick for the Sasha talent show... so many good jokes wasted in that one by bad set ups and too many people creating diversion...
do not be sad... i only want whats best for you... even if i have to beat it into you!