RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.551] [Fujino]

[albakr0ss]

The gift that keeps on giving FOG vs IRL.
The problem is that Fujino stop developing the Asuna/Inoda plot for IRL if you think about it.
He doesn't have a pretext, argument or even a plot device in place to make this transition like he had for Asuna breaking in the last update.
The story is completely stuck in that regard, people keep asking to not rush things and all that but in the end he will have to.
Because we have 8 updates to go if you consider the last 2 will be for loose ends and finishing the story Fujino actually have only 5 o 6 left to go from nothing to Asuna asking Inoda "I want have your baby after you drill my mom ass" sort of thing.
That will be rushed as fuck.

I kind of disagree here. I also wish that we'd get more IRL updates than FOG but I think everything in FOG right now is just slowly building up Asuna's affinity towards Inoda and doing lewd stuff together making it a "regular/normal" thing. For the first game everything happened under the idea of "i'm his training girlfriend so its okay" only towards the end during the lustful night did that illusion shatter. Personally, I would've loved to see the transition from the first game to the second game to be go back to IRL stuff but Fujino decided to basically soft reset. The only plot devices left right now for any IRL stuff to happen is, everything FOG related is building up to Asuna getting used to and only wanting the pleasure Inoda can give, her gratitude to Inoda for everything related to Mom, and whatever stuff Kirito does to eventually turn her off. There isn't an "immediate" reason for her to do anything for him but given how this episode we've already seen her give him a handjob irl, a handjob with lap pillow and tit sucking, then apparently just seems to be all good on sending him lewd photos. There's something there.

 

[Infeno2.0]

The extra-irony is that Fujino "tricked" everyone with this one game in particular and so created that expectations that make the "Is gonna be rushed as fuck"-feel for the first time ever in his career, when it was ALWAYS his intention to do so...Fujino's style has always been insta-corruption, hell, some of his games start with the heroine/s ALREADY having been corrupted before the game properly begins, and if not they have their very first "NTR-ed-immediately" event during the first minutes of gameplay. SAO is the one time Fujino tried going the 'slow route' and so most people that don't know his style and only really fixated on this game thought it would have any sort of satisfying or realistic development, but no, it was always gonna be "jumps stupidly fast from not wanting to do X thing to wants to do XXXX thing and swears eternal loyalty to NTR man's cock", the only question is how long is Fujino gonna drag it out, especially when the last time he thought he 'rushed' things too much and tried to backpedal (The rainy night), everyone hated it XD

Old habits are hard to let go.
Fujino did try something different but in the end he will end up coming back to something familiar like insta corruption in order to finish the game.
I've been thinking this'll be the isnta ntr arch for a while now.

 

[kinglionheart]

The extra-irony is that Fujino "tricked" everyone with this one game in particular and so created that expectations that make the "Is gonna be rushed as fuck"-feel for the first time ever in his career, when it was ALWAYS his intention to do so...Fujino's style has always been insta-corruption, hell, some of his games start with the heroine/s ALREADY having been corrupted before the game properly begins, and if not they have their very first "NTR-ed-immediately" event during the first minutes of gameplay. SAO is the one time Fujino tried going the 'slow route' and so most people that don't know his style and only really fixated on this game thought it would have any sort of satisfying or realistic development, but no, it was always gonna be "jumps stupidly fast from not wanting to do X thing to wants to do XXXX thing and swears eternal loyalty to NTR man's cock", the only question is how long is Fujino gonna drag it out, especially when the last time he thought he 'rushed' things too much and tried to backpedal (The rainy night), everyone hated it XD

Fujino didn't have much success before SAO. His games were okay but didn't stand out in anyway. Only when he tried something different in SAO with the slow corruption and battle scenes did he get global attention. Before when not many cared he can do whatever he wanted without much backlash but now with so many supporters he just can't win no matter what he does. See how he doesn't communicate besides necessary posts and just hope for the best with each update? The price of success I suppose.

