VN Ren'Py Superhuman [v0.996 Public] [WeirdWorld]

[JustADude321]

People are always so fuckin judgy when they don't even play the full game *cough* *cough*

First of all, happy holidays!

Very little of what you ranted about really has anything to do with what I've said, but those are valid complaints about the community in general. For the sake of this being a forum, and forums being meant for discussion, I'll reply to what I think is appropriate.

This isn't a multi million dollar company with Unreal Engine, this is one guy/gal,AND their first game to boot, cut them some slack and give them a chance.

People do! That's why I'm playing it right now, and why the game, despite what some might perceive is clunky art, is in the front page of the weighted ratings, isn't it?

I, at least personally, am not really "crying" about the art, it grew on me after I tried the game out, proportions and all that. It just irked me from playing initially, because it's generally means other aspects of the game fall short. WW's writing is pretty damn good, however, my other complaints aside, and if his work ethic is as good as you testify it to be, then I applaud them for having what many other devs don't. May they continue to improve and master their skills!

and literally ALL of it, even the straight stuff, is AVOIDABLE minus 2, 2 whole scenes!

I understand, and am glad that it is so! A lot of the content in the game is not for me, so I'm glad that the fetishy stuff can be picked apart in order to make the player's personal experience better. The only sour taste in my mouth in that regard, is that it seems the NTR side appears to bleed over into where it shouldn't; I really don't want to hear how Liz needs huge dicks to satisfy her, or how Emily has never handled someone as big as the main character, or how Jake was mind-controlling Amber and Liz in the frat house, then ordered us to leave because we were "interrupting something" and wanted to be alone with two of the game's love interests, even when I made no choice towards the NTR part during the whole game. Liz can like whatever she wants, Emily can have all the experience she likes, but hey, didn't friggin' ask, you know what I'm saying? xD

Really didn't like that Jake thing though.

If you didn't read the room from that from the first introduction to the College, that's on you bro. Not everyone is an inexperienced, easily manipulated, virgin like every typical porn tale.

I know! I didn't say they had to be!

And contrary to what you might think, I am reading the room in assuming that the entire rest of the game will be just like this, and every other love interest will act the same, save for Mia and perhaps Claudia (I think was her name). I'm merely expressing my distaste for one aspect of a game I otherwise really enjoy. Is that not why we are here, to discuss games and their content?

 

[Naryelle]

Here is it my "review" of the game, please note that i do it for the sole purpose of giving feedback for help the creator of the game and the eventual peoples that work with him/her, meaning despite the fact i've liked it so far and finded it good, i will mostly write about defaults and points out things that need or will greatly benefit of improvements at my opinions, there are listed by order of importance, still in my opinion, given the actual statut of the game (v 0.921).

Please also note that english ins't my native language, so in addition of spelling, vocabulary, conjugation and grammar errors (wich you are welcome to correct) its possible that i don't use the corrects words for some precises terms, if something seem odd to you, feel free to ask more details or precisions.



-Don't know exactly how to say it in english so i will go with this formula : graphically, the characters sprites lack details and/or finesse in the pecil lines making them stand out a lot from the decor and the other graphics of the game that seem to be just at another level, leaving the impression they are ugly when not knowing the game or launching it the first time, needing a time for eyes to adapt, this is especially true at the begining of the game, wich is a real problem cause its when you have the first impression.


-The stats menu, despite its very high utility for peoples who want to optimize and/or complete all is nearly hidden, never saw it along all my experience though i used the save/load system a lot, only learned his existence after i've finished the game by seeing people discuss about it on the forum that leaned me to shearch everywhere, with the game alone i would never known it existed, a ways to make it more obvious to notice would be welcome.


-Without talking about a "permanently female" feature (yes, i've read the FAQ in the Walkthrough.pdf in the folder of the game, notice btw that this walkthrough wasn't updated), a proper "female form with guys" route will be a good thing.


-The gallery is currently full of bugs : the 11th and 12th scenes take you out of the gallery after they end; 87th go a bit far before end; 53th don't end and continue though the game, 16th, 19th, 20th, 26th, 29th, 78th are full of errors; 49th and 80th have one at the end (if you do the 2nd choice for the 49th); 84th have one at her begining; 83th don't end and have errors at the moments i assume she is supposed to end.


-Having more interractions between the advancement of somes events with others events or with the story would be nice, as for now i've had the feeling that they were 2 worlds inside the game : the main story and the sides events without those two worlds intteracting each others.


-As for now, the lack of incidences of the stats and choices is omnious and currently, doing another save after finished the game one time, whatever choices you've make, has nearly no interest and will just be "skiping all until i unlock the scenes i didn't unlock the first time" cause the sory will be pratically the same.


