Here is it my "review" of the game, please note that i do it for the sole purpose of giving feedback for help the creator of the game and the eventual peoples that work with him/her, meaning despite the fact i've liked it so far and finded it good, i will mostly write about defaults and points out things that need or will greatly benefit of improvements at my opinions, there are listed by order of importance, still in my opinion, given the actual statut of the game (v 0.921).
Please also note that english ins't my native language, so in addition of spelling, vocabulary, conjugation and grammar errors (wich you are welcome to correct) its possible that i don't use the corrects words for some precises terms, if something seem odd to you, feel free to ask more details or precisions.
-Don't know exactly how to say it in english so i will go with this formula : graphically, the characters sprites lack details and/or finesse in the pecil lines making them stand out a lot from the decor and the other graphics of the game that seem to be just at another level, leaving the impression they are ugly when not knowing the game or launching it the first time, needing a time for eyes to adapt, this is especially true at the begining of the game, wich is a real problem cause its when you have the first impression.
-The stats menu, despite its very high utility for peoples who want to optimize and/or complete all is nearly hidden, never saw it along all my experience though i used the save/load system a lot, only learned his existence after i've finished the game by seeing people discuss about it on the forum that leaned me to shearch everywhere, with the game alone i would never known it existed, a ways to make it more obvious to notice would be welcome.
-Without talking about a "permanently female" feature (yes, i've read the FAQ in the Walkthrough.pdf in the folder of the game, notice btw that this walkthrough wasn't updated), a proper "female form with guys" route will be a good thing.
-The gallery is currently full of bugs : the 11th and 12th scenes take you out of the gallery after they end; 87th go a bit far before end; 53th don't end and continue though the game, 16th, 19th, 20th, 26th, 29th, 78th are full of errors; 49th and 80th have one at the end (if you do the 2nd choice for the 49th); 84th have one at her begining; 83th don't end and have errors at the moments i assume she is supposed to end.
-Having more interractions between the advancement of somes events with others events or with the story would be nice, as for now i've had the feeling that they were 2 worlds inside the game : the main story and the sides events without those two worlds intteracting each others.
-As for now, the lack of incidences of the stats and choices is omnious and currently, doing another save after finished the game one time, whatever choices you've make, has nearly no interest and will just be "skiping all until i unlock the scenes i didn't unlock the first time" cause the sory will be pratically the same.
-For complete the precedent point, few suggestions that could be raw material to work in :
Having differences in the events and the story betwen when you go "harem" and when you go "loyal" on you relations.
Having choices that will have differents issues depending of wich level you have on certains stats (relation/advancement in an event/skill/power/corruption/ect...) admiting differents ways to manage a situation and not just scenes or events who will just sucess or fail/dead end if you don't have the right amount of power or don't make the exact and only right path of choices (without abusing it, don't forget that realising you've make a choice 3 hours ago that block you now and have to remake those 3 hours is frustating).
Deepening the system of stats and training, allowing more and deep possibilities for the precedent suggestion.
-Putting the Alice route in her own event not encrusted in the main story or putting the decision of wich is your "official relation" (harem included) in the main story instead (Mia's question about it seem a good way to do it, first time i've see it i've honnestly thinked it was for that).
I didn't listed the point "finish the story of the game" cause i think its mandatory and already on the line ^^
Hope that will be usefull to you and thanx for your already done and future work.
