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I highly doubt it that she and also her mom had plastic surgery, bcs her mom has almost the identical breasts.
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It's a good game. What bothers me a bit is the MC's relationship with Ashley, who in theory is her mom.
I do not work on the development of their relationship, it seems to me that there must be a more remarkable closeness between the two, as mother and son, and not as "my dad's ex".
All this under the argument that Ashley saw the MC grow, and lived much of his childhood and adolescence. And also because of the absence of a maternal presence in the life of the MC.
However, I understand that the dev wants to develop the story as credible as possible, skipping certain situations that could cause problems.
I do not work on the development of their relationship, it seems to me that there must be a more remarkable closeness between the two, as mother and son, and not as "my dad's ex".
All this under the argument that Ashley saw the MC grow, and lived much of his childhood and adolescence. And also because of the absence of a maternal presence in the life of the MC.
However, I understand that the dev wants to develop the story as credible as possible, skipping certain situations that could cause problems.
- Dec 17, 2017
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She's not his mom. She's his dad's ex, and his half-sister's mom.
- Jun 2, 2017
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When Hearsz wrote this part, he originally only had language in there intimating Georgina left D and F alone, and moved in with her life. I told him that depressed me since my best outcome was one with Georgina in it.Hello, i see that Georgia of DmD are the sister of Nicole and when they discute nicole ask for the relation between Georgia and his "manager". The "manager" are the main character in DmD ? (the father) if we play Georgia story ?
Because i don't play Georgia story in DmD, i choose in SL that she was just friend with her manager, maybe we gonna have a MC paradox
As the rewrite reads now is Georgina is “with“ her manager, whether that be F, another man, another female, or a futa.
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Lucas? Lucas?? Are you f*cking kidding me. This guy is as bad as luggage and worse than herpes...
Ι saw the Tottenham mug at the start but never made the connection with that dialogue. Thanks for clearing it up as it is a good pun which I totally missed.Heh
This part isn't about Grayson, but it's about football (soccer if you're american). When you first met him in his office, you can see his mug with the logo of Tottenham Hotspur, so I assume he is a fan. Then, when he is looking at his phone during the meeting with Brodie's dad, the last guy he is speaking about is Mauricio Pochettino, the former manager of Tottenham, who was sacked and the new guy, also called by him "The Special One" or clown is current Tottenham manager, José Mourinho.
So it's not about the Greyson or the events from the game, it's about events from real world and it's just some funny mention
(And I hope i'm not mistaken with this, but for me it's quite obvious this section)
Should be ashamed as an.... Arsenal fan.... damn
- Jun 2, 2017
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What a fucking good idea! I’m passing this one back to Hearsz and MDots! Even if we ultimately don’t use it, what a great idea!
I blame the girlfriend for that...otherwise I have to play it for the worst possible outcome...no happy endings for fucking GoonersΙ saw the Tottenham mug at the start but never made the connection with that dialogue. Thanks for clearing it up as it is a good pun which I totally missed.
Should be ashamed as an.... Arsenal fan.... damn
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MrDots writes the most pathetic and the most betas of all protagonists in porn games.... In all his games they all reek of M'Lady syndrome... MrDots should switch to making NTR games because he is good at writing such submissive freaks. In all his games, DMD, Melody and this his protagonists are all doormats.
- Dec 30, 2017
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While I'm lukewarm with SL at this point it's important to remember that very few stories are great from the first moment like Star Wars or Indiana Jones. I'm willing to give this a chance to build and develop as a story. Remember Star Trek at the time of it's release had low ratings and was canceled after less than 80 episodes.
- Dec 30, 2017
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Yeah warn Hyper there may be a futa.
I do need to ask what's up with anthropology in the mountains near Seaside? Did i read that right?
- Jun 2, 2017
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Yes! Ashley has a funded project in the mountains. She may be a flake in relationships, but she is a pro at completing various graduate degrees. She’s like so many professors out there who are great at getting publications done, but have gone thru several divorces, half of them being ex students.Yeah warn Hyper there may be a futa.
I do need to ask what's up with anthropology in the mountains near Seaside? Did i read that right?
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Believe me I know the politics (both inner university and real world political ideologies) in research studies.
My undergrad was as a Soc and Anthro major, then as an archaeologist.
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ok I am probably doing something stupid but I don't see the "peeking game". Where do I enter the code "opening"?
- Nov 23, 2017
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She's not good for him. Seriously, all you need to do to see that is look at her reaction to mc losing his job. There was no "I'm sorry to hear that, take a day or two off", it was "well you better have a new job offer by the time I get home." I'm sorry, that's not a healthy relationship, that's someone who demands their so fit into their bubble, and if anything doesn't go their way, they're going to make it so that it does, even if it clashes with their so. Based on that and other instances, I feel like she's going to get far worse where if mc isn't doing what she desires, she's going to force him to, even if it makes him miserable.