I kind of disagree here. I also wish that we'd get more IRL updates than FOG but I think everything in FOG right now is just slowly building up Asuna's affinity towards Inoda and doing lewd stuff together making it a "regular/normal" thing. For the first game everything happened under the idea of "i'm his training girlfriend so its okay" only towards the end during the lustful night did that illusion shatter. Personally, I would've loved to see the transition from the first game to the second game to be go back to IRL stuff but Fujino decided to basically soft reset. The only plot devices left right now for any IRL stuff to happen is, everything FOG related is building up to Asuna getting used to and only wanting the pleasure Inoda can give, her gratitude to Inoda for everything related to Mom, and whatever stuff Kirito does to eventually turn her off. There isn't an "immediate" reason for her to do anything for him but given how this episode we've already seen her give him a handjob irl, a handjob with lap pillow and tit sucking, then apparently just seems to be all good on sending him lewd photos. There's something there.

There needs some big reason Asuna is suddenly okay with IRL cheating. But it is weird we are 60% of the game but she is still not okay with IRL sex. Even if she agrees to IRL sex in around v0.80 then will there enough time to convince her to carry Inoda's child like in the perks before the ending?

 

[mos555]

Fujino didn't have much success before SAO. His games were okay but didn't stand out in anyway. Only when he tried something different in SAO with the slow corruption and battle scenes did he get global attention. Before when not many cared he can do whatever he wanted without much backlash but now with so many supporters he just can't win no matter what he does. See how he doesn't communicate besides necessary posts and just hope for the best with each update? The price of success I suppose.


There needs some big reason Asuna is suddenly okay with IRL cheating. But it is weird we are 60% of the game but she is still not okay with IRL sex. Even if she agrees to IRL sex in around v0.80 then will there enough time to convince her to carry Inoda's child like in the perks before the ending?

It seems that Fujino has planned too much. Judging by the perks, we are only at the initial stage of Asuna's corruption. I doubt there is enough time for sex in real life in version 0.80. With the pace that we are seeing now, it is, at most, an IRL blowjob. Pregnancy is something from version 1.50. But Fujino has problems with maps, so he will have to divide the game into 2 parts, preferably without losing the pace of the narrative. I hope Fujino will consider this step. But in the last update, Fujino didn't use a very successful move to change the pace of the narrative, so he either has to be very careful or don't give a damn about everything. As an author, it doesn't cost him anything to send the atmosphere and plot to hell and arrange an accelerated corruption of Asuna.

Logically, if Fujino plans to make a cuckold out of Kirito, then nothing prevents some of the events from being postponed at the moment when Kirito will already know everything about Asuna's cheating. But then the game will stop being NTR.

 

[Infeno2.0]

I kind of disagree here. I also wish that we'd get more IRL updates than FOG but I think everything in FOG right now is just slowly building up Asuna's affinity towards Inoda and doing lewd stuff together making it a "regular/normal" thing. For the first game everything happened under the idea of "i'm his training girlfriend so its okay" only towards the end during the lustful night did that illusion shatter. Personally, I would've loved to see the transition from the first game to the second game to be go back to IRL stuff but Fujino decided to basically soft reset. The only plot devices left right now for any IRL stuff to happen is, everything FOG related is building up to Asuna getting used to and only wanting the pleasure Inoda can give, her gratitude to Inoda for everything related to Mom, and whatever stuff Kirito does to eventually turn her off. There isn't an "immediate" reason for her to do anything for him but given how this episode we've already seen her give him a handjob irl, a handjob with lap pillow and tit sucking, then apparently just seems to be all good on sending him lewd photos. There's something there.

But there's one thing missing in all that, the reason to have sex IRL, because it doesn't matter what happens in FOG for her nothing is real anyway and that is her excuse to do everything over there, but where's the same reason for IRL sex there is none.

 

[mos555]

But there's one thing missing in all that, the reason to have sex IRL, because it doesn't matter what happens in FOG for her nothing is real anyway and that is her excuse to do everything over there, but where's the same reason for IRL sex there is none.

