Well I really enjoyed this from start to finish, the MP arc feels overly long. Im mostly upset the book I was enjoying is over and has no more content, and a bit disappointed this is all there is in 5 years. When I started, I thought it would be much shorter, end of Act 2 say. But its dragging on a lot. I wonder if the author changed writing direction midway.
My first theory was that Veronica was MP's 2nd daughter, and her power was memory manipulation or some such. I figured thats how she injected into dreams and made people forget about her during the heist. The reason MP appeared overpowered by her was that she recognized her as a daughter and didnt want to hurt her, so she just accepted the sedative and let herself get taken.
There is definitely a twist coming with the 2nd daughter, which I guess is that vamp villain we havent seen yet.
Also a bit sadge there hasnt been more Felicity teasing. She pissed the bed, she was pissing outside, and he called her pretty kitty etc. I wouldve liked MC to tease her more with this shit even early on, but so far shes really only been teased by the other girls and MC seems annoyingly obvlious or to straight arrow about it.
As a broader critique, the sex and porn content is very lukewarm. Emotions dont run high, passion is lacking. The girls could do with hotter expresions at culmination of scenes. Its all very business casuall. The weird harem situation is also barely adressed, out side of the girls just magically being okay with it and there being next to no jealousy. There were a few lines about how hes helped girl X and she feels he could help girl Y etc, but this was underutilized. Also, this game being mostly kinetic and not having any LI branching, where are the threesomes etc!
All in all I enjoyed this game, but if I had to divide my enjoyment over the 5 year dev time, id have a really hard time justifying this game keeping my attention. Still, looking forward to more of the story. Much more so than the porn....
I'm not sure what you mean by new direction? Ms. Powell has been missing since the beginning of 2022, we are almost in 2026, there has been no interaction let progress with her in the meantime.
All I'm saying is that it doesn't make sense that we save her at the end of the story and then have her suddenly be a main LI after the credits. All the other girls took years of active development, the missus will not have much screen as we are rolling now.
I just played through all the content first time, and I there think theres the possibility of sex with MP atleast. When MC asks about MP's powers and any issues he might have, Harper hints at there being one, but that it probably wont affect him because hes a man.
I think its penetration. MP has ultimate lipgrip, so shes basically not had sex since her powers activated. Until MC comes along anyway....