- Mar 16, 2018
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Well the Twins thing came out of fucking nowhere and together with the massage parlor it makes me question wether someone on the team recently developed a prostitution fetish.
It would have been one thing if they just managed the service but partaking themselves pushes it into a complete no go zone for me.
Their "us whoring ourselves out is a good thing for society!"-line actually made me laugh out loud.
The church-scheme(and the implications it had for how they got into the business in the first place)was just the icing on top.
Considering that the rest of the narrative was mostly "holiday slice-of-life" the dissonance really pushed this into the squeeky corner,questionable wether that was a good choice for a LI considering the prior narrative tone(in fact,I would say it was a horrible one).
As for the Vicky/Sis thing...urgh that needs a rewrite.
If Vicky spilled the secret before Sis made the decision to go along with it maybe they could have made it work somehow but as it stands she decided to ruffle the sheets and cheat,plain and simple(also rather randomly turning her bi felt a bit forced).
That puts her in a really bad light and clashes heavily with the love shenanigans she hasnt just been displaying up to that point but devolves even further into for the rest of the update.
Its obviously the setup for the threesome(being only on that route combination and all)but it was handled really badly.
Overall the whole thing just felt incredibly rushed.
Also now that I think about it,instead of constantly skipping days,how about finally fucking asking Yuki for that date?
It would have been one thing if they just managed the service but partaking themselves pushes it into a complete no go zone for me.
Their "us whoring ourselves out is a good thing for society!"-line actually made me laugh out loud.
The church-scheme(and the implications it had for how they got into the business in the first place)was just the icing on top.
Considering that the rest of the narrative was mostly "holiday slice-of-life" the dissonance really pushed this into the squeeky corner,questionable wether that was a good choice for a LI considering the prior narrative tone(in fact,I would say it was a horrible one).
As for the Vicky/Sis thing...urgh that needs a rewrite.
If Vicky spilled the secret before Sis made the decision to go along with it maybe they could have made it work somehow but as it stands she decided to ruffle the sheets and cheat,plain and simple(also rather randomly turning her bi felt a bit forced).
That puts her in a really bad light and clashes heavily with the love shenanigans she hasnt just been displaying up to that point but devolves even further into for the rest of the update.
Its obviously the setup for the threesome(being only on that route combination and all)but it was handled really badly.
Overall the whole thing just felt incredibly rushed.
Also now that I think about it,instead of constantly skipping days,how about finally fucking asking Yuki for that date?
