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Now I have a bad feeling about this...
it would be the easiest way to get Bella out of the story for awhile

and if we're not interested in the other girls we can spend that time to see Bella in the hospital but I don't think that'll happen

I think Bella will just stay home and avoid us

and in that time that's when the other girl's update will take place

if you're on that route

but I don't know all I know is that these updates will focus on other girls

but to be fair when it was Bella's updates we still got to spend a little time with Mila and Nami


so hopefully we'll still get to see Bella a little bit but to be fair Warscared

baby mama didn't get any attention and I'm worried if she doesn't get attention soon Warscared may kill somebody
 

Ahx

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ok i went outside looked at the clear blue sky breathed in the fresh ocean air marvelled at the beauty of the empty golden beach and smiled thinking of Sasha!

so sorry for you activating my cortisone system...

if you wanna write comedy you can use the regular narrative of stand up comedy!

me i am good with dialogues and i think of them as boxing matches!
so when you go for them always start by the knock out punch and work backwards!
have a combination of punches to set up the knock out. consider your positioning as the verbal tense you use!
then use the other caracthers as diversion so that you knocks can land properly!
the dynamic you input is like the foot work you must do to lead the audience and illude them and create diversions to lower their defenses!

must be the reason why group dynamics works soo poorly for me...

i think the only one i did slightly competentely was the Nami nightmare one... and that only worked because nobody saw she waking up everyone assumed it was a crazy classroom scene where everyone was pilling on on Nami... probably should have used the same trick for the Sasha talent show... so many good jokes wasted in that one by bad set ups and too many people creating diversion...

do not be sad... i only want whats best for you... even if i have to beat it into you!
Missed this part...

Sounds good I'll try to follow that. It's like you care about me...a lot!
First you're talking about resisting temptations, then you saying that you won't be resisting them. Seems contradictory.
And that's called cheating btw. Not very faithful.


... all of them? You saw what he wrote. He is not to negate the temptation.
I'd advise you to drop it if you don't want another big paragraph about projecting.
 

Darkdevil66

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i almost gave it a try at Photoshop to use the picture and write over it or write it off and under it like handwritten change the L for an N!

i also considered putting it like a band aid or a ladies pad and write in black or in red for the ladies pad a massive N!

you are lucky i am not Darkdevil66
Like I'd really edit something that gross. :WaitWhat:

Something like this, on the other hand....

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HogRocket

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Uhh. He writes... interesting... fanfics.
And he one of the most sane Portugalians i know.
...
I only know two though...
Fun. Well. Fun is fun. What to say about it.
"Portugalians"? Is that an alien who landed in Portugul? That would explain SOOoooo much about Warscared


(The "alien" thing, not the "Portugul" thing.....or maybe the "Portugul" thing also, the only person I'm familiar with from there is on YouTube and he's not normal!) :unsure: :unsure:
 
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