"All powered by the hamster currently spinning the workout wheel on my rendering machine. " haha just for that comment I'll play it...
Ren'Py Superheroes Suck [v1.951 Public] [Solace]
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- Aug 3, 2018
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if it´s a sandboxgame why not post on frontsite , though it cause misunderstandings...sandbox is mostly a nogo...so please tag in description..good luck
- Nov 18, 2018
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They mean the same thing, it's just more colloquial than straightforward
The patrol part is with Riley.
- Jun 16, 2017
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"You're sure about the this?" is grammatically incorrect. It doesn't make sense in English. Just change it to what was recommended, they are not the same thing.
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- Jan 4, 2020
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Nah, this is fine for informal usage.
EDIT: Oh, I see. The "the" should not be there. It should be "You're sure about this?"
- Jan 4, 2020
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There's nothing grammatically incorrect about it. In formal usage, it doesn't really fit, but informally, it is fine!
EDIT: The overall construction is fine, but the word "the" should not be there. It should be "You're sure about this?"
Knight of Solace
Minor typos or grammar problems in the latest version during the super hero powers speech
Flawess : Flawless (bathroom with valentina)
They captilize : capitalize (villain speech)
one of far more : of a far
throw a moving subway : (This box reads weird being a subway car would be underground so ripping it through the ground would probably be worse than throwing it into some street)
little bit help : bit of help
escorting a elderly : an
persits : persists (ladies 10 minutes early)
passed any : (unsure if it should be past)
(right before Riley being chosen the image of harper behind her has harper's arm is down, but when chosen she is leaning on her arm, seems too quick a transition
not up to debate : up for debate
she get to go the date : (missing a word or two)
Class dimissed : dismissed
hallway carpet falls follow : (this box needs a rewrite to make sense)
powers exactly do : do exactly
set you sorted : get
she as hoping : was
it found out late : I found
joining me a second : me for a
What's on going : going on
uh... suit? : ... a suit?
The the armor : (remove a the)
Risker : Riskier
your tanport's : transport's
your presense : presence
then lets get : let's
racing passed your : (unsure if passed or past)
definitely at bruise : a
clamber over yourself : (I assume you mean the seats, because you can't do it over yourself)
(I think when mentioning super villains it was always separate, while superheroes is always a single word)
Minor typos or grammar problems in the latest version during the super hero powers speech
Flawess : Flawless (bathroom with valentina)
They captilize : capitalize (villain speech)
one of far more : of a far
throw a moving subway : (This box reads weird being a subway car would be underground so ripping it through the ground would probably be worse than throwing it into some street)
little bit help : bit of help
escorting a elderly : an
persits : persists (ladies 10 minutes early)
passed any : (unsure if it should be past)
(right before Riley being chosen the image of harper behind her has harper's arm is down, but when chosen she is leaning on her arm, seems too quick a transition
not up to debate : up for debate
she get to go the date : (missing a word or two)
Class dimissed : dismissed
hallway carpet falls follow : (this box needs a rewrite to make sense)
powers exactly do : do exactly
set you sorted : get
she as hoping : was
it found out late : I found
joining me a second : me for a
What's on going : going on
uh... suit? : ... a suit?
The the armor : (remove a the)
Risker : Riskier
your tanport's : transport's
your presense : presence
then lets get : let's
racing passed your : (unsure if passed or past)
definitely at bruise : a
clamber over yourself : (I assume you mean the seats, because you can't do it over yourself)
(I think when mentioning super villains it was always separate, while superheroes is always a single word)
- Sep 27, 2019
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Thank you so much for the detailed write-up! All of the issues presented have been addressed.
I really do appreciate all of the time you're putting in to find these typos. I try to do a few playthroughs before each release, but by the time I've seen it in game, I've gone over the writing so many times in the code that my eyes gloss over everything.
- Sep 27, 2019
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Story-wise? Missus Powell is a famous hero that is busy most of the week!
For game development reasons, it's much easier to manage the pacing and coding for the events this way.
- Sep 27, 2019
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...Can I add tags? Is that something only the poster of the thread can do? I am sorry, I am very new to all of this on F95zone.
- Jan 13, 2020
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I started the typo checking post the super hero power speech, but I know I saw at least 1 run on where it went "something and something and something" which should be "something, something, and something", other one was a missing word when talking about how old or something. Sorry for not being as descriptive.
I also left out the previously mentioned bench throw "You're sure about the this" since others mentioned it. But yeah remove "the".
Ask a mod for ownership of the thread so you can add tags and screens.
- Feb 25, 2018
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