-For complete the precedent point, few suggestions that could be raw material to work in :
Having differences in the events and the story betwen when you go "harem" and when you go "loyal" on you relations.

Having choices that will have differents issues depending of wich level you have on certains stats (relation/advancement in an event/skill/power/corruption/ect...) admiting differents ways to manage a situation and not just scenes or events who will just sucess or fail/dead end if you don't have the right amount of power or don't make the exact and only right path of choices (without abusing it, don't forget that realising you've make a choice 3 hours ago that block you now and have to remake those 3 hours is frustating).

Deepening the system of stats and training, allowing more and deep possibilities for the precedent suggestion.


-Putting the Alice route in her own event not encrusted in the main story or putting the decision of wich is your "official relation" (harem included) in the main story instead (Mia's question about it seem a good way to do it, first time i've see it i've honnestly thinked it was for that).



I didn't listed the point "finish the story of the game" cause i think its mandatory and already on the line ^^
Hope that will be usefull to you and thanx for your already done and future work.

 

[DrakoGhoul]

I agree I definitely want to cuck Cole, nothing personal though he has LITERALLY done nothing to us yet and we're already shitting on him lol!

Cole appearing there on stage with us already points to him being up to no good. Especially because he likely killed that tv host. Ella also most likely caused this with her comment prior. Plus, he's a huge ass. You know he's there for a fight because his ego couldn't handle what Ella said to him.

Anyway, If Ella wants to keep bringing my MC snacks, until it's time for her to be his main course dinner, that's fine by me.

 

[necromater]

Cole appearing there on stage with us already points to him being up to no good. Especially because he likely killed that tv host. Ella also most likely caused this with her comment prior. Plus, he's a huge ass. You know he's there for a fight because his ego couldn't handle what Ella said to him.

Anyway, If Ella wants to keep bringing my MC snacks, until it's time for her to be his main course dinner, that's fine by me.

Feast, Feast , Feast. LOl

 

[necromater]

lol is ww gonna replace the art on the first part of the game? cus feels that way. i know is ugly but has charm so i'm kinda stuck what do you think?

 

[Naryelle]

lol is ww gonna replace the art on the first part of the game? cus feels that way. i know is ugly but has charm so i'm kinda stuck what do you think?

Its more or less the first point i've talk about in my feedback, maybe if we are enough to feel that way and tell him/her he/she is gonna consider it

 

[Khan Targaryen]

First of all, happy holidays!

Very little of what you ranted about really has anything to do with what I've said, but those are valid complaints about the community in general. For the sake of this being a forum, and forums being meant for discussion, I'll reply to what I think is appropriate.


People do! That's why I'm playing it right now, and why the game, despite what some might perceive is clunky art, is in the front page of the weighted ratings, isn't it?

I, at least personally, am not really "crying" about the art, it grew on me after I tried the game out, proportions and all that. It just irked me from playing initially, because it's generally means other aspects of the game fall short. WW's writing is pretty damn good, however, my other complaints aside, and if his work ethic is as good as you testify it to be, then I applaud them for having what many other devs don't. May they continue to improve and master their skills!


I understand, and am glad that it is so! A lot of the content in the game is not for me, so I'm glad that the fetishy stuff can be picked apart in order to make the player's personal experience better. The only sour taste in my mouth in that regard, is that it seems the NTR side appears to bleed over into where it shouldn't; I really don't want to hear how Liz needs huge dicks to satisfy her, or how Emily has never handled someone as big as the main character, or how Jake was mind-controlling Amber and Liz in the frat house, then ordered us to leave because we were "interrupting something" and wanted to be alone with two of the game's love interests, even when I made no choice towards the NTR part during the whole game. Liz can like whatever she wants, Emily can have all the experience she likes, but hey, didn't friggin' ask, you know what I'm saying? xD

Really didn't like that Jake thing though.


I know! I didn't say they had to be!

And contrary to what you might think, I am reading the room in assuming that the entire rest of the game will be just like this, and every other love interest will act the same, save for Mia and perhaps Claudia (I think was her name). I'm merely expressing my distaste for one aspect of a game I otherwise really enjoy. Is that not why we are here, to discuss games and their content?

Tiffany(Virgin), Claudia(Probably a Virgin or Very Inexperienced), and Mia(Probably a Virgin)

Emily has been with two other people besides the mc(Jared and one time with a teacher, if her claims are true atleast) and Alice+Amber probably haven't been with a truckload of people either. So Liz, the stripper, Ella, Demi, Angelina, etc are the only ones who could be classified as "easy". Ella and Christine don't really count anyways tbh.