The only strong enough and logical reason for Asuna's betrayal in real life is the video of Kirito and Suguha. Remember this. I think Fujino started the plot of Suguha and Kirito precisely so that there would be a reason to distance and quarrel Asuna and Kirito.
I doubt very much that Fujino is doing this so that Kirito and Suguha will have a strong loving family in the future.

 

[kinglionheart]

I doubt very much that Fujino is doing this so that Kirito and Suguha will have a strong loving family in the future.

I suggest you remove that before the Suguha cultists hang you.

But seriously I do hope Suguha is the reason for Asuna's IRL cheating. It is only poetic since she caused her to be okay with FOG cheating. Those hidden videos Suguha made should be used for more than fapping purposes.

 

[Aniky Light]

But there's one thing missing in all that, the reason to have sex IRL, because it doesn't matter what happens in FOG for her nothing is real anyway and that is her excuse to do everything over there, but where's the same reason for IRL sex there is none.

I thought it was Kirito who couldn't distinguish reality

 

[mos555]

I suggest you remove that before the Suguha cultists hang you.

But seriously I do hope Suguha is the reason for Asuna's IRL cheating. It is only poetic since she caused her to be okay with FOG cheating. Those hidden videos Suguha made should be used for more than fapping purposes.

But what is strange to me is that the description of the perks mentions Asuna, Kirito, Liz, Kyoko, Inoda, but there is no Alice and Suguha at all. Why there is no Alice is understandable - she is too much of a side character. But why isn't Suguha there? Either Fujino had simply not thought about what role she could play before, or she should play some role and disappear from the plot.

 

[albakr0ss]

There needs some big reason Asuna is suddenly okay with IRL cheating. But it is weird we are 60% of the game but she is still not okay with IRL sex. Even if she agrees to IRL sex in around v0.80 then will there enough time to convince her to carry Inoda's child like in the perks before the ending?

Ah going by the perks I think rather than a big reason, it's going to be the result of this whole build up we've done online. By going by the perks, she's going to see sex as just a physiological need for her own pleasure and need. She's going to obviously try and get it from Kirito but whether its due to him being busy or the actual sex between them just not being an enjoyable experience she's going to end up seeking it from Inoda regularly. I'm guessing that once she wants it and but can't have it in game due to either maintenance or whatever reason Inoda comes up with then that's the reason. The gratitude to him for the mom apparently is what drives her to develop actual feelings for him so might be later on. Also, with regards to the thing you mentioned, I think it's impossible to do it in this version of the game. Given how many things have to happen with regards to role play, other fetishes, and even just other characters. Most sensible way to view things to me is that this whole 2nd game is going to revolve around Inoda seducing Asuna and we end part 2 with her consenting to IRL sex. While the 3rd and final part is going to revolve around everything IRL. Just my guess though.

 

[Aniky Light]

Once those two start fucking in reality, the game can end there, also because, what else do we want to put? enough, she cheated, she's corrupt, she's become a stupid whore, there's nothing else to add except other scenes for the fans, but the game there and then doesn't make sense to continue, unless Kirito realizes why Asuna is so detached from him lately
What a stupid game when the bastard has all the doors open and even more stupid when Asuna is so naive

 

[Aniky Light]

it would be funny to see an after of Asuna and Inoda in the middle of the street, Asuna who looks like Inoda for too much dating with the look of a worthless slut who smokes joint and is covered in cum. The reason she ended up in the middle of the street is because her mother found out everything. Meanwhile Kirito is enjoying life in America with Suguha. Then a message appears "when you try to cheat someone, you actually cheat yourself" as if to say: look, you are not doing harm to me, but to yourself

 

[albakr0ss]

Once those two start fucking in reality, the game can end there, also because, what else do we want to put? enough, she cheated, she's corrupt, she's become a stupid whore, there's nothing else to add except other scenes for the fans, but the game there and then doesn't make sense to continue, unless Kirito realizes why Asuna is so detached from him lately
What a stupid game when the bastard has all the doors open and even more stupid when Asuna is so naive

Have to admit, I don't know from a weekly basis what we're going to expect once they start openly fucking in reality. I guess the only progression left is once they started fucking in reality next big thing is going to be when they start doing it raw, after raw it'll be anal, then I guess impregnation and bearing the child as the actual end. Apparently up to the point of acting as a surrogate mother (albeit fucking) she still has no feelings for him still so I guess that's about it. It'll really just be flavor of the month per update (dom asuna, nurse asuna, teacher asuna, slave asuna, or anything asuna). Going to be lame for sure I'd imagine a lot less tension and more just fanfare.

