HTML Abandoned Sunlight Empire [v0.3.3beta] [PsychoFox]

[ThanhTung]

Seriously, I cannot wait to know what's gonna happen next in chapter 3,
Also, I draw a rough sketch of my favorite part in chapter 2, when the slave giving blowjob the her master while her parents having sex.
Hope U like it.

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[PsychoFoxOne]

Seriously, I cannot wait to know what's gonna happen next in chapter 3,
Also, I draw a rough sketch of my favorite part in chapter 2, when the slave giving blowjob the her master while her parents having sex.
Hope U like it.

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WOW fanart! I am honored. Chapter 3 is well underway. I think it should be released by Friday. BTW pm me if you can provide art for me to use in the game.

 

[ThanhTung]

WOW fanart! I am honored. Chapter 3 is well underway. I think it should be released by Friday. BTW pm me if you can provide art for me to use in the game.

FRIDAY, yesssssss!!! XD
I'm not really confident in my drawing skill :FeelsBadMan:, but if you want to redraw or fix it, feel free to do it. :biggrin::biggrin:
Also, here's the better version of the drawing:

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[Zalzany]

Thanks for the Psychology 101 rehash, it's been a while!

Sorry for late response its not psychology 101 lesson its just some advice stop playing cool, and own up to your self. You ain't fooling no one with the tough girl act. Just own up already tough girl, and be a tough woman for once. Nothing sadder then some one playing cool about their ignorance in life, your doing it just for you, but in reality its not doing you any good long haul.

Trust me you will be more happy if you drop the act, and start growing up. I mean this is mature rated sight for crying out loud. At least pretend your old enough to be here

 

[Bueno]

Sorry for late response its not psychology 101 lesson its just some advice stop playing cool, and own up to your self. You ain't fooling no one with the tough girl act. Just own up already tough girl, and be a tough woman for once. Nothing sadder then some one playing cool about their ignorance in life, your doing it just for you, but in reality its not doing you any good long haul.

Trust me you will be more happy if you drop the act, and start growing up. I mean this is mature rated sight for crying out loud. At least pretend your old enough to be here

Thanks for the Psychology 101 rehash, it's been a while! (since your last post)

 

[Nicolas Flamel]

didn't know plant porn was a thing.
didn't want to know
didn't need to know

Apparently this person has never heard of Urutsokudoji, Bible Black, La Blue Girl, Demon Beast Invasion, Demon Beast Resurrection, Evil Dead or any of at least a dozen other pieces of tentacle and/or plant matter (root or branch) defilement fantasies.

 

[fzdc]

Apparently this person has never heard of Urutsokudoji, Bible Black, La Blue Girl, Demon Beast Invasion, Demon Beast Resurrection, Evil Dead or any of at least a dozen other pieces of tentacle and/or plant matter (root or branch) defilement fantasies.

like i said
don't know
don't wanna know

 

[Thomas Neoh]

It's one man's porn, another man's poison. Seriously guys, if you can't take what's in this game just forgo it.

 

[Jim Webb]

Wow, the ending to this chapter was brutal!!

it is also nice to read someone who actually knows how to write an actual story coherently not an lot around well done.

 

[elldix]

Wow, I mean, I'm getting more and more hyped about this, your story-telling skills really are impressing and, at the contrary of other text based texts, I read every single ligne *wink* without beig bored!
I'm counting on you for the next realease, just be aware that you now have fans that are waiting ^^

 

[logros13]

Cant say i'm a fan of what a sausage fest this is turning out to be, 2 men a futa and

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:'(
I don't mind the plant thing, in fact it's nice to see something new and interesting, but the lack of women and the focus dicks, cum and more dicks everywhere is turning in to something of a turn off.

Edit: Also you emphasize choices having consequences in future chapters a lot but from what i can see doing anything but the exact right actions in the exact right order in every chapter results in death and a game over?

 

[PsychoFoxOne]

Cant say i'm a fan of what a sausage fest this is turning out to be, 2 men a futa and

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:'(
I don't mind the plant thing, in fact it's nice to see something new and interesting, but the lack of women and the focus dicks, cum and more dicks everywhere is turning in to something of a turn off.

Edit: Also you emphasize choices having consequences in future chapters a lot but from what i can see doing anything but the exact right actions in the exact right order in every chapter results in death and a game over?

I understand your concerns but do stick around. The cast is going to expand to include more women. As for choices, there are behind-the-scenes variables that get recorded as you play. You have already made important choices that you are not even aware of making in the first place. Also, seeing the bad ends is probably one of the most important things you can do in the game. I don't want to spoil anything, but I'm sure you haven't noticed half of the odd things that are gong on in the tale.

Edit: This is not a short story. We're not even out of the exposition yet so yeah... patience

 

[Zornk]

This is fucking great. I lurk way more than I post. This...This makes me post. Good job, good story. I am having a blast.

 

[mmmonsterkill]

is the soldier path not written or am i just getting a bug? "Double-click this passage to edit it." is the only text i get after clicking it.

 

[Illicifolia]

I really enjoy this game. It is close to the tone of some things I hope to make one day.

I look forward to even more!

 

[Nicolas Flamel]

is the soldier path not written or am i just getting a bug? "Double-click this passage to edit it." is the only text i get after clicking it.

@mmmonsterkill That message means it's a passage that's been created, but not written.

 

[lodadsaq]

@PsychoFoxOne can u add a latest release/update in the same format but the line above developer, jsut so that people know when it has been updates, all it has to be is a date

 

[PsychoFoxOne]

@PsychoFoxOne can u add a latest release/update in the same format but the line above developer, jsut so that people know when it has been updates, all it has to be is a date

I'll do this the next time the game is updated (spoilers: it's going to take a while longer).

 

[Megaflamer]

lets see, after playing the first two chapters my impressions are... this has a pretty darn great first chapter, however then you are fairly literally ripped out of your pace and things stop making any sort of sense. Now dont get me wrong, I know what sort of game this is but

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I can smell a deeper plot at work here, and I like deep plots
While I think I know what you wanted to have happen it would have benefitted from an 'in between' chapter 1 and 2, a sort of link to have it make more logical sense (doesnt have to be super sensible, this be a porn game after all) wouldnt hurt with a tad more options for chapter 2, mostly in what kinks the player might enjoy. I am not a man to deny someone their fetish after all, I just don't particularly fancy strong-arming into particualr ones. Perhaps a simple tag at the start to opt out of non-essential parts?

All in all I find this intriguing enough to keep a further eye on so do not be discouraged, all I say is in good faith as I so rarely see this kind of content.

 

[ekin11]

Any chance for a reupload, mega link is down.