And you can make Jake leave if you trained like you were supposed to.

 

[Khan Targaryen]

Does Ella do anything if you kill Christine?

 

[MrFranky26]

And the giant tits probably don't help

They are help A LOT. And in combo with huge asses they are completly mvp. The reason why this game catch my eyes 3 times to finally let it a chance.
But yes "vanila bbw" is not popular. And a lot of "naturality" fanatics malding around.

 

[Naryelle]

Does Ella do anything if you kill Christine?

Yeah she doe

 

[DrakoGhoul]

Does Ella do anything if you kill Christine?

She kills you at the hospital later when you visit Mia.

 

[Xx21savagexX]

Why are people hating on arguably the best girl Alice aside Emily and the twins

 

[DrakoGhoul]

It's not even arguable, honestly. Alice is the best girl. None of the other love interests come even close to her, currently. In fact, I would say the Dev wrote her too well because it's going to be real hard for any of the other women to stand a chance.

Now, I'm not saying you can't like any other character, personally. I like Danica and Alexis, for example. I'm speaking from an objective viewpoint on what's in the game. By far, Alice has the best interactions as a love interest.

 

[JustADude321]

So Liz, the stripper, Ella, Demi, Angelina, etc are the only ones who could be classified as "easy".

Kek, I don't think "only ones" is a fitting phrase to use when you're referring to the vast majority of a certain group.

Why even have concrete numbers in the first place, and not just make that kind of stuff ambiguous? Virgins have defloration scenes (which are hot as fuck, I'd like to reiterate), and the girls that don't, you can fill in the blanks yourself with how many guys they've fucked before.

And you can make Jake leave if you trained like you were supposed to.

I'll give you that one, I glanced at the code. My stats were at 7, and I needed 8, so I guess I was locked into that choice from the get-go.

I wonder what else I've locked myself in because of things I was or wasn't supposed to do?

 

[ffive]

It's not even arguable, honestly. Alice is the best girl. None of the other love interests come even close to her, currently. In fact, I would say the Dev wrote her too well because it's going to be real hard for any of the other women to stand a chance.

Alice has a large presence in the main plot while others are relegated to support roles at best, so that perception is hardly surprising.

 

[Khan Targaryen]

It's not even arguable, honestly. Alice is the best girl. None of the other love interests come even close to her, currently. In fact, I would say the Dev wrote her too well because it's going to be real hard for any of the other women to stand a chance.

Now, I'm not saying you can't like any other character, personally. I like Danica and Alexis, for example. I'm speaking from an objective viewpoint on what's in the game. By far, Alice has the best interactions as a love interest.

Danica is

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[ffive]

Danica is

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It's not even arguable, honestly. Alice is the best girl. None of the other love interests come even close to her, currently. In fact, I would say the Dev wrote her too well because it's going to be real hard for any of the other women to stand a chance.

Now, I'm not saying you can't like any other character, personally. I like Danica and Alexis, for example. I'm speaking from an objective viewpoint on what's in the game. By far, Alice has the best interactions as a love interest.

I agree.. no one complements the mc more then ALICE imoo..

hands down she is the best girl and no other girl comes close imo as well.
as a legit love interest, Alice number 1.

Liz, demi, angelina, christa, and most of the other girls are to easy and most probably had over 20 bodies on them. With alice she is the only one of the few who don't come off as a EASY because she hands down was one of the toughest love interest to get to bring down her wall if you know what I mean.

hell I had to choose 1 girl to ride or die with, it's alice.

 

[Khan Targaryen]

Kek, I don't think "only ones" is a fitting phrase to use when you're referring to the vast majority of a certain group.

Why even have concrete numbers in the first place, and not just make that kind of stuff ambiguous? Virgins have defloration scenes (which are hot as fuck, I'd like to reiterate), and the girls that don't, you can fill in the blanks yourself with how many guys they've fucked before.

3 Inexperienced/Virgin Women(Tiffany, Claudia, Mia), 4+ women that didn't screw a bunch of people(Amber, Alice, Emily, Jess), 2+ women with high body counts(Probably Liz, Angelina), and maybe 4+ women that are outright whores(Ella, Tess, Christine, and possibly Demi).

My point is that there are a multitude of women to choose from, so you're not limited to sluts! You can wait for scenes with Mia and Claudia or you can go for Amber and Alice. Besides, only Emily and Angelina have concrete body counts, and you don't even have to know Angelina's since it's a dialogue choice.

 

[Khan Targaryen]

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