 

[Aniky Light]

images Asuna giving birth to a black child and telling Kirito that it is his son
Kirito: I have serious doubts

 

[Aniky Light]

Have to admit, I don't know from a weekly basis what we're going to expect once they start openly fucking in reality. I guess the only progression left is once they started fucking in reality next big thing is going to be when they start doing it raw, after raw it'll be anal, then I guess impregnation and bearing the child as the actual end. Apparently up to the point of acting as a surrogate mother (albeit fucking) she still has no feelings for him still so I guess that's about it. It'll really just be flavor of the month per update (dom asuna, nurse asuna, teacher asuna, slave asuna, or anything asuna). Going to be lame for sure I'd imagine a lot less tension and more just fanfare.

it will all be about sex in different places that's why I don't see the point in continuing the story, I just have to watch and then game over

 

[kinglionheart]

But what is strange to me is that the description of the perks mentions Asuna, Kirito, Liz, Kyoko, Inoda, but there is no Alice and Suguha at all. Why there is no Alice is understandable - she is too much of a side character. But why isn't Suguha there? Either Fujino had simply not thought about what role she could play before, or she should play some role and disappear from the plot.
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The no Suguha part is easy to explain. Those perks were made in the beginning of Part 2 when she was only Hebishima's fuck friend. So she was as separate from the plot as Alice is. Now things has changed and maybe the perks won't predict the future anymore.

I thought it was Kirito who couldn't distinguish reality

That is canon Kirito. I don't think Fujino Kirito has expressed much opinion on the subject. It was Fujino Asuna who thought virtual and real world are the same thing so no cheating was allowed in either. That changed when she got the "Virtual Connection" perk. Now cheating in FOG is okay because it is not real but IRL cheating is wrong because it is real, at least for Fujino Asuna.

 

[4-kun]

I suggest you remove that before the Suguha cultists hang you.

But seriously I do hope Suguha is the reason for Asuna's IRL cheating. It is only poetic since she caused her to be okay with FOG cheating. Those hidden videos Suguha made should be used for more than fapping purposes.

Too late, there’s no point in hiding; we Suguha shippers have developed a sixth sense for Suguha-related posts.

Tbh, I don’t think it’s a good idea for Asuna to discover Suguha x Kirito irl from an NTR perspective, as it would turn into a valid reason for her to cheat. Her fall in FOG is different because it wasn’t actually Kirito’s cheating that caused it. It also doesn’t make sense with other perks in which she is still holding onto her relationship with Kirito. If she knew about his 'cheating,' there would be no point in feeling guilty about her relationship with Inoda.

 

[mos555]

I'm wondering how Fujino will explain this. Asuna will give birth to a child for Inoda so that he doesn't touch her anymore and lets her go back to Kirito. And why would this stupid schoolboy need a child, what would Inoda do with a child? This is beyond my comprehension, some kind of nonsense.

 

[Aniky Light]

Do you know why Kirito will become a happy Cuckold? Because even though he will lose Asuna, he will always have Suguha and so it's okay like this and not that he will be left alone to eat ice cream and get depressed like in the movies

 

[4-kun]

But what is strange to me is that the description of the perks mentions Asuna, Kirito, Liz, Kyoko, Inoda, but there is no Alice and Suguha at all. Why there is no Alice is understandable - she is too much of a side character. But why isn't Suguha there? Either Fujino had simply not thought about what role she could play before, or she should play some role and disappear from the plot.
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Fujino didn’t plan for all the girls to fall for Inoda, and it also doesn’t make sense for Suguha to end up with him from a story perspective.