RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.551c] [Fujino]

[BleepBloop321]

I mean, it COULD be, but as mentioned there is nothing either in the game or from Fujino suggesting it (Plus, the fact he has been constantly tying up Kirito suddenly starting to suspect with moments he gets hard from it, like the 'nightmare', seem as if he was already implying it). Also I wouldn't want people to start thinking they can ask for Fujino to make a bunch of different endings, he already has a track record of not finishing games, is having a lot of issues in his life to continue this one already and is more susceptive to pressure from the fans...

I wasn't really trying to pitch an ending, just trying to highlight how bad his pitch for an ending really is.
Maybe it would finally make him stop posting about it.

I just got a bit agitated when there was a newcomer here and said to his idea. "Fuck that is amazing I would play any game you make or any story you write."
I don't want there to be a church of people that think this idea is great and annoy Fujino about it.

 

[Rokin]

Maybe there are new pictures of the upcoming update?

 

[Kazuto123]

Nie wiem, człowieku. Ci ludzie muszą dotknąć trawy. Są tak zafiksowani na czymś, co powinno naśladować rzeczywistość i zdrowy rozsądek w grze porno.

Po pierwsze, nie chcę ich w prawdziwym życiu. Dlaczego miałbym traktować to ze zdrowym rozsądkiem, skoro w ogóle nie jest to realne.
[/CYTAT]

I don't know man. These people needs to touch grass. They're so fixated in something that should emulate reality and common sense on a porn game.

I for one dont want these in real life. Why would I treat it with common sense when it's not real in the first place.

I think people watch too much hentai ntr over and over again that they can't tell the difference between fiction and reality. In my opinion, such people should not read ntr doujinshi/manga and watch ntr movies.
I can distinguish fiction from reality, I write generally.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I wasn't really trying to pitch an ending, just trying to highlight how bad his pitch for an ending really is.
Maybe it would finally make him stop posting about it.

I just got a bit agitated when there was a newcomer here and said to his idea. "Fuck that is amazing I would play any game you make or any story you write."
I don't want there to be a church of people that think this idea is great and annoy Fujino about it.

Yeah, same here, I wasn't talking about you specifically more other people in general.

 

[Animefan_09]

Yea. No one cares about a third tier jumpoff.

I actually am excited to see her, since she obviously is crucial tot he main plot with Asuna

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I actually am excited to see her, since she obviously is crucial tot he main plot with Asuna

Hadn't noticed that, but yeah, I mean, plot aside, I consider Liz hot and fun, I'm just here mainly for Hentai so my main focus was on Suguha and Asuna because of it XD

 

[Queen_Nothing]

I know it's beating a dead horse, but the only scene I want from V1 of that night with Inoda x Asuna is the early morning where Kirito knocks on Inoda's door to see how he's doing.

I want a scene where Inoda is still going at a semi-unconscious or cum drunk Asuna (doggy), then it ends, with her body slumping down on the bed with her pussy gaping, and Inoda's horse cock drapped across her ass/thigh, her toes curled and pissing herself.

Then I think most people would be happy with that closure.

While yes a continuation of that scene would be good, what I was missing is the rest of the day. It's such a point of tension at the end of Part 1, to be running around all the placews where you know Inoda and Asuna are not. And at the height of their relationship, on a 'special day' for him. Inoda somehow talks Asuna into spending all day with him on a date, and you just know he was wearing down her resistance with lewd acts through the day. Some groping. Maybe an emergency boner she needed to handjob in the toilets, etc.

 

[kinglionheart]

I actually am excited to see her, since she obviously is crucial tot he main plot with Asuna

Poor girl. People are excited to see her on their way to Asuna. The definition of a jumpoff

 

[kinglionheart]

While yes a continuation of that scene would be good, what I was missing is the rest of the day. It's such a point of tension at the end of Part 1, to be running around all the placews where you know Inoda and Asuna are not. And at the height of their relationship, on a 'special day' for him. Inoda somehow talks Asuna into spending all day with him on a date, and you just know he was wearing down her resistance with lewd acts through the day. Some groping. Maybe an emergency boner she needed to handjob in the toilets, etc.

