You're entitled to your opinion, of course, and my game won't be for everyone, but I do take umbrage at this part here. I have a decently solid background in fiction writing and the theoretical knowledge to back that up. I don't write filler. That's one of the deadly sins a writer can commit, and I know to avoid it. Nothing here is written to stall for time. If a passage of text appears in this story, it is there for a damn good reason, even if you might not have the underestanding of the plot needed to contextualize it yet.
Criticism is fine, but keep it respectful, please.
