4-kun

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LOL, I see we were both thinking about that doujin, but somehow I doubt it would happen, however I would applaud Fujino for going so out of the way from NTR tropes by doing something like that, it would be hilarious if after all the times Hebishima has fucked her without protection it's the time she rapes Kirito while sleep that she actually gets knocked up XD



NTR is part of the plot, there is no avoiding it at all :O
I like that idea, why not? She's a side character that nobody complains about. Her character could be the field for experimentation. A corrupted Sugu, well aware of it, takes advantage of her new skills and finally has the power to bend the world to her will. The last words of Heshibama: 'I've created a monster' :ROFLMAO:
 
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after the poll, Fujino decided to do a slow burn as the majority voted for it Gorenje
I'm all for a slow paced NTR story. But like many mentioned, this is turning into a love story. That being said, slow paced means building up the story slowly, not trickle down content between AsunaXInoda each month, and wonder off into making Suguha and Alice content.
 

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LOL, I see we were both thinking about that doujin, but somehow I doubt it would happen, however I would applaud Fujino for going so out of the way from NTR tropes by doing something like that, it would be hilarious if after all the times Hebishima has fucked her without protection it's the time she rapes Kirito while sleep that she actually gets knocked up XD



NTR is part of the plot, there is no avoiding it at all :O
As we know that ASUNA took pills not to get pregnant when INODA filled her up on that stormy night as we saw in the memories, maybe SUGUHA will do the same, although I would be surprised if when she raped cuckito she didn't take anything xd
 
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I like that idea, why not? She's a side character that nobody complains about. Her character could be the field for experimentation. A corrupted Sugu, well aware of it, takes advantage of her new skills and finally has the power to bend the world to her will. The last words of Heshibama: 'I've created a monster' :ROFLMAO:
LMAO, this would officially become my favorite H-game if that happened XD

As we know that ASUNA took pills not to get pregnant when INODA filled her up on that stormy night as we saw in the memories, maybe SUGUHA will do the same, although I would be surprised if when she raped cuckito she didn't take anything xd
Pfft, okay, fair enough, I hadn't considered that but she very likely HAS been taking pills to not get knocked up while Hebishima fucks her, but I can totally imagine her NOT doing so when she went to town with Kirito if she did indeed ride his dick while he was first unconscious and then in FOG :p
 
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what part of accident and new beginning did you not understand?
If you mean accidental sex "as I can put it in a drunken hookup" and then a new beginning "of pure love between Asuna and Inoda", I agree.

But as I wrote in the middle of the last post, everything in the game is already working for Inoda. And that help is not enough.

There is no NTR in this game anymore, it's becoming a love story with elements of cheating.

And it's kind of a weird love story.
 

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If you mean accidental sex "as I can put it in a drunken hookup" and then a new beginning "of pure love between Asuna and Inoda", I agree.

But as I wrote in the middle of the last post, everything in the game is already working for Inoda. And that help is not enough.

There is no NTR in this game anymore, it's becoming a love story with elements of cheating.

And it's kind of a weird love story.
Yeah, 'accident' is maybe a bit unfitting, more of a mistake giving in and having sex with Inoda. But then again, wasn't it the "administrator's" doing? :unsure:
 

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LMAO, this would officially become my favorite H-game if that happened XD



Pfft, okay, fair enough, I hadn't considered that but she very likely HAS been taking pills to not get knocked up while Hebishima fucks her, but I can totally imagine her NOT doing so when she went to town with Kirito if she did indeed ride his dick while he was first unconscious and then in FOG :p
Pretty sure, nobody ever thinks about contraceptives for side characters. Normally, all the sidies get filled up on a daily basis without getting pregnant, it's always a safe day in NTR-Town :sneaky:
 

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I had written an ending for this story many people gave me their hate and told me I had no heart, it is normal to write very good NTR stories you must forget about your feelings and heart.
 
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I'm all for a slow paced NTR story. But like many mentioned, this is turning into a love story. That being said, slow paced means building up the story slowly, not trickle down content between AsunaXInoda each month, and wonder off into making Suguha and Alice content.
I also like slow NTR, but I agree with many that the story turns into a story of love
 

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Pretty sure, nobody ever thinks about contraceptives for side characters. Normally, all the sidies get filled up on a daily basis without getting pregnant, it's always a safe day in NTR-Town :sneaky:
it is always a constant that if the stalker YELLS GET PREGNANT then the girl will get pregnant xd reminds me of something I read in mushoku tensei I will put it as a spoiler.

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I also like slow NTR, but I agree with many that the story turns into a story of love
to me, there are two fundamental differences.

1. If the heroine becomes emotionally attached to the scumbag before the so-called corruption, she is happy to jump on his dick. And her so-called boyfriend becomes just a burden standing in the way. in general it has the right to exist but in those stories the guy and the girl are not in a relationship, she is a childhood friend, and he just loves her in secret. (but it's weak NTR)
2. this is standard corruption under any pretext, where there is no emotional connection, but only lust. here I do not need to explain, it is a standard for NTR.

And if we look at the latest update, there is an emphasis on the first option, especially all the events in the gym. and in this case, from the moment of emotional bonding she has lost all mental suffering, any worries, and her boyfriend just prevents her from being with her true love.
Or she's just a whore. But even a whore puts lust first. :sneaky:
 

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to me, there are two fundamental differences.