Seriously I always wanted to see a date between Asuna and Inoda where they go to Arcade to get their pictures taken and then end with them in hotel. You know the date Inoda interrupted before. But this was so unsatisfying and Asuna's POV being a quick flashback sucked.

But I really hoped Fujino just moved on instead going back and trying to fix it. It is just depressing thinking about your failures.

 

[Queen_Nothing]

Seriously I always wanted to see a date between Asuna and Inoda where they go to Arcade to get their pictures taken and then end with them in hotel. You know the date Inoda interrupted before. But this was so unsatisfying and Asuna's POV being a quick flashback sucked.

But I really hoped Fujino just moved on instead going back and trying to fix it. It is just depressing thinking about your failures.

Oh yeah, this is all wishing. I don't expect he'll actually do it. Maybe we can come up with a fan head-canon of the birthday date.

 

[BleepBloop321]

Seriously I always wanted to see a date between Asuna and Inoda where they go to Arcade to get their pictures taken and then end with them in hotel. You know the date Inoda interrupted before. But this was so unsatisfying and Asuna's POV being a quick flashback sucked.

But I really hoped Fujino just moved on instead going back and trying to fix it. It is just depressing thinking about your failures.

But the whole thing would just be Asuna and Indoa walking around town with Inoda occasionally groping Asuna. Like the whole thing was that Asuna realized that Inodas hand already healed because he groped her so much.
Like what Fujinos said was:
"Many people still want some scenes for the end of Part I as well, but I can't do too much, since there is really no more contents for that night."
Which to me sounds like that in canon, not a whole lot happend during that day with the exception of the end and was more sort of a trust buildup by Inoda to get her to stay with him in his apartment.

I think the way Fujino started part 2 was perfect, the sharp contrast between Inoda and Kirito during the intro really makes you understand what has happend. She clearly wasn't fond of the idea of having sex with Inoda or helping him out since she realized that his hand has already healed.

I think you might be looking at beginning of part 2 as the end of part 1 which isn't really supposed to be the case.
Instead of looking at it as a good beginning to part 2 you are looking at it as a bad ending to part 1.
The end of part 1 isn't supposed to be the finaly, just an important plot point.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

But the whole thing would just be Asuna and Indoa walking around town with Inoda occasionally groping Asuna. Like the whole thing was that Asuna realized that Inodas hand already healed because he groped her so much.
Like what Fujinos said was:
"Many people still want some scenes for the end of Part I as well, but I can't do too much, since there is really no more contents for that night."
Which to me sounds like that in canon, not a whole lot happend during that day with the exception of the end and was more sort of a trust buildup by Inoda to get her to stay with him in his apartment.

I think the way Fujino started part 2 was perfect, the sharp contrast between Inoda and Kirito during the intro really makes you understand what has happend. She clearly wasn't fond of the idea of having sex with Inoda or helping him out since she realized that his hand has already healed.

I think you might be looking at beginning of part 2 as the end of part 1 which isn't really supposed to be the case.
Instead of looking at it as a good beginning to part 2 you are looking at it as a bad ending to part 1.
The end of part 1 isn't supposed to be the finaly, just an important plot point.

Honestly, I myself just figured Fujino specifically made that aspect of the end of Part 1 as he did because he couldn't figure a realistic way of writing the 'date' between Asuna and Inoda without it being forced as fuck given he had just written Asuna reaffirming her love for Kirito big time literally hours before it, so decided to leave it better for the players' imagination rather than writing Asuna being extra-annoyed at him and him being extra-pushy XP

Personally, while I know I'm like the only one who cares, I'm just sad we didn't get animated gifs for what looked like Hebishima fucking Suguha fully naked outside just behind the Cafe while Kirito walked there during his 'final day monologue' (Or at least I assume it was them since they were a bit out of view, unlike the rich ugly fatso having the threesome with that one girlfriend and his other sex slave that we could see as he used to be one of Asuna's neighbors who were all pretty easy to identify lol).

