- May 13, 2020
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It will only be ruined if he acts out of character. If Oceans writes the upcoming sexual scenes cohesively with how his characters are written, then there should be no problem(in other words, make it seem and feel natural and not out of character). It'd definitely seem odd if the MC became Cassanova out of the blue... but not so if he were to sleep with Bella(or any other LI) naturally. Remember, MC's undergoing a constant change. It may seem out of character now, but in the future, it may seem and feel totally natural(if written correctly). I'm not sure if I was clear enough here, but hopefully, you understood what I was getting at lol.Is it weird that I feel that this great story will be ruined by anything sexual? I just can't see the MC being a horndog somewhere down the line. Heckuva story though.![]()