Great game, nice renders, animations and sprites (although I'd like to see Asuna's ass sometime). I'm already contributing on Patreon. I've been sucked into the game and haven't gotten tired of it. Quite the contrary, I can't wait to play more. The English translation is correct (the AI is wonderful for these things). But there are menu boxes that are not translated and that I think should be translated. I don't know if it's on purpose, but you can't see the modifications in Asuna's state when she's already fucking Inoda. At the moment it seems to me that it's more a game about cheating than netorare. I think we will really see a netorare game from now on if there is blackmail from Inoda to Asuna, but in the future it could become a netorase game since the priest is convincing Kirito that sharing is wonderful, lustful and good for the couple relationship.
I agree with other players that the story of Suguha's corruption is not well resolved, it lacks tension and drama. The moment when she loses her virginity and how she gets to that situation would have to be seen and developed.
As for the final scene with which Part I ends, I think it can only be explained after the fireworks scene because Inoda is somehow forcing Asuna to fuck him. I rule out love, violence, or Inoda drugging Asuna (he seems very conscious), leaving only sex for lust, sex for pity, or sex for blackmail. My bet, which would explain Asuna's total change in attitude, is that Inoda blackmails Asuna with the photos and sexual recordings he has of Asuna and her mother.
That's why I think there is blackmail, but we'll see how the story resolves. Fujino has said that the first scene of the next update will be Asuna's point of view in this scene.