 

[BleepBloop321]

Honestly, I myself just figured Fujino specifically made that aspect of the end of Part 1 as he did because he couldn't figure a realistic way of writing the 'date' between Asuna and Inoda without it being forced as fuck given he had just written Asuna reaffirming her love for Kirito big time literally hours before it.

I think he just left it out because there isn't really anything to clarify there, it would just be Asuna and Inoda having a nice day out with Inoda groping her occasionally.
The beginning to part 2 would be Inoda groping Asuna in one of those photo-booths saying stuff like "hehe smile for the camera." It would be a really weird intro to part 2 that would feel more like an ending to part 1.

 

[Racoon_4]

Last time i checked you can also not literally go into a videogame that transmits some sensations to your actual body. What is it with you guys and realism in a fictional game?

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I prefer good ntr over sluttification/harem. Not more not less. So why are you bringing up "realism" and "fictional game" in this?
If Inoda has half a dozen girls he needs to fuck several each day. That would take a lot away from the Asuna-Kirito-Inoda relationship.

Asunas mum and Liz will play an importanat role. As for the other girls, let them have some quick scenes in between which don't need to much developing time with Hebishima or someone else.

It would be waaay more of a problem that Sinon is being added as yet another character in the game, but strangly people don't seem to care about that one.

She's not yet in the game, maybe that's why. As for me i agree on that. There are now so many girls in the story that it starts to get messy.
I'm afraid as the quantity of the girls involved gets more and more, the quality of the scenes and story will suffer.

 

[BleepBloop321]

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I prefer good ntr over sluttification/harem. Not more not less. So why are you bringing up "realism" and "fictional game" in this?
If Inoda has half a dozen girls he needs to fuck several each day. That would take a lot away from the Asuna-Kirito-Inoda relationship.

The initial problem you had was with the logistics of one character having sex with multiple girls in one day, acting like the game isn't a work of fiction anyways.

It doesn't matter if its Hebishima or Inoda fucking the girls, all the girls where going to get scenes anyways. The amount of content for each of them still stays the same.

The only issue that you have is personal preference.

Also just saying "I prefer good ntr" is probably one of the worst things i have read in a while, not even giving any specifics on what it is you would even be looking for, just complaining about the things you don't like.

 

[Animefan_09]

your idea is good but what I say more like a really bad ending or a really bad closing since according to fujino's plans it seems that it will have more than one ending.

Nah, the endings will be oblivious (or pure ntr, Kirito may or may not find out) and netorase, or at least Kirito awakens to cuckold fetish like the priest and the nun from part 1.

Poor girl. People are excited to see her on their way to Asuna. The definition of a jumpoff

And the threesome scenes, plus the perks also revealed she will be influencing Asuna into more depravity too, alongside her mother.

 

[kinglionheart]

But the whole thing would just be Asuna and Indoa walking around town with Inoda occasionally groping Asuna. Like the whole thing was that Asuna realized that Inodas hand already healed because he groped her so much.
Like what Fujinos said was:
"Many people still want some scenes for the end of Part I as well, but I can't do too much, since there is really no more contents for that night."
Which to me sounds like that in canon, not a whole lot happend during that day with the exception of the end and was more sort of a trust buildup by Inoda to get her to stay with him in his apartment.

I think the way Fujino started part 2 was perfect, the sharp contrast between Inoda and Kirito during the intro really makes you understand what has happend. She clearly wasn't fond of the idea of having sex with Inoda or helping him out since she realized that his hand has already healed.

I think you might be looking at beginning of part 2 as the end of part 1 which isn't really supposed to be the case.
Instead of looking at it as a good beginning to part 2 you are looking at it as a bad ending to part 1.
The end of part 1 isn't supposed to be the finaly, just an important plot point.

His way was fine, I was disappointed it was not more after waiting so long. I just wondered what could have been. I should take my own advice, everyone should move on from the stormy night just keep thinking about it is depressing.

