I think this game is rated worse than Melody (despite Melody, DmD and this basically having the same level of writing more or less) is because by his third game which is this people are starting to see Mrdots is not a good writer and always writes bland, stuttering or bafoon protagonists.
Another problem of his writing is his tendency to write every thought that comes into any characters mind. All of his 3 games have bad writing with boring Protagonists who speak a lot yet say very little, with the biggest saving grace of the games is the renders of the girls.
basically what i said already here:
https://f95zone.to/threads/sunshine-love-ch-3-v1-01i-extras-mrdots-games.49330/post-12745648
Even though you are right, we already are aware about these facts, and admitted to it. Also i already told that THIS is exactly why even WE think SL is the worst of our 3 games - you are kind of late to point that out - lol
EDIT: And you are also right about the fact, that MrDots is a "bad writer"- he isn't even english native - that's why he doesn't write the scenes (textlines) at all. He does the rendering and the coding - not the scene fleshing out and also not the dialogues XD. That's Hearsz (or at least that's how it used to be).
New workflow would be that we all sit in teams, discussing about a scene setup. Then Dots will do the rendering - then Hearsz will do the writing, and we all discuss again the result to apply changes if necessary. So it's not a defined separated workload - it's way more teamwork than before.
Oh - and let's not forget about Mistress - who does the same as MrDots (rendering and coding).
I for my part do basically "creative work", like scene setup, background stories, idea input, proofreading, feedback, internal critics .. and so on.
So for example the main side character in new game will more or less be shaped by my doing, but been polished by team work.