RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.551] [Fujino]
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A lot of this certainly doesn't help against the canon mixed in with the NTR-world of SAO as you mention, due to the incompetence portrayed by Fujino's version of Kirito. Almost too many NTR tropes are forced to depict the poor cuck to lose out to the antagonist because the MC is either depicted as a dumb cuck or losing the competition against the antagonist due to having a lame size peepee while the antagonist is sporting a stallion sized schlong. Kinda an over-used trope but personally I prefer the dense clueless cuck over the small penis cuck finding out that he only lost out to a bigger dick.See, the issue with that is that it really shows you don't know really the SAO characters at all or just the basic of them and not even remotely close to their full story, to try and justify Fujino's own take and his fucked-up NTR world (That's honestly by NO means realistic at all, really XP). Sure, SAO is a surprisingly 'grounded' story for being based on a futuristic world, but it also has many conveniences and you really are just trying to see Kirito and Asuna how they are as shown by Fujino, not how they ACTUALLY are in the series XD
The entire issue brought up above came from how Fujino had deformed both the characters and the setting so they could 'work' in a NTR- World-ruled-by-NTR-logic story which is his game, that's all. If it was written even remotely accurate to the actual SAO setting and characters absolutely no part of Fujino's story would work for waaaaay too many reasons, a lot of inconsistencies are also created because Fujino tries to keep some parallels to Canon SAO while also keeping his NTR-world-logic at play, meaning he sometimes tries to write Kirito more 'accurate' but also has to keep him massively incompetent in general because if he was even half as aware as Canon Kirito is he wouldn't have any of the issues this one has (Hell, he wouldn't even have bedroom issues with Asuna to begin with, LOL).
Fujino's game works by its own logic and because you can tell he went out of his way to try and put as much effort and dedication as he can into it, but it's not really accurate to Canon SAO at all, be it characters or setting, that's a fact, and not even to 'reality' because it tries to be both SAO and a harsher world at the same time so any 'realism' really flies out of the window
Personally I find Fujino doing a pretty good job writing an NTR SAO story. I really do give him kudos and the highest of praises as a fan of NTR games, there isn't very many that do as good of a job as Fujino.
Yeah, I mentioned this a while back too, but while Fujino's game certainly is terrible at writing the SAO cast and setting (Starting from Kirito's flip-flopping incompetence to characters being super OOC and the plot-holes caused by him limiting characters/just the things he wanted to happen from Canon happen even if they contradict each other, etc), as a story itself is surprisingly well-written, with a lot of deep thought and effort put into it and trying his best to create a 'believable' story, with lots of build-up and dedication to the characters changing (Even if that got a bit ruined by the back and forth with the people complaining and then he deciding to just go fuck it with the last update).
As an SAO story it may fail but as a NTR story is a million times better and much more believable than 99% of any other SAO NTR works and that combined with his insane dedication to continue his work on these games period is something I will always keep praising
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Probably by this month end, last month was break month for the developer.
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Man I never continued to watch the SAO Asuna X Nishida hypno app until now. the animations looked really good and i was ok with everything until nishida confessed to asuna that he used the hypno app on her and she is like: "yea i already knew.. its ok, i forgive you because it was for the better anyway" like no way that she wouldnt feel manipulated and betrayed at all. im ok with a lot of things, but thats where i draw the fking line.. no way man, fuk xd
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The Asuna in Nishida's version of the story is the stupidest one I have found so far, and above all
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LMAO, yeah. The saddest part is that it's not even the worst use of NTR plots/hypno-apps I have ever seen, so at that point I didn't mind much, even if it made Asuna look either ultra-idiotic or like the biggest bitch ever, either way at least Kirito managed to get rid of THAT before it was too late, he's the one who ended up winning the most in the end there truly XD
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From Fujino Senseis Patreon:
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Current Progress:
1.Add the POV of Asuna in the wooden house in the forest in CG room.
2.Finish the hypnosis event CGs of Alice.
3.Add two sexual harassment CG of Asuna, and some relevant events CGs of Leafa.
4.CGs of Other Charaters like Lisbeth is still on progress."
we will be eating good sooooooon
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Current Progress:
1.Add the POV of Asuna in the wooden house in the forest in CG room.
2.Finish the hypnosis event CGs of Alice.
3.Add two sexual harassment CG of Asuna, and some relevant events CGs of Leafa.
4.CGs of Other Charaters like Lisbeth is still on progress."
we will be eating good sooooooon
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Sounds like a big update.
As long as there is always progress / scenes of Asuna, I don't think people mind the side characters getting some time as long as they are proportional. Perhaps with finishing this hypnosis event for Alice, he can dust her away for a while.
As long as there is always progress / scenes of Asuna, I don't think people mind the side characters getting some time as long as they are proportional. Perhaps with finishing this hypnosis event for Alice, he can dust her away for a while.
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Preview picture for this week's progress report. No prize for anyone who wants to see Asuna giving Inoda a BJ.
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I already knew that Fujino was going to add Asuna's point of view in the cabin and it would be better if it was in the collection room, now the fact that he added LEAFA's CG makes me understand that he will continue with the plot of HEBISHIMA like his bicycle? I hope he hasn't scrapped the idea of SUGUHA and cuckito it will be a shame if he does.
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IT IS A FACT that INODA WILL HAVE HER BJ from ASUNA but that will be in FOG and it would be good for it to be in the next update
We finally got Asuna's POV in the wooden house in the forest in the CG room.
Oo, so there will be sexual harassment of Asuna, I wonder who is harassing Asuna?
I'm curious what the CG of Leafa/Suguha and Lisbeth will be
it could be Leafa and not Asuna. From this image you can see some braids in her hair and Asuna doesn't have them
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I know it is Alice. That is why I was saying not prize for people who is waiting to see Asuna give Inoda the BJ