RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.551] [Fujino]

[Queen_Nothing]

heya, do you know a link to this games signatures or did ou make them yourself?

I made loads, found here but others have made a couple of their own.

 

[N1rox98]

Imho, the anxiety stat seems poorly thought out in its current state. I believe its implementation negatively impacts the NTR element of the game. The introduction of the anxiety stat in part 2 raises concerns about the depth of Kirito's further character development. If he consistently wakes up with a clean slate, completely unreflective of the events causing anxiety the day before, it makes his behavioral changes appear less authentic. By that logic, he encounters the feeling that something might be wrong every day anew, can never build up awareness, and develop; he is basically blocked from interfering between Asuna x Inoda by the game's own rules.

Exactly, and this system was ruined in the first two updates, I think. At the start, this stat was counterweight to the "cuckolding" and it looked really promising, cus this promised greater variability in the choice of the hero’s behavior and in the outcome of many events. Now it just currency for unseen hentai scenes. Meh.

 

[Jeycii_]

you guys are being too much on the poor dev (your wording at least)
if you have read the comment from the chicken at the end of the content, you would know he is starting to burn out. he is living in asia while working as a corporate slave.
i was already totally surprised that his highest supporting tier was only 10usd. that shows how little he thinks his own work is actually worth, even tho he is trying to deliver so much monthly while working 24/7.

personally i would have left a lot of things from part 1 in part 2 just for its simplicity and straightforwardness of the game. i often get lost or didnt what to do, jsut because the map became so much bigger and so many more details were put in... but i assume a lot of ppl wanted different things and choices for the player so he went out of his way to listen to the feedback of everyone.

he is working hard and even if you arent happy for the implementations, words like "meh" are really disheartening for a creator. so please at least try to choose your words better

 

[FavenXXX]

Pity, pity, pity, pity, pity, pity, and rain for pity.
Played - that's it, the mood is gone, and NTR should give the mood.

 

[Jeycii_]

Im sharing my review in the forum. People who scan through it, may get encouraged to play

This game is beautiful.
You can feel that the creator is really trying his best. He is really delivering. This gave has only been out for like a year but there is so much content. Much more content than other creators has put out in 2-3 years. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I love the slow progress of corruption on the targets. Its not too fast, not too slow, just perfect. And the chapter/part finals are always so satisfying to finally see. Its just peak content and delivery for me.
And the start of part 2 was also handled really well. And how slowly the "mc" creeped himself into their life again was also funny to see. The Best part are the scenes behind the scenes. When you go to sleep and see in your dream world, just what really happened while you werent present..
The internet blog updates are also a very nice addition.
I love this, its really well done.
The dev gets better and the quality isnt worsening.
Im also feeling for the dev after reading his heartful message at the end the current content but am wishing him the best happiness in the life and enough wealth that he doesnt have to suffer. (yea NTR enjoyer and creator are no monsters xd)
Anyways, I genuinely enjoyed this game and am putting this up in my top games list. 12/10

 

[ciccio76]

so there will be update this month or not?

no, for the next update we will have to wait for April

 

[FavenXXX]

Asuna is kind, but she's not 100% stupid, and here, especially in the second part, she's super naive, and the author is trying to say with all the texts that Inoda is sometimes worse than any parasite in the whole universe, any homeless person would be better than Inoda in anything.
Asuna feels sorry for the author for doing that.
Well what kind of scenes went, pity and pity 2 minutes and I need to pity him, what's the beauty of it, even in regular NTR where I just cheat is better than here.
I will not say the name of the game, and it is not about NTR, there you play for a rich girl in a mansion, she loses everything and tries to pick up, so there are VERY many scenes, and there is much better NTR is transmitted than where everyone for some reason must (PITY INODU), although I repeat, that game is not NTR, but it is still 100 times better than this NTR.
Author, you can write a thousand times I feel sorry for INODA.
You want to beat INODU more than you want to feel sorry for him, he's like a VIRUS in the way of ASUNA.
I could describe the details, but I will not, the game is no longer interesting to me, and what will be written, too, because I came to the game for NTR, and not to look at INODA, and certainly not to ah, okay, never mind, all this, the game is dead.
They'll add a few costumes and Asuna will get fucked here and there, that's it.
To the person who recommended this game to me, thank you, but I wasted my time and mood.
Any game would be better in terms of NTR than this one.

 

[Anzai1337]

so there will be update this month or not?

No, his updates are always at the end of each month, but he said he's a little tired from juggling work and game development, so an update is expected at the end of April

 

[Hentai_Desu-ka?]