 

[kinglionheart]

Nah, the endings will be oblivious (or pure ntr, Kirito may or may not find out) and netorase, or at least Kirito awakens to cuckold fetish like the priest and the nun from part 1.



And the threesome scenes, plus the perks also revealed she will be influencing Asuna into more depravity too, alongside her mother.

Having so abrupt endings is not bad. I still wish the very first decision in Part 1 when Kirito decides if he wants to help Inoda or not, if we said no, we get a quick ending where Kirito and Asuna is happy and obvious to the bullet they dodged. Or a later one where Kirito finds out Inoda and he takes Asuna to America with him. But Asuna is too slutified to be satisfied by Kirito anymore. Something quick and fun not so extreme like the comatose or wheelchair ending.

Liz does a have a purpose and like Kyouko their purpose is Asuna. So her best description is satellite character or side chick?

 

[Racoon_4]

The initial problem you had was with the logistics of one character having sex with multiple girls in one day, acting like the game isn't a work of fiction anyways.

I repeat myself for the third time. If Inoda gets all the girls it will lead to Asuna/Kirito/Inoda having less time. After all Inoda will need time with the side girls, too.
That has pretty much nothing to do with "realism". Fujino only has so much time, unless he starts working full time on this game.

It doesn't matter if its Hebishima or Inoda fucking the girls, all the girls where going to get scenes anyways. The amount of content for each of them still stays the same.

The amount of CGs stays the same, everything else changes.

The only issue that you have is personal preference.

Of course it's my point of view, what else? I even said that's MY preference. And now? Will you claim that everyone else here is not stating things from their on viewpoint and i'm strange for stating my opinion or what??

Also just saying "I prefer good ntr" is probably one of the worst things i have read in a while, not even giving any specifics on what it is you would even be looking for, just complaining about the things you don't like.

I said i prefer ntr over sluttification/harem.
Since you couldn't understand: I prefer the ntr aspect of Asuna/Kirito/Inoda over Inoda getting a harem in which Asuna will only be one of many.
I prefer a slow and steady corruption instead of the girls turning into sluts overnight and ending up all happy with Inoda. Which would happen if Hebishima would be gone since they wouldn't simply disappear along with him, leaving only Inoda or Klein.

 

[BleepBloop321]

I repeat myself for the third time. If Inoda gets all the girls it will lead to Asuna/Kirito/Inoda having less time. After all Inoda will need time with the side girls, too.
That has pretty much nothing to do with "realism". Fujino only has so much time, unless he starts working full time on this game.

No, what you said initially was:

Apart from the fact that Inoda would need infinte stamina a day only has 24 hours regardless. So if Inoda would be the only antagonist he would have what - 5 or six girls to fuck? So either he's fucking one every few hours or some of them won't get it for an entire week because he's busy with another one.

Which is a realism problem, saying that "He can't do it because he is a human and has limited stamina."
You are also saying this like it would only be possible for Inoda to imidiatly pick up where Hebishima left of. Inoda doesn't have to cram in all of the girls into one day, it's called pacing. It would be a change for the characters but instead of Hebishima its Inoda.
like you must be an infant that lacks object permanence if you think the only way this story can be written is if all character development has to happen in one day.

The amount of CGs stays the same, everything else changes.

Wrong, the ONLY thing that changes is that we would now have Inoda fuck the girls instead of Hebishima. everything else would stay the same.

I said i prefer ntr over sluttification/harem.
Since you couldn't understand: I prefer the ntr aspect of Asuna/Kirito/Inoda over Inoda getting a harem in which Asuna will only be one of many.
I prefer a slow and steady corruption instead of the girls turning into sluts overnight and ending up all happy with Inoda. Which would happen if Hebishima would be gone since they wouldn't simply disappear along with him, leaving only Inoda or Klein.

Right, because Fujino has said that Asuna will just turn into an imidiate slut... i forgot.
Also just saying "I don't like this ntr, i prefer good ntr." is just a terrible statement.