1. If the heroine becomes emotionally attached to the scumbag before the so-called corruption, she is happy to jump on his dick. And her so-called boyfriend becomes just a burden standing in the way. in general it has the right to exist but in those stories the guy and the girl are not in a relationship, she is a childhood friend, and he just loves her in secret. (but it's weak NTR)
2. this is standard corruption under any pretext, where there is no emotional connection, but only lust. here I do not need to explain, it is a standard for NTR.

And if we look at the latest update, there is an emphasis on the first option, especially all the events in the gym. and in this case, from the moment of emotional bonding she has lost all mental suffering, any worries, and her boyfriend just prevents her from being with her true love.
Or she's just a whore. But even a whore puts lust first. :sneaky:
Your first example isn't weak NTR per se; it's just that it's much harder to make that work as NTR. You need serious writing skills and an understanding how to depicture male AND female characters; otherwise, it's just melodrama.
 
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Your first example isn't weak NTR per se; it's just that it's much harder to make that work as NTR. You need serious writing skills and an understanding how to depicture male AND female characters; otherwise, it's just melodrama.
That's pretty much what I meant, the plots in ntr are usually always average.
But how can I tell that Fujino himself doesn't know how to get Asuna and Inoda together.

Inoda already has super invisibility, which is a parallel reality that sounds and stuff don't pass through.
So in the last update, he gives Kirito an ability that reduces vision. Why? How much more does he have to change everything and everyone for inoda to finally do something with asuna.

I still see the only way - to remake the whole update. expand the massage scene, the next night have liz intentionally teleport kirito to the dungeon separately from asuna and inoda, and the next day do another dungeon conquest with the three of them.

Since in the last update, in the massage scene nothing happens, while kirito alone beats monsters, asuna and inoda just hugging.

Shit in the last update I was at least able to jerk off to the battle with the tree, but here on what, on another handjob.:ROFLMAO:

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At this rate, for Inoda to do something to Asuna, Kirito would have to be paralyzed, Asuna would have to be drunk out of her mind, and Inoda would have to feed her so many aphrodisiacs that she would just fuck everything alive.

Or in the next update I'll have to jerk off to the most lewd thing in hentai and anime - hand-holding:rolleyes:
 
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That's pretty much what I meant, the plots in ntr are usually always average.
But how can I tell that Fujino himself doesn't know how to get Asuna and Inoda together.

Inoda already has super invisibility, which is a parallel reality that sounds and stuff don't pass through.
So in the last update, he gives Kirito an ability that reduces vision. Why? How much more does he have to change everything and everyone for inoda to finally do something with asuna.

I still see the only way - to remake the whole update. expand the massage scene, the next night have liz intentionally teleport kirito to the dungeon separately from asuna and inoda, and the next day do another dungeon conquest with the three of them.

Since in the last update, in the massage scene nothing happens, while kirito alone beats monsters, asuna and inoda just hugging.

Shit in the last update I was at least able to jerk off to the battle with the tree, but here on what, on another handjob.:ROFLMAO:
Yeah, I also had a feeling that there's too much build-up already. I'm not saying that build-up is bad, but he should probably keep something for later parts because right now everything looks extremely forced. By that logic, if all the build-up were applied right now, Asuna would instantly fall
 

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Yeah, I also had a feeling that there's too much build-up already. I'm not saying that build-up is bad, but he should probably keep something for later parts because right now everything looks extremely forced. By that logic, if all the build-up were applied right now, Asuna would instantly fall
Don't worry buddy, I think we'll be jerking off to hand holding in the next update. :ROFLMAO:
 
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Where is it confirmed it was the administrator's doing?
It was never confirmed Administrator helped with the Lustful Night but considering she more or less confirmed she made the drug that caused Kirito to rape Asuna and gave Inoda massage knowledge, people will pretty much assumed every Inoda good fortune is Administrator's interference. That is the danger of introducing a literal Deus ex Machina. Now we doubt everything that happens is Administrator's doing.
 
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It was never confirmed Administrator helped with the Lustful Night but considering she more or less confirmed she made the drug that caused Kirito to rape Asuna and gave Inoda massage knowledge, people will pretty much assumed every Inoda good fortune is Administrator's interference. That is the danger of introducing a literal Deus ex Machina. Now we doubt everything that happens is Administrator's doing.
Feels like a leap in logic at the moment, but I see I guess?
 

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Where is it confirmed it was the administrator's doing?
It was a question from me too ;)

I don't know, does anybody think that it was a good idea to add magic into the real world, anybody? I still hope that this is only a placeholder for now. He can't really be serious about this, can he? :)
 

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It was a question from me too ;)

I don't know, does anybody think that it was a good idea to add magic into the real world, anybody? I still hope that this is only a placeholder for now. He can't really be serious about this, can he? :)
It depends how magic or the administrator is used is what I'd assume. At the current moment it looks like the Administrator's character just likes to fuck around with Kirito and watch him. She mentions that the enlarged dick he got to have is a one-time use and it's an unforgettable experience. I don't know if this means she just wants to fuck with his head, since that situation is probably why he's acting more like a horn dog or questioning his size in that Kitchen scene.

In regards to the Inoda HJ scene, there's a ??? character that people might assume is the Administrator or god thing. The ??? also ends up having a ?!?!?!? reaction to Inoda being able to successfully massage Asuna's feet. So at the moment I have 0 clue as to what exactly is going on with their role, other than messing around with Kirito and being a recollection room.
 
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