Imho, the anxiety stat seems poorly thought out in its current state. I believe its implementation negatively impacts the NTR element of the game. The introduction of the anxiety stat in part 2 raises concerns about the depth of Kirito's further character development. If he consistently wakes up with a clean slate, completely unreflective of the events causing anxiety the day before, it makes his behavioral changes appear less authentic. By that logic, he encounters the feeling that something might be wrong every day anew, can never build up awareness, and develop; he is basically blocked from interfering between Asuna x Inoda by the game's own rules.

I think the current Anxiety value stat can lead to some surprisingly interesting results actually.

If planned out right, because of the introduction of the Administrator, Kirito is known for "Breaking" and/ or "Beating" games. Imagine this, Kirito catches on to the Administrator wiping clean Kirito's Anxiety, tired of the Admin cucking him, this can drive Kirito to decide whether to defeat the Administrator or keep her in power (two options available for both paths).

- Kirito defeats Administrator, opens up Revenge Arc to take back Asuna. (Edit: This can lead to either a Good or Bad End, Kirito could kill Asuna too as part of his revenge or let her live continuing to get cucked in the bad end. Ultimate, Revenge Arc gets some bad ends, it just depends on the player if they want Kirito to become a heartless anti-hero or not.)

- Kirito defeats Administrator, giving himself Admin privileges but instead of choosing revenge, opens up his kink desires for cuckolding.

OR

- Kirito makes a deal with the Administrator, the Admin then favors Kirito and stops cucking him, helps him reclaim Asuna

- Kirito continues being oblivious to Administrator wiping his Anxiety value clean and the cucking also continues.

Those are just 4 options that I can see available in the Anxiety stats current state, it doesn't need to be removed/ drastically changed exactly, just improved upon for a purpose. At least, that's just my thoughts. I don't believe a Revenge arc will happen in this game but who knows.

 

[4-kun]

I think the current Anxiety value stat can lead to some surprisingly interesting results actually.

If planned out right, because of the introduction of the Administrator, Kirito is known for "Breaking" and/ or "Beating" games. Imagine this, Kirito catches on to the Administrator wiping clean Kirito's Anxiety, tired of the Admin cucking him, this can drive Kirito to decide whether to defeat the Administrator or keep her in power (two options available for both paths).

- Kirito defeats Administrator, opens up Revenge Arc to take back Asuna. (Edit: This can lead to either a Good or Bad End, Kirito could kill Asuna too as part of his revenge or let her live continuing to get cucked in the bad end. Ultimate, Revenge Arc gets some bad ends, it just depends on the player if they want Kirito to become a heartless anti-hero or not.)

- Kirito defeats Administrator, giving himself Admin privileges but instead of choosing revenge, opens up his kink desires for cuckolding.

OR

- Kirito makes a deal with the Administrator, the Admin then favors Kirito and stops cucking him, helps him reclaim Asuna

- Kirito continues being oblivious to Administrator wiping his Anxiety value clean and the cucking also continues.

Those are just 4 options that I can see available in the Anxiety stats current state, it doesn't need to be removed/ drastically changed exactly, just improved upon for a purpose. At least, that's just my thoughts. I don't believe a Revenge arc will happen in this game but who knows.

I like your ideas, even though Fujino won't go for any other ending besides cuck and not knowing anything. ^^

As for the Admin, I still don't like her as a plot device, but if Kirito would really have a chance to realize what happened, I can imagine some conclusions too:

The most believable outcome for him finding out about the cheating would be to just drop her. Why should he even bother with a selfish cumslut like her at this point? The whole story is built in a way that they don't fit as partners, not physically and not mentally.

Or

If revenge were a thing, he could work together with Asuna's father, who would then take necessary steps to destroy Inoda's little harem and also cut off all finances for Asuna and her mom.

Or

if he really would get Admin help/powers, then just the easy way, make Inoda impotent. (hanging sausage ending) Then Asuna can turn to the town slut in search for pleasure

 

[oozaru2023]

Knowing Fujino Sensei, it is most likely that we will have some news for this fortnight or at the end of this month at the latest.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I like your ideas, even though Fujino won't go for any other ending besides cuck and not knowing anything. ^^

As for the Admin, I still don't like her as a plot device, but if Kirito would really have a chance to realize what happened, I can imagine some conclusions too:

The most believable outcome for him finding out about the cheating would be to just drop her. Why should he even bother with a selfish cumslut like her at this point? The whole story is built in a way that they don't fit as partners, not physically and not mentally.

Or

If revenge were a thing, he could work together with Asuna's father, who would then take necessary steps to destroy Inoda's little harem and also cut off all finances for Asuna and her mom.

