Alright , so first ... brother for real , you REALLY NEED to review your game , because the amount of ERRORS that this game has is absurd , i mean come on ... EVERY SENTENCE has a misspelling and is very frustating to read so many errors .
Now graphicaly speaking, i have no complain , the game looks good , theres not much error there , just a few facial expressions gone bad , but is just a few.
Anyway lets talk about the story , i understand the lost of someone you love , i do have my parents , but i saw in first hand my grandfather and later my grandmother dying in FRONT of ME , so i understand the pain , but lets be real , they dont take that many years to "heal" of course they never will heal , you always will miss them , remember them and all that , but we learn to live with the pain and the pain become very faded.
I dont think anyone would take a whole year to "heal" because of a loss of someone important.
Thats why i hate games that already forces you into a relationship , or you is going to be cheating or her ( me personaly dont like any of those options ) . So now ... i had a distant relationship for 2 years, and im going to tell you bro , IS SHIT , feels like shit and doesnt work at all , doesnt matter "if you trully love" , sooner or later the relationship colapses. Anyway , i dont think both of them are in the wrong here.
First you live in another city , with stepmother and you have a girlfriend , you dont work or study thats on you , you let get to that point , and them somehow you go to another city just to unwind and take your mind of things .
The MC said "my ideas" , well first , the idea of you living in another city and leave everything behind, was your "friends" , NOT your idea , not your dreams or desires , your "friends" put the thoughts in your head and then you started thinking about it , now you say she is being selfish , but actually you are the one being selfish . You said "MY LIFE, MY DREAMS , MY FUTURE" , you see , not a single minute you thought about "our lifes , ours dreams and OUR FUTURE" , so you saw , you are selfish , you are only thinking about yourself , you didnt thought about her , about your stepmom . SO in this regard , you are the selfish one.
At the same time , i agree that you should follow your dreams and your life , so i understand both sides.
Now that friendship with those two idiots ... please give me a option to not be friends with this type of person... i cant even believe that a grow up man is acting this way , is beyond ridiculous to be honest , I was a shit person when growing up , but being a adult and being in that way.. yeah no... is not a friendship i want to have.
Now lets talk about the girls , honestly i only got interest in Maya , Jennifer and Julia . That Olivia girl ugly , Ellie very meh .
Daisy is okayish .
Well i guess that it from what i had to say

Anyway thanks for sharing and wish you a good luck with the project.
Lets wait and see what is coming next.