VN Ren'Py Abandoned Summer's Gone [S1 Steam + DLC] [Oceanlab]

[codex35]

Do we know the content of Chapter 5?

 

[KhamulTG81]

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Spoiler: hmmm

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But if this is a dynamic novel instead of kinetic novel choices should be more various and detailed (I am speaking for ch4). Too many coincidences in one episode also lessens the story impact too.

Fair point. But kinetic novel is to harsh...

 

[PhantomOpera]

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I also liked the scene DPC also have a similar scene in Badik I have no problem with RPG scenes a good scenario always gives enjoy to read but the amount of content it has should be proportional to the rest of the episode.

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I just give examples just want to have your own LI moments for an incompleted novel is a bit of selfish. I generally play every route in a game also following Zara path if it exists? I even play routes that I am not interested just because I want to see how the devs build a character or continue to story. But if this is a dynamic novel instead of kinetic novel choices should be more various and detailed (I am speaking for ch4). Too many coincidences in one episode also lessens the story impact too.

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Fair point. But kinetic novel is to harsh...

In chapter 4 choices nearly didn't impact the story progression or one choice didn't prevent to saw us another scene that's why I used kinetic term.

 

[Quarron]

I saw chapter 4.5 in my dreams and I just woke up now. Reality is disappointing.

 

[Tairnel]

there is sadly so much time run away since the last upd.

It has literally been a week.

Also, here you go. This is the latest update from the developer.

Chapter 4 Final - Bibi Log 1/1

Hello,

So... It's been a week since the release of the BETA, and I am around 200/600 renders into the last segment of the Chapter 1 overhaul.
For those that don't know, it's planned to put Summer's Gone on Steam with Chapter 5.
And for this, I'm polishing/reworking the first Chapter, and parts of Chapter 2. (College.)

When Chapter 1 was developed, Regium and I did split the load with around 60/40. Some of the old renders were made by me and the earlier part of the hospital by him.
As my experience grew and my developer mind expanded.
New attributes like immersion became very important to me, I knew things had to change.
Originally, I wanted to do this after Season 1 had been finished. But the game needs to be in good shape for the Steam release.
The first impression is important.

I prepared a few comparisons. (All renders are attached in High Res down below.)

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This was when they prepared to head to the hospital.
The dialogue has also been adjusted.
In the old Chapter 1, the scene immediately switches to the hospital.
The new one offers more interaction with their environment and includes the drive to the hospital.
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The hospital itself also offers new interactions to increase immersion, etc.
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Now we get to the biggest issue.
I started to absolutely hate the first interaction with Maja and Victoria. Besides the fact that Maja's Ch1 model is atrocious... No emotions whatsoever were portrayed during this scene.
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This scene has a completely different atmosphere now.
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I also added something new to this scene. It's MC-related and brings some more attention to something Nami mentions earlier... "You were here before..."

The hospital scenes are mostly the same. Some adjustments have been made. A few new scenes were added.
The biggest change to Chapter 1 comes now.

The college part has been entirely rewritten. The first meeting with Jeff, Mila, etc. is completely different.
I won't be making another Bibi Log, I am just here to tell you guys that the final will be released in around 2-3 weeks.
And then we'll get to Chapter 4.5. (The newly made Chapter 1 will then fit in nicely with Chapter 4.5. (Due to Vic and Maja)).

And a big thanks to all the new Patreons!
And an even bigger thanks to those who have been with me through thick and thin. (Mostly thick, if we consider the bootys in SG.)
All these improvements and the much more effective work system wouldn't have been possible without you guys!

You're a very important part of this game and I am glad you guys/girls are with me on this journey.

- Ocean


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[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

Does anyone know if it was a patreons vote to put so many renders of the sci fi alien game in that chapter, I mean between that and all the sport scenes like basketball and tennis it feels like you could have told those scenes with half the renders and used more time to get to something good like going to the cabin with your hot therapist.

I also have a feeling like that might be a trap where Amber hypnotizes you and tells you to pretend she’s Summer and if she were here right now alone with you naked in this cabin, what would you do with her?

Meanwhile Bella is probly spying through the window of the cabin ready to castrate you if your dick touches her mom.