Or

if he really would get Admin help/powers, then just the easy way, make Inoda impotent. (hanging sausage ending) Then Asuna can turn to the town slut in search for pleasure

Yeah, there won't be any other endings beside the stated ones, sadly for Kirito, and after the last update it seems there won't even be any semblance of 'win' for someone through him either, so it's just gonna be pure Inoda winning in the end XP

Also, it's kinda hilarious that you say that the story is constructed so they don't fit as partners when the entire point of Fujino using them as pre-set characters is that they technically are perfect for each other in Canon, but in this game's AU they're anything but XD

 

[4-kun]

Yeah, there won't be any other endings beside the stated ones, sadly for Kirito, and after the last update it seems there won't even be any semblance of 'win' for someone through him either, so it's just gonna be pure Inoda winning in the end XP

Also, it's kinda hilarious that you say that the story is constructed so they don't fit as partners when the entire point of Fujino using them as pre-set characters is that they technically are perfect for each other in Canon, but in this game's AU they're anything but XD

Just stating the obvious, their "relationship" in the game could be described as friends with benefits at best.

Or like a very old couple that literally does everything possible to avoid seeing each other. "Hun, I'm going to the garage to do some handywork... for the rest of the week."

 

[kinglionheart]

Just stating the obvious, their "relationship" in the game could be described as friends with benefits at best.

Or like a very old couple that literally does everything possible to avoid seeing each other. "Hun, I'm going to the garage to do some handywork... for the rest of the week."

I am assuming you mean Kirito and Asuna. If so then I am disagree with what you think that is what their relationship is like.

In the beginning their relationship is the best. They spent a lot of time together and had sex plenty of times. Asuna was not completely satisfied with the sex but she was fine with it. It helped she had literally no one else to interact with.

Now it is different. They want to spend time together but they are too busy with other things. Kirito will have the job and Asuna is spending time with Inoda. Basically the current game setting is the setup for every NTR story.

A couple who try to avoid each other is too harsh for them. Especially when you remember even God is trying to break them apart.

 

[bucefala]

I am assuming you mean Kirito and Asuna. If so then I am disagree with what you think that is what their relationship is like.

In the beginning their relationship is the best. They spent a lot of time together and had sex plenty of times. Asuna was not completely satisfied with the sex but she was fine with it. It helped she had literally no one else to interact with.

Now it is different. They want to spend time together but they are too busy with other things. Kirito will have the job and Asuna is spending time with Inoda. Basically the current game setting is the setup for every NTR story.

A couple who try to avoid each other is too harsh for them. Especially when you remember even God is trying to break them apart.

I dunno, I also feel like they make excuses to easily to not see each other. Like in the example above, I have some work to do friday evening so Ill see you monday... Like what? At least walk together, talk casually, call when free or before bed etc. I know they do these things sometimes but still. Have them kiss before leaving or hugging.

 

[kinglionheart]

I dunno, I also feel like they make excuses to easily to not see each other. Like in the example above, I have some work to do friday evening so Ill see you monday... Like what? At least walk together, talk casually, call when free or before bed etc. I know they do these things sometimes but still. Have them kiss before leaving or hugging.

Some excuse must exist for the cheating to happen. In Part 1 it was Asuna tutoring Inoda. The obvious thing would be Kirito studying with them. But if he did that Inoda would have never touched Asuna.

But just now I do think Asuna is avoiding Kirito because of shame but I don't see any evidence of them not wanting to be with each other.

The no kissing or hugging is of course because in Japan public display of affection is a no no.

 

[4-kun]

I am assuming you mean Kirito and Asuna. If so then I am disagree with what you think that is what their relationship is like.

In the beginning their relationship is the best. They spent a lot of time together and had sex plenty of times. Asuna was not completely satisfied with the sex but she was fine with it. It helped she had literally no one else to interact with.

Now it is different. They want to spend time together but they are too busy with other things. Kirito will have the job and Asuna is spending time with Inoda. Basically the current game setting is the setup for every NTR story.

A couple who try to avoid each other is too harsh for them. Especially when you remember even God is trying to break them apart.

Well, friends with benefits have sex and spend time together from time to time, but it's not what a romantic relationship is about. I really don't want to explain what a romantic relationship is, but in short, commitment, respect, communication, and all this stuff. I think you know what I mean ^^

Just a side note: Inoda had more intercourse on the rainy night than the "couple" in both parts of the game

 

[kinglionheart]

Well, friends with benefits have sex and spend time together from time to time, but it's not what a romantic relationship is about. I really don't want to explain what a romantic relationship is, but in short, commitment, respect, communication, and all this stuff. I think you know what I mean ^^

Just a side note: Inoda had more intercourse on the rainy night than the "couple" in both parts of the game

If Kirito and Asuna are just friends with benefits now then the NTR experience is drastically reduced.

 

[4-kun]

If Kirito and Asuna are just friends with benefits now then the NTR experience is drastically reduced.

Thats why I'm not into the main plot

 

[kinglionheart]

Thats why I'm not into the main plot

That is sad to hear if you were invested in the game.