Just thoughts on the second part of the game:
The plot of the game changed in the other direction, in the first part of the game everything was like in the usual N.T.R. genre.
- stupid, blind GG. with a small penis and no stamina.
- a cunning, fat freak, a loser, with a huge penis and stamina, who presses for pity or blackmails or deceives or manipulates girls in the game.
GG doesn’t guess anything and doesn’t notice anything (well, or just a little). We observe(as a player) of hidden betrayals and enjoy it (at the end of the day in the room of memories we discover something that we didn’t see (and we get even more excited as a player and jerk off _))
Everything is going according to N.T.R.’s scenario. and blah blah blah, the slow corruption of Asuna by Inoda. And everything is fine for us (as a player) because we expected this from N.T.R.
But then we start playing the second part of the game) and everything becomes somehow wrong:
“Deus ex Machina” appears (read on the Internet what this means
in the role of “Administrator” and here the script goes in the laziest way:
- we remember that Inoda was deceived when he bought “candles”
(candles are fake) BUT on a rainy night when Asuna has already been at her house for several hours (candles do NOT affect her) and it’s BOOM! "Administrator" is just having fun and makes Asuna super sensitive. And Inoda rapes her and blah blah blah.
- further in the story, Kirito finally becomes super anxious, constantly notices something, adds 1+2 and analyzes, and begins to suspect Asuna and Inoda (but we, as a player, saw how stupid, deaf and blind Kirito is_)) and it seems that here again the influence of the “Administrator” "(after all, Kirito amuses her and she always, and everywhere, intervenes for the sake of her amusement).
- the appearance of Lisbeth, so that Inoda gets 1 more girl (but for now I assure us that she is interested in Kirito and may get him. SPOILER - NO!), she starts her own intrigue. Takes patronage over Inoda. And again, it’s not clear whether she’s a genius at finding out secrets and noticing and analyzing everything (or whether the “Administrator” directs her for his own entertainment)
- the appearance of Alice and Sinon, Alice is interested in Kirito just like Suguha, and Sinon who will go to Kirito because Hebishima will be removed from the game later (because no one is interested in him and everyone asked to remove him)
- now we have parity, Inoda will have Asuna, (Asuna's mother) Kyoko and Lisbeth, Kirito will have Suguha, Alice and Sinon, but we will be shown the tapo Alice will be with Klein SPOILER - NO!
- then the plot turns into a soap opera like Santa Barbara, there is a lot of text and reflections, the characters change their character and the first part of the game seems to be forgotten, there are almost no peeks with guesses about what is happening there (no intrigue) because we, as a player, are waiting for the end of the day to see what was left behind the scenes in the room of memories later (to have a good jerk off)
- the lazy way of how to reveal the plot continues, due to the fact that we already know that everything in the game is the tricks of the “Administrator”, all the characters lose their significance
- Asuna twisted her ankle, Inoda (after praying to all the gods) BOOM! knows how to give a massage and BOOM! Asuna forgave him for RAPE! and HARASSMENT! during the fight with the TREE! and is already jerking off to him, hiding everything from Kirito as always (but we, as a player, know that it was the “Administrator” who intervened, and not the whore Asuna, or the genius Inoda, such as they are)
- “Administrator” helps any character, or interferes in reality or in the FOG if this requires advancing the plot or explaining something
- with Alice’s hypnosis I laughed and jerked off =) The stage is fire! but the plot idea is just funny
(where then are the dances with a tambourine? or rolling a chicken egg on the forehead =) such a lazy plot...
My opinion is that the influence of the “Administrator” should be reduced, because because of her, all the characters, their actions, actions and thoughts are devalued. It turns out we are playing a game where the “Administrator” controls everyone like puppets for fun. The feeling of N.T.R disappears.