Also wanted to see some more scenes with his sexy teachers like that smokeshow Cynthia, even Miss Marla’s looking doable now & you can’t forget Coach Hills fun bags either.
Guys I’m not putting this game down at all, it’s fuckin awesome, but with updates taking so long, Id just rather progress the story a little more.

 

[Quarron]

I also have a feeling like that might be a trap where Amber hypnotizes you and tells you to pretend she’s Summer and if she were here right now alone with you naked in this cabin, what would you do with her?

Meanwhile Bella is probly spying through the window of the cabin ready to castrate you if your dick touches her mom.

I'd like to see that shit.

 

[IHATESlowburnBluBallgames]

No shit, Sherlock

For the sister I mean, I know how girls dress on hot days but going to school with literally just underwear is kinda too much. Not just for being in public but even more for the context of going to class.

Bella's outfit is not just provocative, she's literally showing her nipples, which wouldn't be considered just "sexy" but more like inappropriate. Again, specially in the context of the place where they are in those scenes.

Yet again, gonna repeat myself, I know this is just a porn game, but feel like it contrast with how serious the dialog is (if this were fucking 23 sisters I would not give a fuck). I can't think so many others VN with girls dressing at this level of sluttishness on a date or public in general, even when they took themselves way less serious.

Not saying they have to dress like nuns, but a little bit more prude. Maybe Bella not showing her nipples and Nami going with shorts instead of just panties would be ok.

Have you played AWAM? All the girls in school have mini skirts, daisy dukes with the whale tail thong showing and bikini tops or very low cut tops showing cleavage and nip

 

[Razrback16]

I'd like to see that shit.

Me too. I figure that's the way that one is going to go. The cabin episode will likely be the episode where we finally get some significant time with Amber to develop things. At least I am praying so.

 

[Laehtsia]

Do we know the content of Chapter 5?

If I'm not wrong :

- Movie night with Victoria and Maja ( or with Mila, i'm confused since chapter 4 ending )
- Going to Nia's if you accepted her invitation during the basketball session
- I recall something in a " studio " with Ayua
- Probably a psy session with Amber, it's been a while
- And a " date " with Mila if you accepted it

 

[Quarron]

If I'm not wrong :

- Movie night with Victoria and Maja ( or with Mila, i'm confused since chapter 4 ending )
- Going to Nia's if you accepted her invitation during the basketball session
- I recall something in a " studio " with Ayua
- Probably a psy session with Amber, it's been a while
- And a " date " with Mila if you accepted it

These are for chapter 4.5 mostly, not chapter 5.

 

[codex35]

If I'm not wrong :

- Movie night with Victoria and Maja ( or with Mila, i'm confused since chapter 4 ending )
- Going to Nia's if you accepted her invitation during the basketball session
- I recall something in a " studio " with Ayua
- Probably a psy session with Amber, it's been a while
- And a " date " with Mila if you accepted it

I think you forgot ch 4.5 dude

 

[Deleted member 4866084]

If I'm not wrong :
- I recall something in a " studio " with Ayua

Sparring. She is going to improve MC's fighting techniques

 

[Quarron]

Sparring. She is going to improve MC's fighting techniques

Yeah... His fighting techniques....

 

[Laehtsia]

I think you forgot ch 4.5 dude

Ah you're right, I thought the next chapter was the 5th

 

[Laehtsia]

These are for chapter 4.5 mostly, not chapter 5.

Then that's good ! The sooner the better

 

[Deleted member 4866084]

Yeah... His fighting techniques....

This will involve a lot of groundwork...

 

[The Bush Diver]

This will involve a lot of groundwork...

And it will finish with Ayua finally bringing MC's dick back alive, finishing the work of wingnami!

 

[Quarron]

This will involve a lot of groundwork...

Yeah... a lot of groundwork...

 

[Tairnel]

If I'm not wrong :

- Movie night with Victoria and Maja ( or with Mila, i'm confused since chapter 4 ending )
- Going to Nia's if you accepted her invitation during the basketball session
- I recall something in a " studio " with Ayua
- Probably a psy session with Amber, it's been a while
- And a " date " with Mila if you accepted it

I believe it was a sparring session with Ayua.