VN Ren'Py Surviving My Family [Chapter 1] [Carmine Note Games]

[Juerhullycin]

props for honesty, i guess. But at the same time

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Nope you're over thinking it. This will literally just be one game over (Not a "bad ending" cause game overs are not endings) not animated or depicted can be turned off if you want the more kinetic novel version.

Spoiler: vague spoiler

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I really dislike bad endings (and game overs, which for me are endings). In VN I only see one ending, so unless there is a guide or some way to easily avoid those bad endings (and game overs), I just don't think I'll be interested in the game.

 

[LordWanze]

Overall it is a nice start.
I like the girls a lot, especially the two (step)nieces.
Could've gone without the dicks, but luckily you at least killed the last one of quite fast.

What shocked me the most: I liked the MC.
He doesn't pretend to be the biggest shark in the tank, but also pushes back now and then.
I actually really like him for some reason.

The scenes were fast paced but not rushed in my opinion. It had a dynamic feeling, that we went along with the MC about the day to prepare and celebrate.

Renders and models are on the older side, but I like the style overall and it has its own charm.

I found the dialogues to be quite fluid.
Can't really remember any big errors or typos.

The text was already mentioned.
I had a hard time reading part of it, either because of the color or the background lighting.
You said you'll work on it, scaling options and maybe color changes will surely help a lot.

All in all it was a kinetic prologue that didn't give any hints about gameplay and choices, so for now I'm in for the ride.

Thank you for your work.

 

[ImariKurumi]

Liking the female cast and the protagonist.
Just hoping the survival & post-apocalyse aspect takes center stage in the narrative too.
Now & Then did a great job on that with a good balance between the harem building and the post-apocalyse story.

 

[Daddy Graves]

I'm totally in love with the MC it's like you have pocket size Pedro Pascal Lite Version, love this game❤❤❤❤ giving it a 4 for now for my review. Nothing bad to say just wish to add more character we could get as the story of the game goes by, is this game restricted as a straight game only? Because I love too see more kinks this game too can give like for example bdsm, femdom, futa, different kinds of kinks to add to and any possible m2m or bi route (since the MC was too chill and kinda weak I mean he need other stronger male companion to teach him to protect his family and himself). I'm just suggesting if the author did not this kinda tea it's ok I'm just kinda add some missing feelers of the story❤. Wish we could get some action fighting those zombie too (but I'm not sure the MC can kill those things he surely look so weak) just implementing to add someone other male to teach the MC (hehehe m2m route please) that's all love this game

 

[Enigemm]

Interesting prologue. There's an error with the Discord invite though. Says expired.

 

[Carmine Note Games]

Interesting prologue. There's an error with the Discord invite though. Says expired.

Yeah didn't realize at the time that it would expire. But the permanent one can be found under the developer info on the first page. Thanks for checking it out and pls do check out the discord to see how much things are changing.

 

[Enigemm]

Will do. Thanks. I prefer use Discord when I spot errors and translation issues (have helped a few devs fix up their English translation.)

 

[Nimbus Commando]

I don't mind the MC not bad he does seem weak as fuck though, and I am just not really a fan of the lesbian shit like I swear it gets old when they put that in harem, even more so when they make every woman Bi for some reason, or they make the lesbian a fucking predator that just assaults every damn woman. And the Multiple protagonist stuff, am 50-50 on stuff like that.

 

[LordWanze]

I don't mind the MC not bad he does seem weak as fuck though, and I am just not really a fan of the lesbian shit like I swear it gets old when they put that in harem, even more so when they make every woman Bi for some reason, or they make the lesbian a fucking predator that just assaults every damn woman. And the Multiple protagonist stuff, am 50-50 on stuff like that.

Not sure what game you played, but it wasn't this one...

 

[Beast Within]

anyone else sees the resemblance?





then again it could be the rum.

 

[LordWanze]

Is there any update so far?

 

[Carmine Note Games]

Is there any update so far?

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[LordWanze]

Great, joined, thanks for the reply.

 

[Juerhullycin]

Nimbus Commando & Beast Within did you both read the dev note spoiler in the op?

 

[Beast Within]

Nimbus Commando & Beast Within did you both read the dev note spoiler in the op?

yeah I did. I am waiting to see if the dev will change his mind about this bullshit.
if not.. I will add it into my "how to fuck up a game list" and then just click ignore and move on.
and when it gets the tag ( because it will if the shit exists in the game) then the game will be invisible to all those who have ntr excluded. which is the vast majority of his target audience.

 

[Juerhullycin]

yeah I did. I am waiting to see if the dev will change his mind about this bullshit.
if not.. I will add it into my "how to fuck up a game list" and then just click ignore and move on.

that's not very signature accurate of you

but hey you get to be my "surviving my family"-canary, lets see if you make it through it or if i need another one for the next game

 

[Beast Within]

that's not very signature accurate of you

true. but I do need some shits and giggles in my life from time to time.

Edit: yeah on second thought I think I will move on. stay healthy man.

 

[Celsiu2]

The prologue has left me wanting more! When will the next chapter be ready?

 

[Carmine Note Games]

The prologue has left me wanting more! When will the next chapter be ready?

Thanks for checking it out! Glad you enjoyed working on it now refer to this for updates.

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